由G转托。。迷茫求助TOT

moral0506UID: 3234539

2月18号刚考完G，成绩还不错，于是对托福开始有点掉以轻心……总觉得阅读和基本都能理解，但是做题依然会错，口语不知道该怎么给自己评分，写作延续了G作文里废话太多的毛病，想改得精炼些反倒不敢下笔了。。感觉各种忐忑啊。。求助TOT

贴两篇TPO24的作文吧。。求指教啊……

综合写作
As is stated in the lecture given, there are sound reasons to remain skeptical about the remains of Tyrannosaurus rex, which is said to contain materials representing blood vessels, red blood cells and collagen matrix.
To start with, it is not sound to claim the soft and flexible substance as blood vessels and no something else. Actually, many other factors can account for the existence of that matter. For example, when the T. rex died, it is probably that bacteria continued to live in its body and form hollow areas in the same time. They leave such traces and the soft and flexible substance can be remnant of bacteria colonies.
In the second place, the spheres obtaining iron cannot be fully seen as remains of red blood cells. The contradiction is obvious since such iron-contained spheres are popularly found in animals in the same place where T. rex is found, even including other primitive animals that do not have red blood cells anyway. Therefore, the spheres may originate besides the red blood cells.
Last but not the least, the collagen matrix needs to be proved more overall as well. In the perspective of nowadays science, collagen is never found in organism who lived more than 100,000 years ago, which possibly indicates how long can the collagen last. But the fossil of T. rex dates back to 70 million years old, which makes the remains of collagen highly improbable. The more plausible explanation could be that the collagen is from other more recent sources, such as the skin of researchers.

独立写作

Some people argue that encouraging children to take a part-time job is among the best ways to help them equipped for adult life. As far as I’m concerned, though working part-time may take up certain portion of children’s spare time, the benefits still overweigh its drawback significantly.

To start with, when taking a part-time job, children can understand financial issues in a more concrete way. For example, when a child spends the money earned by his parent, he may be wasteful sometimes. But if he earns every penny with his own effort, such as cleaning dishes in a restaurant, sending newspapers to neighbors and being a tutor, he will be likely to cherish the money and start to manage the budget more carefully.

In addition, through working part-time, children can extend curriculum learning and broaden their horizon. For example, some architecture students are engaged in part-time internship in some relevant companies. Accordingly, they can experience through the whole process of designing, building and using the architecture, which will positively affect their overall understanding of the major.

Furthermore, by taking a part-time job, children can meet people of all walks of life and enhance the possibilities of making new friends. For instance, one of the famous Japanese architect met her companion when working in a studio while studying in college. It is probable that one will meet someone sharing the same hobbies and interest, who would make contributions to a more fabulous and attractive social life.

In short, there’s no denying that taking a part-time job is a good choice for most students. Although the jobs might be tiring and time-consuming to some extent, above all they can benefit children by providing a circumspective financial comprehension, broader and supplementary knowledge and opportunities to develop new friendship.

Irvin21UID: 3182550

我也是2 18的G，不过感觉基础不是很好，报了4月的T，我都感觉有点紧

moral0506UID: 3234539

2# kuaido
两个月多吧~4月底的那次。。

moral0506UID: 3234539

我也是啊。。现在做了3套TPO，觉得波动挺大的。。 3# Irvin21