【Daily Writing作文特训小组】by mikejason2005 作业贴

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6月19日 独立作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:patient is usually not a good
thing, we should take action at once.

作文：

Patient is a good thing in some cases,but not good in all cases. We should take advantage of our patient ,but decision making in one of those times that we should not be patient despite whatever stands in the way. So my point is clear that we should take action at once. I will examine my point of view from two aspects as follows.

First,we may become too worried about our decision and this will directly interfere our objective thinking. Most people tend to hesitate a lot when they encounter some big decision making moments,when they realized the importance,they begin to think a lot related things which may mislead them into a incorrect direction. However,a lot people would forget their former perpose when they are deeply stuck in the confusing and complex consequence evaluation. Once I was in a middle of a examination,I encountered a very complicated choice question,my ituition told me the familiar one is what I had read about in the reading material and I was supposed to follow my heart. But I did not,I hesitated a lot,wasted a lot time and made the wrong choice. After the test,when I recall that moment,I realized that when I was deeply concerning about the meaning of the question,I could have missed the important information the reading matieria gives. So sometimes too much thinking may confuse us,intuition can be very helpful. It is also the same thing what would happens to decision making rather than just a little choice question.

In addition, hesitation do not only make us more confusing ,but also let the chance slip away. I still remeber once I attended a very high classified conference. A specialist is talking about a technique which I am rather intersted in,so when he asked the audience to raise questions,I am very excited. But in  the same time,I noticed that the whole hall is filled with thousands of people that would make me feel embarrassing. And if I want to talk,the microphone would be passed through a long distance to me. After I finished my struggle and finally decided to raise my crucial question. The specialist says "OK,if no one has any question,then thank you." And gone away. By presenting this experience,I want to say that we should take advantage of every possible chance to do what we want and to accomplish our goal. Only if we think it is beneficial,we should decide that when the chance appears,we have to take it no matter what will happen. Sometimes we need to pushe ourselves to the limit that our intellect could not handle. Only by this way can we step further towards a better us.

As what is demonstrated above,I strongly recommand that we should take action at once and do not hesitate any more when decisions are await to be made and chances are there to be grabbed.

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6月20日 作文题目：
some jobs can pay high salaries but require employees to leave their family and
friends. some jobs pay few salaries but allow employees staying with family and
friend. which job do you prefer? why?

作文：
With the developing of world's economy,people are in greater need of money than ever before. So people tend to earn as much money as they can,sometimes no day and night ,they work to make a better living. However,I believe they missed a very crucial point that we make money to make us happy,if the work is killing the happiness then we are walking the wrong direction which will lead us towards a miserable life. So my idea is clear that we should take the job which pay a few salaries but  gives us more leisure time than those which requires all of our time. I will examine this point of view from three aspects as follows.

First,as a normal person,freedom is very important. If all of our time are devoted to work and we have no power to even control what to do most of the cases. That would be very uncomfortable. So as I said chasing freedom is one of the most crucial nature of human,they will always prefers it than other benefits. Even I am a students ,I can notice the important of free time. After one day's arduous work,I prefer to choose a movie and set afront of my computer,enjoy some film time. And I plans to hit the gym every saturday,and hang out with my friend on sunday or sometimes hiking and go barbecue. Those happy times are what make our live so wonderful. We should not risk it.

In addtion,We can spend more time with our family and friends to form a better relationship if we have a  easy job. I still remember ,when I was a boy,my all family would go on bed or sit on sofa share some great family talking or TV times every day. That is one of the most unforgetable moments of my entire life. It makes my so happy when I was a child and I felt my parents' love so directly. I think that is another thing which makes our life wonderful. A better relationship with family and friend gives us beautiful life time with so many unforgetable memories. That is what hard work can not offer.

Finally,I want to discuss what is our works' original intention?Yes!we do our work for better life. As what was demontrated above,those free time to relax oursleves and the memory of wonderful relationship are what better life consists of. So we should take the easier jod. Maybe most of people know this at the beginning,but as work becomes more and harder,they barelly notice that they are preoccupied with the work and have no time to enjoy their real life. What a pity!People always forget  their former purpose and lose the meaning of work.

In a nutshell,I highly recommend that people should take the jobs which provide less money but allow them to enjoy more spare time other than those which require more time.

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mikejason2005 发表于 2012-6-19 22:34
6月19日 独立作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statementatient is usually not ...

基础不错，
小错误比较多
思路需要修正啊！

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6月21日 作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the car has had greater effect
to society than the airplane has to.

作文：

There is no doubt that airplane is playing an important role in our daily life as well as the development of the world. Nonetheless, as far as I concerned, vehicles do appears more frequently in our life. In today's life, I can live without airplane, but without cars, I do not think I can do anything at all. So my idea is clear that cars do have a greater effect to society than the airplane does. I will examine this point of view from three aspects as follows.

First, car have more owners thus influenced more individuals. A survey recently shows that one in every five people of the world owns a car, in some super big cities like Beijing. It is likely that everyone has a car. And it is really hard to imagine what would happen if we do not have cars in our daily life. People use vehicles to go short distance travel, visit relatives. Some of my collage teachers go work everyday from west of the city to our school which located in the south, if there are no cars, they would spend half of the day just on the way. With more and more people have their own cars, the appearance of cities changed much also to adjust the trend, freeways and overpasses are built thus makes it even more easier for cars to run. In the same time, we do not have to use airplanes every day.

In addition, some distant places are hard to reach for airplanes and cars can go anywhere only if it is not too bad. Airplane requires a very high standard for its landing. In another word, not every place can get access to airplanes. Instead, the vehicles have this intrinsic advantage, they are small, easy to control and can adjust some very harsh environments. Therefore, when people decide to go very remote places they tend to choose cars. I still remember that every New Year eve, my whole family would go to my grandmother's hometown which is a very remote and even isolated place. The roads are paved with marshy mud and are rather hard to walk. So we can not expect airplanes to take us there. We choose cars absolutely, and enjoyed a very wonderful time.

Finally, despite its convenient and flexibility, traveling by car is more cheap. It is especially good for those who can not afford the airplane. The road network is very well developed, we can go everywhere through the road by cars. Plus the cost of oil, it remains much cheaper than the air ticket. In this economic recess time, people tend to cut their cost at every possible aspect.

In a nutshell, I deeply believe that cars do shaped our world more that the airplanes did.

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mikejason2005 发表于 2012-6-20 13:00
6月20日 作文题目：
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mikejason2005 发表于 2012-6-21 13:10
6月21日 作文题目：
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6月22日独立作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it's more important for the
government to build new housing than preserve old and historic building. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.

作文：

Recently, many people suggest government to tear down the old buildings to make room for new mansion so it can benefit the economy of the city. I do not think that way, I think preserve those historical sites is much more important than building new ones. Old things, once be destroyed, can not be recovered, but new buildings, we can build them anytime we want. So my idea is clear that government should preserve old and historic buildings rather than build new housing. I will examine this point of view from three aspects as follows.

First, the historic site can provide us more information about the past or the culture of the city. The old building in one city represented its history and its beauty, reminds people of what had happened before. Children can learn the city's past from these living fossils. Once I was walking in an old lane in my city, I heard some children's laugh. Beside them are some old folks who I think is their grandparents, this old folks told their offspring about an very old building at one side of the road. They says that this place once lived a very crucial person in the Ming Dynasty as well as some other anecdotes about this person. I think this demonstrated the function of old buildings as teaching materials very well. And tear them down would be such a pity.

In addition, the old buildings are the postcard of one city thus should be preserved. I still remember several months ago, I visited Shaoxing city. I find the city rather fascinating and modern. But I think cities like this are very common. What really caught my eye is the ancient buildings. Stand in front of this buildings, I was absorbing culture at every pore. This kind of impression on me is much deeper than others. It is at that moment I felt that this city is really different and attractive.

Finally, old buildings can benefit much more to the tourism than new housing does. No one can deny that we usually travel to see either nature landscape or historic sites. old building is a big component of  historic sites. Thus it can attract more tourist and form a large tour revenue for the local government. Qibao ancient town in ShangHai, for instance, are a very old and isolated place at the beginning. There is a time when the government suddenly invests a lot of money on it and intends to transform it into a wonderful travel destination. And they succeeded, now the town have to welcome thousands of travelers from all over the world.

As what is demonstrated above, the old building benefits both the city and individuals living there. It is our job to preserve the old buildings from being replaced by other buildings, and our offsprings would thank us for what we did. In a nutshell, I strongly suggest that the government should preserve the historical buildings rather that build new housing.

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6月23日 独立作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.

作文：

While working with people in groups, we handle our relationship with others. On in this way can we maximize the benefit, and produce more revenue. Among those aspects which we should take care of, I believe the most important of all is to accept other's criticism. I think accept is essential in many ways but I will only examine two points as follows.

First, refusing other's critism will prevent us from touching the truth. As we all know, people always make mistakes no matter during life or at work. And sometimes the error is so stubborn or difficult to notice and we do not have the ability to correct it all by ourselves. In this case, we need others point it out so we can prevent it from happening again. This kind of suggestions, although not sounds too comfortable sometimes, we should accept it. People are more likely to behave like this when they are powerful, they tend to think that everyone is beneath him and have the illusion that all his decision is right. This will add to his foolish, and eventually cause damage.

In addition, the attitude of refusing other's opinion would cause a bad relationship in group. People usually do not like those who are unwilling to hear other's opinion, which would make them feel embarrassing. And the proud one would be isolated since no one would like to work with him and a group work requires a lot team work and cooperation. Once I was in a group work that we were making a movie which our class task required. I found that this leader came out automatically and he tend to make all decisions for us. At the beginning, everyone seems to cooperate, but later, I  noticed that he had chose a wrong topic or theme which contradicted the task's purpose. So I suggested and he rejected my opinion without any doubt. After that, other teammates did not make any suggestions at all. But we decided to form a new group exclude him and choose our own theme so that we would not go to the totally incorrect direction. Finally, he came to talk with us and start to cooperate with us since he can not finish the task all alone.

In a nutshell, I think everyone in a group should be patient and act modest. After all, we should count on each other to make through the project.

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622,623给燕鱼小窝的互改呢？你们是一组的

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-6-24 19:19
622,623给燕鱼小窝的互改呢？你们是一组的

恩 ，，来了。。今天这几天期末考试。