towardsBT的作业贴

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2月25号 一战 求狠批~~

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终于能传附件了~~~第一次写作文，完全没有高中时候的感觉了。。。恩。高级词汇&短语完全不会用了，希望接下来的一个月快快提高~加油~!请狠批！！

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按计划今天本来该写作文了。但是同学聚会刚回来。。恩。静不下心来。。还是明天再写吧。。。:dizzy:

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恩。求狠批~

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继续~

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个人意见 互相学习喽

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非常抱歉交晚了。

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8# idealibt
谢谢修改~~确实我的作文感觉写的很苍白，好多地方的表达也是中文翻译过来的，写作文好痛苦。。orz。。

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6# 坏绿的眼睛 thank you~~改的很认真，你的建议我在1号的作文里都有采纳哦~感觉比上一次好多了~~

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不好意思。。。我才看见分组，而且这个作文我没有写= =。。。。木有什么见解。。木有给你改。。不好意思。。

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加油~

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11# sodapeng
我是觉得，自己写没写都可以帮着给别人的作文提些意见的来~~

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One of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork. Which solution would you recommend your classmate should do: to ask you for help or to find a professional tutor for help. Include reasons and details to in your response.

If you need help with your 据说，写作文的时候不要用第二人称，这回让帮你改作文的ets的那班感觉不礼貌。。。，你想啊，你被说有问题要帮忙云云，你爽不爽啊。建议哈schoolwork, I would recommend that you should ask me rather than go to a professional tutor for help since not only I am definitely willing to give you a hand, but also we are able to solve the problem by ourselves.

First of all, although the responsibility of a professional tutor is to give instruction to us, it does not mean that we should go to –-这里用seek for会不会好一些

him or her once we need help.
Too much dependence on others will make us lazy-为什么会crazy啊？
and lose the ability to think independently.
On the other hand-on the one hand 呢？据说，on the one hand 和 on the other hand 是在两个观点对立的时候使用的，所以这里你可以用for one thing ,for another thing, it is not sure that the professional tutor will be always available to you, which is to say that you will have to stand on your own and solve the problem yourself one day in the future. If you ask me for help, we can analyze the problem you are faced with together and I will try my best to help you. It is apparently better to teach a person who is hungry to—这里改成how to会不会好点啊？ fish than to give him some fish-学到了. The ability to get a solution, which we can both develop during the process, is more significant than the solution to a specific problem itself.

What’s more, the tutor is professional in some field, while we could find the solution to the problem as well since the Internet is so convenient today that we can get the information we want at any time and any place. I believe that we could go through the problem as long as we both do all we can. Therefore, there is no reason for us to go to others and bother them when we could manage it ourselves.—这段怎么出现了网络找问题了，题目不是让你在你和教授之间做选择么，这个会不会有点偏了呀。。。

As all the reasons listed above, I can safely draw the conclusion that you should ask me for help than go to a professional tutor if you are confused about your schoolwork.

能力有限啊，一起加油哈。。
WORD不能传 所以楼主辛苦下看啊。。。
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红色-correction