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发表于 2012-5-9 20:46:46 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 被婴儿殴打 于 2012-6-7 16:31 编辑

从现在开始,做一个有文化的青年。
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It ismore important to choose friends that can have fun with you than to choosefriends that will help you when you need them.

Some peopleare willing to make friends who can share happiness and believe that thesadness in their life can be replaced by the happiness that friends give.   Butothers will support that the friend in need is friend indeed and claim thatfriends are the ones who can give you a hand when you are in trouble. As far asI am concerned, the later is better. The helpful friends can bring you more benefit.

The mainreason why I think friends who can have fun with you are less important is thatyou will miss your study or work when you stay with them. It is hard to escapefrom the activities they hold, and once you join in, you will get lost in it,forgetting the time and the work which you will do. For instance when I was aprimary student I had several friends who were addicted in video games and itwas happy to stay with them playing games. But I always forgot the time duringplaying role in games and missed the time to complete my homework.  And only under this condition, was I late forhome. At the end, I had to delay the time to sleep. Even sometimes I couldn’tfinish on the deadline. In a word, hanging out with this kind of friends, youmay have fun instead of working time, at the right time.

On a furthernote, I think people share fun may lead you to be addicted to some things beingharmful to your body or bad habit. Sometimes, they will bring you to club. Andas the time you enter the bar, you will be attracted by the exciting atmosphereand more and more like to go the place, it will become that, you can’t livewithout bar. If the habit is formed, it will decrease the time you spend onsleeping and threaten your health. What is worse, the drugs spread all over thebar. If you can’t help yourself to take in, the drugs will take everything formyou including health and money. In conclusion, to keep you health, you havebetter make less this sort of friends.   
         
In addition,accompany with the friends having fun with you can increase the gap between youand your family. You cannot deny that you prefer to be around the humorouspeople, because of the pleasure they bring to you. And if you make suchfriends, you will definitely pay more time on them, on the contrary, the lesstime on your mother and father. As the communication between you and yourparents become less and less, your parents don’t know your characters more andmore. The gap between children and parents which exists all your life willbecome larger.

In a nutshell, as can be seen above, you shouldmake the friends would like to help you.

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发表于 2012-6-7 16:25:11 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agreeor disagree with the following statement? One of the ways that parents can helpchildren be ready for adult life to ask them to do a part-time job. Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think it is early for children dopart-time job. Becaue it will hurt teenagers during the the worktime. But,hnoestly speaking, the part-time job does help children prepare for their adult life.


The major reason I think is that the part time jobcan improve the  housework skill of youngpeople.When people do the part-time job, they mostly are asked to the basicthings, such as cleaning the windows, mowing the lawn, sending newspapers, etc.These are closely related to adult’s daliylife. For example, my friend, Jhon, is not only good at cooking but also dowell in classifying things tidly. We all treat him as a real adult. And he thinks it is the parttime job that pushes him to be independent. When he was a child, because of the poorness of his family, he was asked to work in a resturant every summer vacation, acting as a waiter. Tanks to the harass he experienced, now, hehandle daily life freely.

In addition, children can higher theircomunication skill through part-time job. In the wrokplace, they will meetdiffernt kinds of people. And sometimes they have to talk with them andconsider how to pesuade them without disturbing these people. like a boy whosells cigaret in his spare time. Only he must master the methods that how tosell his ciggareat to all sorts of persons can the boy earn much money for hisfamily. He would not stand in scilence like most other kids. Instead, he maybesay how handsom the young man is and please him to buy him cigeratt so that hecan earn the money for his poor parents.


Also, they will be brave enough and more calm toface the difficulties in front of them. Inevitably, children will encountermany unknown baracles on the road of taking pat-time job. When the young meetthem, it will be a chance to have them growp up, no matter they succeed toovercome or not. If they conquer the difficulties, they will gain confidenceand experience, on the contary, they will realize their shortness and be morecalm to face the same problem again. Like Helen Keller once said, character cannot be developed in ease and quiet.Only through experience of setbacks and suffering can the soul be strengthened,ambition inspired, and sucess achieved.

In a nut shell , due to the reasons above,parents should ask children to take part-time job.   

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发表于 2012-6-10 09:31:24 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree? Movies and televisions programs should present stories that good people being awarded and bad people being punished.

Movies and televisions greatly sway people nowadays-that is to say, people, especially adolescent, always follow the action, words and mind presented by media. Therefore, plots in televisions programs and movies should be that justify conquers evil all the time.

Essential is it, the justified videos can set a good role model to teenagers. Children would like to watch movies. And it is the critical time for them to foster their characters. Hence, the televisions programs and movies should broadcast the videos which appraise good people and critic bad persons. As a consequence, children would mostly conduct to good behavior. Take my nephew for example. He is eight years old and likes to watch Konan which is a well known Japanese comic series. When he watches the murder is found by Konan, he will applaud for and speak highly of Konan, meanwhile he curses the murder. Last summer, his mother couldn’t find key to her car, knowing that, my nephew immediately helped her mother look for it. And eventually found it under a couch. His mother thanked him. But he just replied, he just wanted to act like Konan to help people.

Aside from cultivating good characteristics, these televisions programs can help people find balance in virtual world. In reality, people always see that the persons violating laws can escape from punishment, even have a better life, while the well behavior people subject to series shocks. As a result, persons cannot be satisfied with it. But they can feel comfortable through watching justified movies, since they represent the idea of most people. It is the effect that the televisions programs and movies have. In my city, I have already seen many cases of thieves. Even though, the policemen take action many times to eliminate such rampant phenomenon. And I still feel painful, when I hear from others was robed.  So when I watch the movie related to thieves, I feel rather exciting, as in the movies, the thieves always are hit heavily.

Also, the positive videos can limit the occurrence of the bad things. Stolen, murdering, taking drugs, etc are spread every corner of world in every minute. As the great impact of the media and the fear of people, it can reduce the times of occurring bad things by broadcasting the films with people doing bad things are punished.

As can be seen above, televisions programs and movies involving justified content would have a positive effect on people.  

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