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33 101218NA  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Two people can become good friends even if one of them has more money than the other. ,



Personally, I prefer to the statement that it’s much available and accessible for the two people to be friends even through one of them has more money than the other. My arguments are listed as listed as followed.

Firstly, As the saying goes, “Money can not buy everything, but you can not get anything without it”. People, in the world, pay everything such as food, clothes, tools, PDA and so on by using money, sometimes paid in the way of check and credit cards. As a result,
the people who has more money mean that he or she will have different manners and behaviors in their daily life. For instance, one of my dormitory ember, Jack, whose parents both do some business and he often got a large amount of money every month. On the contrary, John often does some pary-time jobs including working in the college as a newspaper-deliver and selling some daily things in the college because he is from the country and hie father is a farmer.


Secondly, Money not only changes one’s appearance, but makes people different in mind and attitude.
It’s just because Make is poorer than John, thus he have a passion to everybody and in reture we are ready to become his friends. However, John performs very proud and is reluctant to other people even just speaks little to his dorm member, which makes ours feel confused and sometime it might be a argument between us.


To be honest, a friend in need is a friend indeed. A friend with a common interest will fasten the relationship longer and makes it smoother and softer. It does not matter for how much money you are given.

To sum up, I firmly believe two people may not become friends is one person has much more money than the other.
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Personally, I prefer to the statement that it’s much available and accessible for the two people to be friends even through one of them has more money than the other. My arguments are listed as followed
Firstly, as the saying goes, “Money cannot buy everything, but you cannot get anything without it”. People, in the world, pay everything such as food, clothes, tools, PDA and so on by using money, sometimes paid in the way of check and credit cards. As a result,the person who has more money means that he or she will have different manners and behaviors in their daily life. For instance, one of my dormitory members, Jack, whose parents both do some business and he often got a large amount of money every month. On the contrary, John often does some part-time jobs including working in the college as a newspaper-deliver and selling some daily things in the college. Because he is from the country and his father is a farmer.
Secondly, Money not only changes one’s appearance, but makes people different in mind and attitude.
It’s just because Make is poorer than John, thus he have a passion to everybody and in return we are ready to become his friends.(这句有点乱) However, John performs very proud and is reluctant to other people even just speaks little to his dorm member, which makes ours feel confused and sometime it might be a argument between us.

To be honest, a friend in need is a friend indeed. A friend with a common interest will fasten the relationship longer and makes it smoother and softer. It does not matter for how much money you are given.

To sum up, I firmly believe two people may not become friends is(是if吧)one person has much more money than the other.

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