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第一次写作文，3月四号就考试了。。。着急的不行，欢迎大家踊跃来拍砖，让砖头来的更猛烈些吧！

2.13 独立
Movies are worth watching only when they can teach something about realism.




There is a general discussion about whether only when the movies reflect some aspects of reality happened in our daily life are movies worth to be watched. A part of people who devote their whole time to achieve their final dreams of life strongly support this statement, however, the other part of people ,holding the opposite views , including me disagree with it for the following reasons.



First of all, with the increasing pressures come from family、work and friends ,many different relationship, that we have to face to, a method of entertainment is needed to release them,like watching comedic movies. My friend Anne has to spend almost 45 hours in the office,from Monday to Friday ,8a.m to 6p.m, moreover, she has to cook dinner for her families and supervise her children doing their homework after work. As a result, we usually watch a comedic movie ,like 《Mr.Bean》，together ，in which way we can forget those trouble things, for example , taking care of children, incomplete reports about job, temporarily,and have a relax both of mental and body.



Secondly, as some movie producers consider that movies ,like some other kinds of arts ,is a way to impress our ideal life that have not come true, which are often performed idealized to encourage people who are still under suffering of life to go on living. For instant, though love , nowadays, is not the only reason for lovers marry each other, many other conditions,like fortune or family have become the determined factors, people still have a strong wish that lovers should married as long as the love each other, just like the film 《walking across the wind》 has shown to us. Account for this, this kind of films are needed to get the sense of satisfaction and accomplish their undo wishes.

Furthermore , films have a increasing influence to our daily life, the things we learn from movies which reflect reality may come from the dark side of our society, like violence,betrayal, cheat,will make people fell depressed and hopeless, although we can also learn some useful things, for instant ,by watching the documentary film, we know other countries' customs.


To sum up, as what are discussed above, not only the movies that we can learn something from is worth watching, but also those can make people feel relaxing and enjoyable . I consider that watching movies is a method of entertainment which can set us free from pressures rather than the way to learn something realism.

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第一次写托福作文就能写得这么好。楼主大概之前考过GRE吧。。。我觉得楼主的文章写得很好，英文功底很不错。

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辛苦啦~~我还想问你阅读的问题，我做了好久的阅读，tpo ，基本每个都要错在五六个左右。。。郁闷死了，求经验啊~~

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(⊙o⊙)…汗颜啊。。。。。我用了两个多小时才拉出来的。。。

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2.15
越写越觉得跑题。。。灰心
It is easier for people in the past to identify which type of career or job has a secure or successful future.





Currently, there is a growing attitude towards to the job hunting,people tend to feel that there has been an increasing pressure to find a type of job which one with as steady and successful future as before. However, in my opinion, any kind of job, no matter in the past or at now, just has a relative secure and successful future,the most crucial factor that lead to success is the quality of the person who does the job.

First, I should say that only with the ability of perspective can a man own the success whenever the era is. Perspective, what i mean is that a man who can foresee the future of the job about what he is going to do after deliberateing, like foresight, instead of following the prevalent without thinking. Any kinds of emergency will happened suddenly, even though in the past. There we cite a typical example of my parents. They used to get a job in a factory where their parents worked before after they graduate from high school,which was a old patten of job in the past time of China, therefore, because of the sudden revolution in the factory ,they both lost their jobs. In contrast, some of their friends ,in stead of doing the job like their parents, they chose to be a merchant, few people would not chose that in their age, whom I think have a foresight towards to future about the society of China.

The second factor that determine whether a man can have a successful career is the ability to copy with difficulties. The same as we get though our life, we will meet various of problem during every different period, we may also have to face the difficulties that happened during our career. For example, being confronted with financial emergency is a common trouble that will happened in company both in the past and now, how will the manger face with it, negatively or actively? what will he do, try to find methods or escape from the responsibility? Only the person who can face the problem directly and solve them can he finally success.

The last one is the optimistic attitude and strong belief. With the support of these two mental weapons will he definitely keep moving on and get the final success.

So far as what we talk above,to make sure what kind of job can make you a successful career is not the problem of age but qualities of his own ,like the three we talk about in the issue. There is nothing mattered with era,and never contributes the problem of himself to the age.

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2.17
Since the society is developing fast, do you agree that people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people in the past?


In recent years, there is an astonishing proportion of people who feel lack of the sense of happiness and satisfaction, which we can easily get the related information from newspapers and TV programs. Why such a significant number of people feel like that? Did the people live in the past also have the same feeling? Obviously ,the answer is no. Here several reasons may account for this phenomena happened in modern people.

With the increasing development of economy, intense competition , people have to work harder and harder to adapt to the changes happened they may only be paid a relatively low salary which is just enough for everyday life. In addition, because of the inflation which lead to the price keep increasing, especially the price of apartment. Try to think about this, if a person even can not pay for the apartment, without a place to live in ,how will they feel happy and satisfied. People live in the modern society have to pay double or even more efforts to attain something same in the past,let's make a simple comparison: to buy an ice-cream may only cost us 1RMB, but now will be 5RMB,how will they feel balanced.

With the fast development of technology, more and more technical methods has been used to food production,which cause the quality of food,what people have in everyday life,fall down, even some" natural food " is not that natural as they regard. There are some typical examples, one is the milk with chemic element in it lead several newborned babies disabled or even dead, and the other one is vegetables cultivated by fertilization what can stimulate vegetables to grow fast and of course contain chemic elements which can lead cancer. As this kind of things happened continuously, people tend to feel less satisfied with the life now.

Furthermore, account for the development of industry, air pollution has become more and more terrible, which has a bad influence on human health. Climate in winter has become extremely chilly and summer hotter then before, people have to work and live in such harsher circumstance.

To conclude, people live in modern society are suffering from many different kinds of challenge, such as economy, environment, and food, with these pressure they tend to feel tired both mentally and physically. With these troubles how will they feel as happy and satisfied as before.

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(⊙o⊙)…。那个。。怎么上传附件啊？？没找到。。。

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2.18 独立
due to the crowed and busy word we live in, should we expect a person to be polite
to another person.

In recent years, there is a wildly discussion nowadays about that result from the word we live in has become more and more crowed and busy than the days in the past, wether we should still expect people to communicate with each other politely. Up on this situation, some may agree with the statement, in my opinion, however, we should always be polite to anyone, which is the most basic element that a man should have.

Always to be polite is the fundamental rule when people communicate with each other, which we should always spread wildly, no matter under what circumstance. In other words, without the basic polity during people cooperate, people may feel offended, and things always get worse. For example, like during a traffic accident, one happen to brush another car, if both of the drivers can apologize to each other at the first time, then the accident will be easy to deal with, however, what would happen if they both take their own side, and even yell toward to each other roughly, while the only one result is making the road more crowed, no car can past them as they park the car on the road.

Further more, being polite to each other can make things shape up, and people themselves feel happy and healthy without unexpected anger , especially in modern busy word. Efficiency seems to be the first thing that every leader pursuit for. In addition, eople tend to have do more work in one day than before, in contrast , lower wage they are paid. With more pressure and dissatisfaction, if they were offended roughly, it is easily for them to release all of the negative emotion unreasonable to each other, which will definitely slow down the efficiency and lower profit for company, and what was worse is that, there will be a crack while their further team work.

From what we have discussed above, there is no doubt that people should treat each other politely, only with this can we make a better communication without offending,and what is more, enhance our efficiency to make more profit which is the primary job in our crowded and busy word.

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