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发表于 2012-8-23 12:43:46 |显示全部楼层

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Compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.
The past decade has witnessed the remarkable changes in the urban areas.; As urban areas is regarded as symbol of hi-technology and high salary, more and moremany people think prefer rushing into the urban areas to pursue their dreams, where also has more facilitated medical condition and higher education institution. These things allow helping them people to earn more money to take better care of their families. While others claim that the people live in urban areas are busily engaged in their work that they don’t have enough time to look after their families. I side up with the former issue, the reasons are as follows.

It would be of use to begin by examingWe may with propriety consider that living in urban areas is convenient. As incredible development had taken place in technology, people have more alternatives in transportation. Subway, only accessible in urban area, enables people to arrive their destination in a shorter time. For instance, it may takes people liveing in rural areas 2 hours on commuting everyday by bus which may takes half of time in urban areas by subway and taxi. Thus it people in urban areas can save a lot of time on commuting and spend more time with family members. Furthermore, the shopping mall and the hospital are placing in all parts of the area, it is convenient for the resident to go shopping and take medical treatment.

At the same time it is true to say that in contrast with limited medical facilities of rural areas, those in cities are more advanced. Lacking of specialized doctors and improved equipments, clinics in rural areas can only cure a few aliments, such as flu and cold. Nonetheless, when facing more intricate diseases, the things they can do are resigning themselves to witness the patience to death or send to larger hospital. It is not common for us to hear the news that people’s disease deteriorated or even lead to death after getting medical treatment in rural areas. How can we take care of our family members even if we cannot ensure their security?

Undoubtedly, some rural areas are less polluted, people may do not have to worry about the hazard of eating polluted food, thus stay healthy. In fact, since the constructing of industry production base has been forbidden in urban areas, they moved to the rural areas, which lead a series of environment problem. Because of lots polluted air and water which exhaled the pungent odor have been put away, thesey things are very likely doing to do harm to the people livinge in the rural areas and may lead to more serious problems subsequently.

Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion that people living in urban areas can take better care of their families.

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