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1/Why do you think people attend college oruniversity?

With the quick development of most realmsin the whole world, people need more and more education to arm their brain andto be competent to the fierce competition in the labor market. Because of that,most students who finish their education in high school determined to continuetheir study to meet the prerequisite of acquiring a job. In my opinion, thereare several reasons to interpret this situation.

First of all, the world is developing in anincredible pace which never occurs in the history. I think it is mainly becausethe Internet that makes the knowledge easier to acquire and spread. High schooleducation seems to be a kind of basic understanding of the world that everyoneshould be capable of it; therefore, it is important to study more. Or in otherword, people attend college or university to exceed the minimum horizon.

Secondly, as the computer and machine canhelp people with lots of work, the qualification of an eligible employee isdemanding. For example, in country like China, because there are so manycitizens, it is next to impossible to find a job with a high school diplomaexcept the jobs which are dangerous and low-paid or unpleasant. The demand of anice job and a high life standard force people to get a higher diploma which isa certification of your outstanding capacity.

Last but not the least, people want tofurther their study in the field that they are really interested in. Highschool education, as what I have said, is the basic education which aims tocultivate people's all-round abilities. But the problem is that every peoplehave his/her own unique interest and they may desire more knowledge about it.The college and university provide them a perfect place to achieve theirambition.

In conclusion, either according to the needof a society or personal interest, with the consensus that knowledge is power,people are inclined to attend college or university.


这是第一篇，感觉很烂，拜托各位了~

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2/The most significant improvement for the quality of people's lives have already taken place?
In the late twentieth century, the most amazing creation is the computer and the Internet, with the rapid improvement in the information technology; therefore, we witness an unbelievable fast economic growth in the last couples of decades. Some people hold the opinion that such significant development will not take place in the future, however, I stand on the other side on this issue.

First of all, it is not reasonable to predict the future only base on the last few decades. Although some intelligent people have great insight into the history and can make a possible prediction of the future, it is hard to foresee what will happen in the next age which is comparatively a very long time. Just like those splendid creations in the history, no one can ever imagine their contours or functions until they are created by some people. Having affected our life profoundly, we start to call them marvels and we naturally think such things will not happen. If we trace the development of science and technology, we will know such things do happen.

Secondly, as far as I know, there are some subjects predicted to change the world in the future, for instance: the new clean energy. To ensure the normal operation of manufactories, humans consume a lot of energy every second. It is fair to expect that the price of ordinary energy like gas and petroleum will increase. Consequently, we need to find some new clean energy to supplant them. If we can make a breakthrough in this field, it will surely be as significant as the creation of computer and Internet.

Another subject is biology. Scientists are making great effort to identify the genome of human-beings. This innovative technology will be applied to cure most diseases and prolong our longevity so that people will live a life with fewer hazards. It is hard to believe, even ridiculous, just as those monumental discoveries firstly being introduced to people.

In conclusion, we should be optimistic about the future, there are so many problems remaining to be handled. As long as humans keep making progress, some big achievements are destined to be made.

第二篇，感觉有点进步，欢迎批改，谢谢帮忙~

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3/The advices from our grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years?

In the last 50 years, a rapid development has been taking place in the whole world. The humans witness a great growth in the economy and numerous breakthroughs in various fields. We are now living in an absolutely different world due to the advanced technology compared to a few decades before. Therefore, some people think that the advices from old people are no longer useful in the new age; however, I hold the opposite view on this issue.

First, old people tend to be steadier than young people. Young people are often ambitious and self-confident when face a challenge, which, on one hand, will have a positive effect on their mission, however, on the other hand, they may also overestimate themselves. Such kind of attitude is hazardous that may lead to failure. Old people can keep calm even there seems to be a lot of profit and will be easily benefited apparently. They will help young people to analyze the situation and make the best tact to avert the potential loss. In most countries, the presidents are often in their fifties or sixties partly because people need a stable government which manifest old people often show a steady character and such character is very precious in the competitive market.

Secondly, old people accumulate more experiences than young people. That is obviously true. In China, there is an old adage says that "the bridges I have walked across are more than the salt you have ever eaten." That adage is often used by old people when they try to persuade young people and remind young people of their comparatively shorter life experience. Although the world is keeping changing, the pattern of change may be constant. At least, there are always something unchangeable what we call them the rules of nature or human society. Old people perceive more of those rules and apply them to their daily life. If young people can acquire the elite of life, they will surely have greater opportunities to succeed.

Last but not the least, old people have more social relationship than young people. One of the most difficult problems for young people is to prove their outstanding capacity to others. Only by being admitted by leaders or people who patron you can you gain a chance to show yourself on the stage and get promoted. Old people can give you a suggestion of the right person or even introduce you to them, thus, you may seize the opportunity in time. In this interdependent society, no one can succeed only by his/her own effort, therefore, cooperation is of great importance and old people will help young people with that.

In conclusion, we young people should never neglect the advices from old people. If anyone still doubts the value of those advices, my essay is the answer.

第三篇，没人帮忙吗，没关系，继续发~话说看到一个叫易改的软件还不错，可以改作文，大家试试吧~

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4/ Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher; others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer?

It is a common phenomenon that every people have their unique methods of study. Among my friends, some of them always learn very carefully and follow teachers mind, on the other hand, others incline to study by themselves because they don't think they can cooperate with teachers efficacious. On this issue, I prefer the former one. That is to have a teacher.

First of all, teachers can help you solve tough academic problems. When you study by yourself, it is hard for you to turn to someone for help. Although you may ask a friend to seek the answer, they may give you an incorrect one. If you try to solve it by yourself and keep thinking about the problem, sometimes it is meaningless, even turn out to be a kind of waste of time. The most optimal approach is to ask a teacher for help, since the problem you meet is often a common one which the teacher is asked for many times, so he/she must know the answer. If it is really an unusual problem, it is still more possible for teacher to give you a solution based on their long time study and research.

Secondly, teachers can prompt your capacity of learning. For instance, when I begin to study chemistry for the first time, I suffered a quite long period. During that period, I didn't know how to learn it. Therefore, on the class, I could hardly know what the teacher was talking about. I spent a lot of time reciting the course of the chemical reactivity; however, the knowledge soon eluded me. Once I even thought to give up on learning chemistry. It was my teacher who helped me at that crucial time to establish my own special plan. And after that, I suddenly found the key to learn chemistry.

Last but not the least, a teacher can provide you with another brand new angle to view on the same issue and make your understanding deeper. Sometimes, you may think that you have already grasped the idea of the writer. However, you still have not touched the underlying spirit which is the real core of the work. If you have a good communication with your teacher, you will harvest a lot since the change of ideas is always instructive and may create a more wonderful idea.

In conclusion, without a teacher, you may miss a precious resource of knowledge. So, take the opportunity, because no one will impart the knowledge to you heart and soul and no one will be willing to help you improve your ability without concerning that you may surpass them after you leave the school.

第四篇，话说难道我用的是单机版寄托家园，大神，你在哪？

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5/Is it better to enjoy your money you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future?

Some years ago, when I was in my high school, I remembered once I had read a report on my politics book about the different consumption pattern between Chinese and Americans. The Chinese incline to save most of their money as a preparation for the future; on the contrary, Americans tend to spend most of their money without any concern about the future. On this issue, I think it is the different living condition that determines the favorable pattern.

If I live in a country like America, I choose to enjoy the money I earn. The reasons are as following. First of all, America has a complete welfare system. I will never be in a shortage of money for a long time on the condition that I am a hard-working person. Supposing that I am unemployed and have no source of money, the local government will help me go through this tough time by providing me with the subsidy. Secondly, medical treatment is very cheap. So there is no need to save the money for the possible disease. Thirdly, the insurance industry is well-developed in America. Even if I worry about the uncertainty, spending a small portion of money buying insurance will handle the problem. Therefore, the optimal choice is obvious to enjoy the money.

On the other hand, living in a developing country like China, saving money is a more sensible choice. The Chinese government cannot afford to supply welfare to 1.4 billion Chinese people. So, Chinese must save money. The usual structure of Chinese family is of five people: grandparents, parents and a single child. The main economic source is from the parents. They are the backbone of the family. The money they save can be divided to the following types: the education expense for the child; the pension for the grandparents (It is apparent that the pension provided by the government is not enough.); the unpredictable affairs like disease and calamity. What is worse, if I want to get married, I must possess a house. But the house price is too high for young people. I have to borrow money from my parents. Thus, I can barely enjoy the money but saving them.

The living condition may not be the only factor that affects people to make a determination whether to save or enjoy the money. Some additional factors like the amount of the salary, the prevalent idea in the local area and even the religion may also count. All in all, people should manage their money carefully and reasonably which is a prerequisite for a wonderful life.

第五篇，坚持就是胜利~

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6/Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: being creative, rather than planning carefully will come up with the best solution to a problem?

It is a common phenomenon that we get into some troubles either at work or in spare time. Different people hold different view on how to handle it. Some people think to come up with a creative idea is more efficacious, while others argue that a good plan is more necessary. On this issue, I incline to choose the latter one.

In fact, most problems we meet are not tough to solve. Or in other words, solving those problems does not require a superior intelligence. What really matters is the process, a suitable plan ensure we to do the work one step by one step in an orderly way. For instance, once my teacher gave me a task to decorate our classroom as the New Year was coming. I gathered some of my friends to help me. The first thing that reflected in my brain was to divide the work. So, we had a brief meeting to discuss several problems. After the meeting, every member in my group got their own duty and then we separated to do our own job. For example, I was responsible for buying balloons, ribbons and other trivial things. Completing the preparation, next step was to cooperate with the group to decorate the classroom. And the final step was to check the details and make some improvements. Due to the plan, the whole process was running smoothly and fast. That is a manifestation that proves the significance of a good plan.

What is more, being creative in solving problems may bring about some other problems. A creative idea means a brand new idea that no one has ever attempted. Therefore we must take the hazard of using it into consideration. I am not to say that we should forbid the attempt of innovative ideas and I am not a conservative person. My real perspective is to use it carefully. If we are trying to devise a product or software, obviously, we need the property of being creative. However, we need patience not creativity to solve a problem. There are numerous examples that people thought they found a new approach or a shortcut, but it eventually led them to failure. I once heard a story about an architect. When he tried to design a bridge, he got a problem that the draft on his blueprint was limited to the finite materials. Subsequently he brought with a creative idea that was to build the bridge more flat so that he did not need some extra materials. However, not until the bridge was completed did he know the water in the river would rise up in the summer. As you imagine, the tide soon destroyed the bridge. If he acquired some extra materials, such things would not happen.

In conclusion, although being creative is an advantage for everyone, the ability to judge the situation is more crucial. Therefore, next time when you meet a problem, make a plan first, and then try to be creative.

第六篇，孤寂地前进吧~

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7/People should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place?

I have lived in a certain community since I was born. My friends with whom we played soccer and basketball after school since I was in primary school still live here. However, I don't think I will keep living in the fixed place for my life. People should have a change in order to make their lives more brilliant.

Personally, the reasons why people insist to live in one place are as following. First, their income constrains them in the particular place. Most people select to live a stable life when they gradually become old. Therefore, they are not willing to change a job which is a prerequisite to move to another place. And they may get less pension if they change a workplace before they are about to retire. Second, the emotion established with a certain place counts a lot. For instance, my grandparents chose to live in their hometown rather than live in a big city with me, although the living condition in this small village is far worse than the city. They are more familiar with cultivating crops and feeding animals. They doubt if there is anything they can do when live in the city. Third, a famous adage in China goes that "when your parents are still alive, never should you go far away". So the distinctive culture or religion may affect people on the determination as well.

On the other hand, some people like me incline to experience different lifestyles which, I think, is quite important for young people. If you major in one specific subject, sometimes it may create a bias when you evaluate some issues. In the same way, if you live in the same place all of your life, due to the identical culture circumstance; you will never cognize things on another angle. Actually, I think that is how stereotypes form. The labor market is now acquiring people who are creative. Having more various life experiences surely will provide you with more inspirations. Writers can prove it. They often travel in the world to get inspirations, or else they may have nothing to tell. Moreover, living in different places can promote your social abilities. For example, how to communicate with strangers and how to quickly adapt to a new environment. And also you will learn some life skills.

In conclusion, take the time to experience diverse lives as we are young, or we will never have the opportunities once getting old. And it will be the best memory for you.

第七篇，此时无声胜有声~

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8/Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy your friendship?

We might always meet some problems about friendship. Sometimes it seems to be tough to solve and even makes us in dilemma. The major reason is our concern about its destruction of the precious friendship. However, in the case that my friend may make a mistake, I will definitely fulfill my duty to warn him/her of the adverse situation.

First, I think that is what a real friend must do. I can sacrifice for my friends, even the cost is our friendship, as long as it provides them with the optimal situation. Therefore, taking the risk of destruction of friendship is worthy. For instance, when I was in middle school, one of my best friends, with whom we played basketball every day, developed a habit of smoking. He might think it was very cool and a symbol of being mature. However, I knew this would make an adverse effect on his growth. Obviously, smoking is harmful to his health and also it may lead him to a wrong way which may ruin his life. So, I told him of my opinion and advised him of stopping smoking although he was apparently unhappy to hear that. But as what I have said, that is what a true friend should do.

Moreover, I am a person who prefers direct way than an indirect way. I often ask my friend to tell me their genuine thoughts in order to make our relationship simpler. Because it is such a boring and complex thing to guess other people's opinions. Hiding your heart to your friends is not a good approach to maintain a friendship in a long term, as the dissent accumulates more and more, it will finally explode one day. When that happens, it is already too late to make compensation. In the same way, as mistakes accumulated, it will lead to a disastrous circumference. That is to say, in a long period of time, you are actually ruining your friends.

Last but not the least, good communication will possibly bring it to the best situation. Both your friend cognize his/her mistake and the friendship perpetuates. As the example I give in the former paragraph, it did take some time for my friend to acknowledge the mistake, but he gave up on smoking after several weeks. Also, he trusted me further than before.

In conclusion, never hesitate to tell your friends they are doing something wrong, with effective social skills, your friends will ultimately choose to follow your suggestions and it will also promote your friendship more stable.

第八篇，回到最初~

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9/People buy things not because that they need them but because other people have them?

Strictly speaking, things we buy are both utterly due to our need and our desire to follow others. That is just like the two sides of a coin.

On one hand, we buy luxury goods in order to show off or as a symbol of the elitist. We buy things other people have to keep pace with the age or because of other reasons. But, that can also be seemed as a need of psychological compensation to fulfill the desire. On the other hand, there is scarcely something produced for a single person or just one piece. So, we are all buying things that others may have. However, we still can distinguish which factors count more in the consumption.

Some things we buy are apparently because of our need. For example: the daily necessities, drugs and food. No one deems this kind of bargain as an approach to show off.

On the contrary, there are truly something we purchase that may be considered to follow the fashion whether it is the fact or not. For instance, when the IPhone 4s was on sale in China, it brought about an unimaginably high demand. Hundreds of people waited in a long queue in front of the Apple retail store since the day before it was on sale. Although each person was constrained to buy only two IPhones, the entire inventory was sold out merely for a couple of hours. A research was conducted to study this phenomenon. It found that over half of the people who bought IPhone actually didn't need it at all. They might already have a cell phone and it still operated well. Even some people never use the functions of advanced technology that IPhone supplies, they use IPhone just like a common cell phone which is pretty cheaper. So, why they buy the IPhone? The answer is that owning a product made by Apple is a fashion. When people communicate with others by IPhone, they will enjoy other people's admiration; at least they themselves do think so.

Comparing these two kinds of consumption, I hold the opinion that, for average people, they buy most things because they need them. As the following factors lead to such situation: money, quantity and types of the goods and the rational consciousness. In conclusion, my suggestion is that we should try our best to be a rational consumer.

第九篇， 还是没人~

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10/Getting advice from friends of an older age would be more valuable than from friends your own age?

Good advice may help us go toward to a brilliant future, while an awful one may trap us in a rather tough situation. Therefore, carefully choosing the advice is very crucial. Personally, I incline to believe in the advice from friends of an older age. The reason is as following.

First of all, our friends of an older age basically have more experience. They know better how to face a problem or challenge. When I was a freshman in my college, I was urged by my parents to make friends with senior students or junior students. Initially, I felt useless and embarrassed to do so; however I still got to know some people. Afterward one thing had totally changed my attitude toward my parents' suggestion. I think that most people who come to a different locale will need some time to adapt to it. This is a disturbing process for me because I lost myself and I got confused about what I should do. Owing to the help of a friend who was a senior student, I really do not know whether I could go through this tough period. He gave me plenty efficacious advices including how to manage time, how to enact a plan and how to become a superior student. Obviously, such advices can be only gained from friends of an older age.

Moreover, friends of an older age can provide different views on the issue. In contrast, our peers are the people who are the same age as us so that it is pretty possible that they have the same status as us. Hence, their advices can be identical to our individual opinions. That makes it meaningless to listen to them. For instance, last year, my school ran a programme of exchange students. I hesitated whether I should enroll in the programme, so I sought advices from a friend of my age. Unfortunately, although he was earnest to help me analyze the situation, what he said was exactly what I had thought earlier. So, I had to waste nearly one hour to listen to his futile advices. Even now, I still wish that I should have directly skipped to advices provided by my friend of an older age,

Last but not the least, elder friends are more willing to help us. There is fierce competition among us and our peers. They tend to be reluctant to impart information to us especially when we are at work. However, elder friends will be less concern about losing their advantages since they have already proved their abilities.

I have to clarify that it never means you should utterly neglect advices from your peers. You and your peers may be more congenial and know each other deeper, so their advices are more likely to suit you. In conclusion, we should listen to various advices and cautiously select one. Please remember it is we ourselves who make the final determination.

第十篇，虽然我写得很慢，但我坚持在写~

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11/Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer?

I started to love travelling since the first time my parents took me to Beidaihe to enjoy the holiday. It is a very beautiful coastal city. Afterwards, I have travelled a lot of famous scenery spots. Accumulating much experience, I find that I prefer to travel alone. The reasons are as following.

First of all, I value the chance to be free. I like travelling partly due to living in a city like Beijing for a long time will make me feel exhausted. The fast pace of modern life and the fierce competition in the job market nearly smother me. Therefore, I need to change my life style for every certain period to lessen my pressure. A lonely tour of another place is the best choice. I feel completely free after abandon all the bother in the big city. Maintaining a good social relationship is a prerequisite in the society and sometimes it is extremely disturbing. To be genial to everyone, I have to abandon the freedom of insisting on my own way, or in other words, nonconformity. However, travelling alone give me the chance to make decisions utterly by myself. Whenever I want to go, whatever I like to eat is none of other's business.

Moreover, some sites are better to travel alone. A scenery spot called Guilin is famous for her unique landscape. Once you come to Guilin, its green hills and clear water will perpetuate in your memory. This is a place that we should travel alone. The charm lies in the combination of the scenery and your own mood. You sit in a boat and admire the outstanding work of nature, listening to the flow of water and looking at the sway of trees on the river bank, losing yourself in this picturesque scenery. Your heart is peaceful and you are deep in thought in the silence. At that moment, I am sure that no one expects a disturbance from other people. Actually, many poems are composed in such environment in Chinese history and even now we are still intoxicated by those beautiful verses.

Last but not the least, staying in solitude can teach us to be independent. If you are still a young person and live with your parents, have you ever thought whether you can live a high quality life by yourself? That means you must deal with most things individually, for example: making food and washing clothes. No one is waiting at there to help you. Obviously, travelling alone can force us to learn those basic life skills. Those skills are of great significance that you can never obtain from textbooks.

In conclusion, if you are tired of the stressful modern life, if you want to keep a peaceful mood or if you wish to enrich your life experience, travelling alone is the first option.

第十一篇，两岸猿声啼不住，轻舟已过万重山~

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12/Which kind of universities do you prefer, universities whose graduates can find good jobs or universities where there are famous professors?

Many factors may affect our choice of a university. Some people apply for a university that guarantees a promising career, others focus more on the professors' fame. Personally, I incline to choose a university where there are famous professors. The reasons are as following.

First of all, I am eager to achieve academic goals rather than a high income. When I was in high school, there was a program about marketing in the radio on every weekend and I never missed a single episode. It was mainly the records of some speeches given by famous economists in universities. I found their speeches were very humorous and appealing, I learned some basic theories as well. Since then, I determined to major in economy. I made great effort to be finally admitted by the university which one of the famous professors worked at there. The classes taught by those famous professors are really instructive and help me promote my academic horizon. At present, my dream is to continue my study after undergraduate. I hope one day I could be a professor in economy, so I care little about the occupation.

Moreover, job is only one element in our life, plenty other elements are also crucial to your life. Therefore, if we study in a university just for a good job, we lose too many meaningful things in life. Famous professors are usually the elites in the society. They can teach us more than what the textbooks require us to know. For example, last semester, I took a class in psychology. The teacher is very famous; so many students audit his class. He taught not only the theories of psychology, but also how to apply them into our real life. It turned out to be very helpful for me. I think I will always remember his suggestion to keep confident. He told us that whenever we felt nervous or stressed, stood in front of a mirror, shouted at the person in the mirror “You can do it!". That is quite useful and I practice it every time before I give a presentation to my classmates.

Last but not the least, universities that ensure you a good job may be because some new and prospective industry is appeared in the job market such as the information technology in 1990. It brought a big shock in the whole world. Then, many people chose to learn computer science in spite of their real hobby. Such things would scarcely happen on me because I will always insist on what I am interested in. As the adage goes that "interest is the best teacher", it is hard to believe that someone will succeed in the field that he/she does not like it at all. I think such person is certainly unhappy either at school or at work. On the contrary, you will enjoy yourself in learning what you like from famous professors.

In conclusion, do not concern too much about the job. If you are a hard-working student and if you are outstanding enough, you are sure to be employed by a good company whatever the university is. However, only those famous professors can lead you to success in a long term. That is the promotion of your life.

第十二篇，最长的一篇，周末休息一下~

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13/Hire famous teachers or improve the facilities?

When it comes to the issue whether universities should hire famous teachers or update the facilities, different people hold different views. Some people claim that good teachers directly improve students’ abilities; while, on the contrary, others think that advanced facilities will allow students to study more efficient. In my opinion, good teachers are more crucial for learning.

First of all, it is the teacher that has the most significant effect on students' study. When I take a course that the teacher is not very good at teaching, I will soon lose my interest in the class or even the whole subject. Then, I just learn it by myself and never attend the class any more. Because I don't think the teacher can tell me more than what I can learn by myself. On the other hand, a good teacher can always arouse my enthusiasm for the course. Last semester, one of my friends told me that the teacher who taught her game theory was quite humorous and learned. Therefore, I determined to audit the class. It turned out that the teacher was really charming. He could make tough things easy to understand and boring things more interesting. Although I did not enroll in the course, I spent much time studying it and I read some relative materials as well. That is the importance of good teachers. However superior the facilities are, they could hardly take the place of teachers.

Furthermore, we seldom use those advanced facilities. Sometimes we even use them in an improper way. For instance, there is an observatory in my high school. But never had we used it or enter in it. Actually, such facilities are not intended to be used by students. The aim to construct them is to show off for the visitors and enhance the school's reputation. Also, some facilities initially to help students study turn out to be used in other ways. The computer is a good example. In my school's library, there are scores of computers. In the information age, we can acquire plenty resource from the Internet which can promote our understanding. And that is the reason why my school provides us with computers. Unfortunately, the result is that most of us use the computer to download movies or games. It even has a negative effect on us.

Finally, I want to clarify that I never mean the universities should totally ignore the update of facilities. The fundamental facilities are also important, such as a spacious and well-decorated dormitory. I live in a small dormitory with other five people. So, it is next to impossible for us to study in the room. I indeed put a table on my bed so that I can own individual space.

In conclusion, it is surely the best that universities can hire famous teachers as well as update the old facilities. If universities cannot afford both of them, it is more reasonable and efficacious to hire famous teachers in the first place.

第十三篇，重新上路~

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14/It is more enjoyable to buy a new technological device when it becomes available than to wait until many people have owned it?

With the rapid development of technology, the update speed of technological devices is becoming faster and faster. Some people incline to purchase the new goods immediately when they are on sale; on the contrary, others are more patient to await feedback from users. On this issue, I think the time to buy the devices depends on their unique types.

Some technological devices are produced as a symbol of fashion, such as iPhone and iPad. One night before the iPhone 4s was formally on sale in China. It was reported that hundreds of people waited in front of the apple store in Beijing. Obviously, people who stood in the queue suffering from the cold and windy day wanted to own it at the earliest time. And they thought such effort was worthwhile, because they enjoyed it. Moreover, research revealed that over half of the people who had an iPhone or iPad did not know how to use its advanced functions. In other words, although they own what are deemed as the most creative products, they just use its fundamental functions which can be utterly achieved by a cheaper and older product. Therefore, they buy such products because they focus on fashion. If many people have owned them, it will no longer be fashionable. Then, the value of buying it decreases. That is why the fervor occurred.

However, it is more reasonable to some technological products after a period of time. Last semester, my laptop finally broke down. I was very anxious to buy a new one for the reason that it is very inconvenient without a computer, as I always have to search some materials through the Internet. I took a fancy to a latest product. Just before I clicked on the button to ensure to buy it, my mother who is an expert on computer stopped me and gave me her own suggestions. She told me that I should buy the products which were proved to be of high quality. It turned out to be very precious suggestions. I chose another relatively old type of computer and it works well until now. In order to learn some knowledge of computer skills, I often browse some relevant websites. I was really shocked by some people's unfortunate experiences. They were urged to buy the latest products, but there existed some bugs. Hence, the company had to recall all the products. And it truly made the consumers unpleasant.

In conclusion, we should make a different determination based on the specific product. If the company can always guarantee the quality of goods, if you want to keep up with fashion and have little concern about the risk of loss of money, then, buy it as quickly as you can. Or else, it is more sensible to wait for feedbacks.

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