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发表于 2012-3-17 20:08:52 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they livein big cities.
Even though, I don’t think wither if my family do live in thecountryside a can give trouble and difficulty to take care of them. Because itis depends on how much time I can sacrifice for my family. However, I totallyagree with the statement that people can take care of their family better whenthey live in big cities than in the countryside.

        Firstly, it isconvenience that made me think I can take better care of my family in the bigcities. It is true that in the big cities have more convenience than thecountryside, such as the public transportation systems. For example, if my momwas sick and we don’t even have a car, we can still take the subway or the busto the hospital without any trouble. For somehow, convenience on traffic is avery important element that big cities have but except the countryside.

        Secondly, it is thebig cities’ hospitals that contain better medical surgery that can help metaking better care of my family. It is believed that better medical resourcesare always gathering in the big cities, and it is also an undeniable reason whyeverybody from the countryside wants to move in to the big cities. Because wantedto have better medical treatment. For instance, when there is an explosion ofdisastrous infection disease in a country. Always the big cities have betterway of controlling the spread of the disease. On the other hand, our familylife is secure when they live in the big cities which have better medicaltreatment.

        Third, it isvarious beneficial facilities that the big cities contain to make families better.Furthermore, better education systems, better secure of the society and saferarchitecture buildings for live can easily found in the big cities. For example,safer house found in the big city mostly have safer architecture structure thanhouse built in the country side, also there are security to guard my home forme when I’m leaving the house. There for, it is much safer for the family tolive in the big cities.

At last but not theleast, I agree with statements that living in the big cities have morecapability to take care of my family. First is because of it is because moreconvenience in transportation. Second it is the better medical treatment to securemy family’s health. Last is because better facilities and security for whichmake me think live in the big cities can help me take better care of my family.
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发表于 2012-3-17 20:11:36 |只看该作者
Do you agree or not? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.


To consider thatstudying hard in the school is success in a future job, is being accept by mostof the people. Because with knowledge, can we have more technics or skills toapply the job. However, I totally agree that people have the ability to relatewell to people have more chance for success in a future job than those studyinghard in school.

Firstly, it isbecause the ability relate well to people create an opportunity for them expandtheir vast internet relationship in the future. In the other hand, it alsomeans there are lots of helpful friends that can help mewhen I have any problems. For example, if one of my friend is work in thecompany I wish to work in. Maybe my friend can help me enter that company bythe relationship he has in that company. In addition, it is believed that agood relationship can take an important place in the future.

Secondly, it is becauseof those have the ability to relate well with people are more easily to knowhow to see other’s emotion through their face. What is more important is, withthis ability can easily get away from lots of troubles. For instance, if myboss is in a furious mood and trying to get someone in trouble. A person likeme that knows how to see people’s emotion through its face can easily tell frommy boss face that it is better not to do something make his temper higher. Therefor, I well work harder on my job, or maybe I can try to flatter around my bossto bet for my opportunity.

Thirdly, forthose who know how to interact well with others, most know in what time do whatthings can make others happy. My meaning is, with this little cheering skillscan help me cheer up others including my boss. For example, sending gives inthe every important ceremony and events. Even though, it may be regarded as nothonorable by the others. But in the other hand, this is a right and fastest wayto achieve to success in the future job.

The last but notthe least, I agree that for success in a future job, people that have theability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard inschool. Because they can have a vast relationship internet among many people,they know how to deal with others, and last is they know how to cheer up othersto create opportunity for them.

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发表于 2012-3-18 09:32:58 |只看该作者
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