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Ithas recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in yourneighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons anddetails to support your answer.
Recently it has been noted that a new movietheater will be constructed in my neighborhood. After knowing that, some peoplearoundthe neighborhood claim that this plan will disturb
theirlife, because every day an increasing number of people will come and go. However,others are fully convinced that a new movie theater will bring them a freshlynew life. From my perspective, I am totally
infavor of it,
believingthat there are far more advantages.


In the first place, since it is so close toour neighborhood it is more
convenience
for people, especially the young lovers, to watchmovies.
Nowadays with a theater far awayfrom my vicinity, every time when some fantastic films are playing, like Harry Potter,we have to take an hour bus to the theater in the city. Worse still, sometimesit turns out our tiring journey is in vain unfortunately when the tickets havebeen sold out. Therefore, if this plan is carried out, greater chances werethat we enjoy the movies at any time.

Further more, we will get one more way torelax ourselves, enjoying more fun. As a matter of fact, few recreational placesstand adjoining my neighborhood except a park. As a result, when weekend comes,people neither stay at home --watching TV or go to the park to seek forentertainment, which are monotonous for long, as to the young in particular. Ina sense, people have another choice
to spend theirweekend with a new movie theater
adjacent myneighborhood.

Apart from the aspect of amusement, a newmovie theater also gives
more opportunities forthe people to earn money. As so huge the project is, needless to say, it willoffer new jobs, such as worker and architect, to the people who are unemployed.What is more, when the theater is established, some sellers and managers arestill needed. In addition, people always will buy some snacks and drinks whengo to or off the theater, which leads to better sales volume for the storesaround the theater.

Though it may break the quiet of my neighborhooddue to it will attract a lot of audiences, as some people mentioned, judging fromdifferent angle, it oppositely enable my neighborhood
much more
lively. Clearly, its benefits outweigh its shortcoming.With a movie theater being built next to my neighbor, not only does it makelife much more colorful but also play a part on the local economic.