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又开始苦逼的作文路了，大家互相学习，一起努力哈！

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1月26日 独立+综合
独立：不好意思，写成1月25的了，麻烦还是帮忙看看哈，谢谢了
综合：TPO11

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1月27日  独立+综合  
独立：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should help children to do their work or encourage childrento do their work independently.
综合：TPO12

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独立：
Education of children has now caused wide public concern. Asked whether parents shouled encourage children to do their homework by themselves, people may give a diversity of answers based on their individual value systems. Some believe It is a sensive decide to lead the children to accomplish their homework independently, while others claim that people could taste the benifit that parents help and join in the children to do their homework. On balance, I would fundamentally speak highly of that when children to do their homework, the parents should introduce them to finish the homework by their own. Even though, I also concede that parents take part in the homework of children properly is of great value in some realms.

To begin with, homework serves as an crucial factor in reinforcing and testing the circumstance of studying for children. We cannot emphasize the significance of process of doing homework too much. Consider that we need firstly review the acknowledge, then we can think well of the questions to acquire the anwser. Finally, we chould remark the mistake made by us. However, if the children ignore the process and jump to ask for help from their parents immediately, the questions and acknowleges cannot be truly remained in their mind. Then, the homework become nothing but an unuseful paper.For this reason, parents should encourage children to do their homework by themselves.

Furthermore, What is also worth noticing is that by encouraging the children finish the homework by their own, children can well build the excellent personality, especially the responsibility. That means, children, doing their homework independently, can gradually learn how to responsible for themselves and for others. On no account can we ignore the value of responsibility. Coincidently, a general investigation conducted by a recent research team led by Professor Frank of Social Department of the United Nations, discovering that 80.2 percent of managements of corporations approves that it is the responsibility that they treat as the first significant factors, which they consider to employ the job reserachers. Therefore, parents should introduce the children do their homework independently.

Admittedly, there is also no deny that parents, helping children to finish homework, can make children feel the warm of family. Although it contributes greatly to remembership of the family, it may inevitably have negative impacts. Such consequences may include lacking of responsibily, poor studying...In this sense, joining to children to accomplish homework is not without its merits.

Taking above considering into account, I would feel quite comfortable to arrive at the conclusion that it is necessary for parents arouse the children try to finish homework by themselves. Although, certain benefits still exist in the counterpart that we discussed above. However,considering the potential problems it can bring to us, I do not believe it is wise to help children to deal with homework. As for me, I am in favor of the opinion that encouragement from the parents should expressed to children to finish homework independently.

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综合:
The reading passage raises issue that  there are several reasons to illustrate that Austen known as a famous novelists is the subject of a professional painting. However, the statement is strongly weakened by the lecture, which provides drastically different ideas and argues that the evidences provided by the reading are not convincing.   

The professor begins by pointing out that the permiting of Austen's family    does not necessarily mean that  the girl of the portrait is Austen. Actually, when the Austen's family gave the letters, Austen have dead for 70 years. That means, they did not see her for a long time themselves.      This declaration disagrees with the standpoint that  Austen's family approve and concede that  the subject of the painting is Austen, as demonstrated in the reading passage.

Then the professor goes on maintain that  the simialr characteristic of face is little indication that Austen was depicted when she was a teenager.  Consider that Austen had a large family,  maybe the subject of the portait is her family members. According to the reading passage,  however,  the gril of the portrait is Austen since the face resembles the detail of adult Austen.  Therefore, the lectures goes against what is presented in the reading.

Finally, the professor states that  the time is confrost. there is no denying that the time of sold  the painting was older than that when Austen was a teenager.  This point of view also casts doubt on the contents of the reading passage, which considers  Humphrey, who was  hired by Austen family as a professional artist, depicted Austen when she was a teenager.

鸟儿UID: 3238411

You ARE excellent！

Joymoon0307UID: 3145258

Sudden2012-1月27日独立.doc (33.5 KB, 下载次数: 11)

2012-1-28 01:53:40 上传

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改好了~

taybsonUID: 2975013

改完了。没有改思路。就改一些表达和搭配的错误。希望下次自行先在WORD校对。互助提高！~
http://115.com/file/cl3y72pc#Sudden2012-1月27日独立.doc

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1月28日  独立+综合
1月28日 110115NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The main role of the university professor is to educate students rather than to do research.

综合tpo13

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8# taybson

谢谢，我的word 出现了一些问题，所以没纠错，不好意思了。

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7# Joymoon0307
谢谢修改哦

戒食师太UID: 3087167

1月28日的改好了可是我发不了附件啊~权限不够~怎么办

戒食师太UID: 3087167

呼~终于能上传附件了T_T 我给你改的可能有点多，都是个人意见，我水平其实也不怎么样，所以仅供参考~你批判着接受吧~嘿嘿~

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1月30日  独立+综合
1月30日 101031NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because they will lose their friends.综合：TPO14

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13# 戒食师太
你水平很高啊，谢谢你给我改得这么详细，这么好，受益匪浅啊！