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Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement?


In today’s world, it ismore important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly andmake sure that everything is correct.


Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.



I totally disagree with the statement since I think thefinal goal of our work cannot tolerate any mistakes. The reasons are that wecould put our lives in danger, waste our money and jeopardize the quality ofour work due to such mistakes.

In the first place, work quickly and risk making mistakescould put our lives in danger. There are some professions which do require usto work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. For example, an airtraffic controller. His job is to make sure everyone plane could take off andland at airport safely. Any mistakes could lead to a disaster because millionsof people lives, including passengers and crew members, depend on his criticalrole at airport. I once heard a ridiculous story on radio that an air trafficcontroller brought his son to the work place and let the little kid talk to thepilot. Of course with the help from his assistant, he could finish his workquickly. Also it would be fun for his son to have such experience in the tower.But this traffic controller was fired as he risked so many people's lives.

Another reason is that we could waste our money because ofsuch mistakes. Especially in medical research area, everything is expensive. Istill remember the time when I was an intern in a doctor’s lab. One day, I wasgiven an assignment to stain some cells with an expensive antibody. Since Iwanted to finish it quickly, I made a mistake and had to stain the cells again.As a result, I doubled the cost of my assignment. If I worked slowly and plannedwell, I could finish it with one try, which will save a lot of money for thelab.


Last but not least, the quality of our work could bejeopardized if such mistakes happen. In the recent years, Toyota recalled millions of cars becausethere was a mistake in the design of floor mat. Such problem leads to anunexpected acceleration of cars if the floor mat sticks to the gas pedal.Although Toyota spent millions of dollars torecall and repair their cars, the quality of Toyota had been questioned. We already saw asale decline in the market and a ruined reputation after this recall. I knowhow stressful for engineers to finish their projects before deadline. Theremust be tremendous pressure pushing them to work quickly in such a big company.If engineers worked slowly and designed the floor mat correctly, we will neverquestion the quality of Toyotacars.


In summary, we cannot put our lives in danger, waste ourmoney and jeopardize the quality of our work. Therefore we have to work slowlyand make sure that we do everything right.

bluestarsUID: 147183

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