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2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use

specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Who teach you speak? Who teach you walk? Of course your parents. They teach us a lot before we reach the “real” world. So don not you think parents are the best teachers in our life.

The main reason for my view is that parents’ behavior and emotion will sharp children’s characters. The research showed that those who living in a harmony family are more pleasant than other children. Let’s assume a child live in such great family. His/Her parents are respect the old and have good manners to others. He/She must be a kind person by imperceptibly influence for a long time,.

Parents not only influence us on our characters but also help us in the emotion area.

It is common that adolescents have some emotional trouble. Communicating with parents will become a effectual way because of their rich experiment. Facing our closest person, we are willing to express inner thoughts and emotions. Parents will teach us without reservations as well.

On the other hand, parents are the best teachers in life skills. As far as l am concerned, I learn cooking from my father recently. In summer and winter vacations, I am capable of preparing my lunch myself without parents’ worries. As a girl, l also learn knitting and make-up from my mother. No doubt, they are our best life teacher.

All in a word, parents effect children on education and life greater than any other teachers. They sharp children’s characters, help them in the emotion area and teach them life skills. They are the best teachers.

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