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In contemporary society, the information explodes with different kinds of Medias, just like TV, Internet and so on.（信息的爆炸伴随不同的传播方式，句意很奇怪，分成2句，一句说信息爆炸，一句说信息传播的途径增多或者medias that spread of information，还有media 小写吧） If you want to get educated, you can not only get information from the traditional schools, but also from the new media’s. As this reason, many students would like get educated on Internet or TV, （On the other hand, some people argue that +后面你写的东西） but actually many of them are playing games or doing some funny things on study time. Some of them may argue that it is hard to modern people to concentrate on study because of so many temptations. But I think it is just an excuse and generally it is much easier for people to get educated than in the past. My reasons will be substituted under below."

First of all, the information which you want to study is much more （？缺东西吧  larger）than the past. With the popular of the Internet, we （删除we）modern people step into a（an） era which information explodes. For example, in the past if you want to get some information, you have to check books in a few libraries. But now, you can open your computer to study the articles from all over the world.(这个例子和信息的爆炸无关把) Comparing（compared） to the past, now （短的时间状语放在后面）you can obtain really a large quantity of information you want. Obviously it is beneficial （of individual for studying）for your study.

Moreover, you can study the information anytime and anywhere. In the past, if you want(你前面是in the past ,wanted ) to become (get )educated, you have (had)to go to classroom at a certain place, (and )at a certain time with a few teachers. But now(删除) in the twenty-first century, even in free time, you can sit in front of the TV to check dozens of channels to get information or open your computer to have online courses. What really amazing is that nowadays a great many famous universities are offering more and more courses freely to people online. Just like Yale University, in free time, I really enjoy its Game Theory courses and it greatly gives me a large quantity of knowledge and broadens my horizon.

Yet we should take care to(take care to 删除)not be distracted by other useless information. With（the） popularity of the Internet and TV, a growing number of people get addicted to it, especially teenagers. Ignoring the important information, they pay much attention to the games, endless movies, and so on. Apparently it is really not a wise behavior for people who want to get educated to waste time on these things instead of the beneficial courses.

In a word, people are now easier to become educated, due to the substantial information, which can be obtained anytime and anywhere. It is also important for us not be distracted by useless information.

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