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发表于 2012-4-6 13:11:01 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-4-7 20:55:48 |显示全部楼层
4月7日 110415 comparing to hiring famous teachers, school should pay more attention to improve facilities.
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Every time I come to a school , what attracts me most is the education resources such as libraries or laboratoties. This is the first impression of an education institution. Although it is important to have eminent professors, school had better focus on the refining facilities.
First of all, if the facilities is not up to the standard, teachers , even professors can not show their capability to their students. The laboratory is vital for a chemistry teacher and linguistic lab plays an important role in the course of language. For example, my computer teacher has a good reputation in my school, but recently he faced up with some troubles on teaching us computer skills. The computers in school are out-dated, so he can not teach us some useful techniques which are popular nowadays. This leads the faculty of school to knowing the importance of up-dated facilities.
Second, study depends on the students to take advantage of education equipments. It does not rely on the so-called excellent teachers. Student should show their intiative in learning. Take me for instance, I always reading books in my school library after class. There are a much wider range of reading material than other school . These abundant resourses benefit me a lot during my study. Thanks to my school’s devotion to education facilities, I can learn much better than before.
What is more, even if reputed teachers pass on lots of knowledge to us, it is too busy for them to meet students. My teacher, Prof. Yang is an expert on international law. He often attends some international forums. So he is occupied with those meeting, and he does not have time to solve our problems after class. This proves that it may be not a good thing that schools introduce those busy teachers although they are very famous.
In a nut shell, compared with hiring experienced teachers, education facilities are pre-requisite of a school which can attract many outstanding students.

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发表于 2012-4-8 12:29:05 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-4-9 17:55:28 |显示全部楼层
4月9日1100430 do you agree or disagree with the following statement it is important to know about what is happening around the world, even if it doesn’t affect your personal lives.

Every day I get up, the first thing I do is to open my computer to scan the news online. I believe it necessary to be aware of what is taking place all over the world. Although some of information will not influence my own life, I still have a keen eye on it for several reasons.
Every time I browse the news on my screen, I always obtain the information which widen my horizons more or less. Perhaps, I am used to knowing what is happening around world on my twitter or facebook. A few days ago, I saw a video called ‘kony 2012’ which described how a leader of a rebel army in Africa to kill the opponents, even to train the innocent children to be soldiers. The maker of this video hopes those who saw it to share this idea that he hope for peace with others. Although I am not a person who lives in Africa, I think caring public events is the duty of a good citizen with responsibility. Various kind of new open my eyes towards the world, which help me to be more knowledgeable.
In addition, sometimes such things seemingly unrelated to my daily life actually indirectly affect my interest. When I was junior at college, I had not the plan to go abroad, so I ignored the information on education information of foreign countries. Now I was looking for a job , but the company require some overseas experience. I doesn’t care these news at all . If I had paid attention to the trend of study abroad, maybe I would make a different choice at present. So it is crucial for us to notice the newest report around world, which maybe benefits us to make some decisions in our lives.
In conclusion, as the technology advances a lot nowadays, we always use some updated media such as twitter or facebook, and we should concern about what is happening on the earth. Click our mouses, and we will have a grasp of the latest trend and information all over the world.

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Everyday after I get up, the first thing I do is toopen my computer to scan the news online. I believe it isnecessary to be aware of what is taking place all over the world.Although some of information will not influence my own life, I still have akeen eye on it for several reasons.
Every time (
建议用Whenever) Ibrowse the news on my screen(去掉), I always obtain theinformation which widens my horizons more or less. Perhaps, I am(have got) used to knowing what is happening around world on my twitter orfacebook. A few days ago, I saw a video called ‘kony 2012’ which described(describes) how a leader of a rebel army in Africa (an African country)to (去掉to) kill theopponents, even to (去掉to) train the innocent children to be soldiers.The maker (producer) of this video hopes those who saw (watch) it to sharethis idea that he hope for peace with others (意思不够明确). AlthoughI am not a person who lives (do not live) in Africa,I think caring public events is the duty of a good citizen withresponsibility (duty重复). Various kinds of news like this open my eyes towards the world, which helpme to be more knowledgeable.
In addition, sometimes such things seemingly unrelated to my daily lifeactually indirectly affect my interest (?). When I was junior atcollege, I had not (did not have) the plan to go abroad, so I ignoredthe information on education information of foreign countries. Now I waslooking for a job, but the company (companies,
最好限定那些公司for example,the companies in my field) require some overseas experience. I doesnt
(do not) care these news at all. If I had paidattention to the trend of study abroad, maybe I would make a different choiceat present. So it is crucial for us to notice the newest report around world,which maybe benefits us to make some decisions in our lives.
In conclusion, as the technology advances a lot nowadays, we always use someupdated media such as twitter or facebook, and we should concern about what ishappening on the earth. Click our mouses, and we will have a grasp of thelatest trend and information all over the world.



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发表于 2012-4-10 15:07:50 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-4-11 17:31:04 |显示全部楼层
4月11日 101211 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People think it is more enjoyable to work three days a week for long time than work five days a week for shorter time
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Many people work hard every day just to support their families. So working hours plays an important role in their lives. From my point of view, it is more enjoyable to work five days a week for shorter time than work three days a week for long time.
First of all, the whole work pressure can be divided into five days rather than three days. Those people who works long hours within one or two days are not good-built. They can not load all quantity of a week in three days. Take a simple example , if the boss requires the typist to type 500-page meeting notes within 3 days, it will be a tough task for him or her to complete. He or she will stay up late everyday in order to complete all work. This situation can not lead happiness or relax to the worker.
Second, some one may say that if workers finish all assignment the leader gives within three days, they will have more time to relax themselves such as having a long-term holiday. However, the fact is opposite. My friend is a computer programmer, and he is used to invent a new program within three days or even shorter time. He continuously works for several hours without sleeping. When he accomplishes the whole project, he will want nothing but to have a good sleep. So he have slept for a long time within the rest of four days. He has not the time to accompany his girl friend ,even he is reluctant to communicate with his parents. He does not lead a happy life in this working-schedule. He would rather work average hours in five days.
In a nut shell, it seems nice for workers to carry out the one-week project within three days, but this plan will relieve laborers of pressure, even will add more load for them. So I firmly hold that it is more reasonable for people to work five days a week for short time.

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发表于 2012-4-11 22:51:47 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-4-12 18:59:42 |显示全部楼层
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At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Althoug it is of many pleasure to play basketball or volleyball on spacious gym, classes and libraries are more worthwhile to be supported by finance. Because the main aim of universities is to develop good habits of study, more fund should be put in the study fields.
First of all, it is a waste of money to make various sports and social activities. Students in colleges focus on the courses after all. So there are fewer students to attend these activities such as sports meeting and musical concert. For example, my school invested 5000 dollars to hold a dancing party on christmas day. It was really disappointing that only 39 persons to enjoy it. The fruit prepared for the party was thrown into the rubbish bin, which leads to a great waste of money. I do not like the way school emphasis the importance of activities.
Second, since the amount of fund is so small given by government that activities should not share the financial aid with classes and libraries which help students a lot. Take St.Jonny college for instance. Every year, it has a tight budget on whole expenses. So the officials in school are carefully to spend money on each project. The libraries always play an important role in daily lifes. So campus needs up-dating the new range of books for students to read. Consequently, the extension of gym usually gives way to this project. It is not possible for officials to balance all the aspects of develpoment in the college.
Unlike the libraries and classes, social and sports activities do not require too much money investment. For example, there is a popular table tennis competition every term in our university. It does not cost much money to hold. It is said there are lots of volunteers to regulate the event, and this activity attacts lots of student to take part in.
In a nutshell, it is wise to invest the money on the facilities of classes and libraries.

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发表于 2012-4-23 19:55:11 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas.

Nowadays, many graduates wear famous-brand suit to have the interview meeting. Although there is a trend that many people pay more attention to their dresses , coming up with a good idea still occupies an important position when people are eager to be successful.
First of all, good looks and decent clothes can be copied by any one else, but good ideas vary from person to person. Inner character plays a prominent role in success, and it also is unique. Nobody can steal one’s thoughts from his or her mind. Therefore, success always falls down to those who take advantage of their minds to give some ideas which lead to the success. For example, although my colleagues always follow my manager’s dress style , they can not replace her in the company when my department meets with some troubles. My manager Lily is the heroine in my eyes because she can deal with almost most of problems at work. This reveals that the capacity of solving the difficulties outweighs one’s looking or dresses.
Second, although beauty or handsomeness leaves a good impression on others during first meeting, success is a long-term outcome which needs enduring strengths. For example, there are two interns in my corporation. Benny is more handsome than Jay while Jay is more hardworking than Benny. The first time my boss met Benny, and he was attracted by Benny’s appearance. So he gives a chance for him to help arrange the company party. However, Benny was always late for work and Jay usually assisted him to prepare for the party such as buying flowers or booking a site. On that party-day, Benny was late as before while Jay gave my boss’s a surprise because every guest received a bunch of rose as Benny’s plan. Later, Jay was promoted as a formal employee but Benny left . As the saying goes, A distant journey tests the strength of a horse and a long task proves the character of a man. Eventually, the ultimate success is obtained by those who are good at using their wits.
As a nut shell, good-looking and decent wearing can not accomplish the task. Only considerate ideas can one succeed.

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