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Tpo 3 综合作文 和一篇独立
The lecture talks about that this painting is indeed portrayed by Rembrandt through some analysis,which rejected the opinion in the reading passage.
Firstly,one of the reason why the painting is doubted is that the fur collor added to that painting after hundereds of years ago by Rembrandt.The purpose is that they want increase the value of this painting and make the woman in that pianting like a aritocratic lady.However,the passage think the lady is originate from a servant who should not wear like that.
Second,the problem of light and shadow is questioned by the reading passage which they reveal that the Rembrandt did not deal with the light and shadow very  well but actually he did.The lecture tells us that because of the fur collar overlied arised from the original light clothes reflect it to the face of woman.
Third,the paiting should have single wood panel.Severl pieces of wood panel which was demonstraed is that other people did it because they wanted to enlarge them,making it look worthwhile.Besides,they found another evidence which can prove that this paiting came from Rembrandt because its material is the same one like Rembrandt's another pating-Self-portraed of Rembrandt.

Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.
A lot of my friends are crazy about continueing work until midnight every day.They even never know what is the word "stop" or "enternmaint".For me,I just consider hanging out with friends can make me have a perfect life.
First,one thing is that the difference betwee work and social is the "variousity".It is the duty and ablity to do one thing and do it well repetitively.Whatever our work is during a long time,we have to face that the same work like tapying or having meeting every day.Even for the artist or some archetichure you have to base on the client recommand.In other word,we have no freedom to do the things that interest us and make fun to us.But social life is not the same result.We could decide what we want to do and whom we want to stay with.Just like when we want to sing songs in KTV where just have a couple of persons who are our best friends or people we want to be friends.We could perform us personnaly
and completely.The beteer thing is we do not need to worry about others  vicious judgements,spitefur laught and the attitude from our boss.We could be ourselves.That is the social life that brings about the inner happiness.
Second, working make money for ourselves can make people happy.Rather,we should pay for more time and energy or some damage things to our healthy like sitting befor the computer beyond 8 hours a day.Instead,we could relax ourselve in the socila life because we cost our money for it.Whatever this money came from our parents or our jobs,one important thing we just know we just need enjoy this moment and forget the stress or anything else.One example is that more and more entertainment places are open to the midnight and more people to go there,like bar or even ice-cream house.A resarch from a magzing,called Chinese daily,which I often read about,accout for that now 3% entertainment places increase every year.And the result tells us now more and more people do not only care about the subtence from our life but also learn to frind a spirit satisfaction for themselves.Consequently,social life is becoming more and more cruial part in ourlives.
Finally,even ir our social life make us to focus more happiness on our life than work.But we should not base on the money from our parents to do this.We should feed on ourself indepently and get us stronger and stronger eneryday.Like a folk story tell us;a prince get his father's money and enjoy every pleasure which common people do not have chance to touch it.After his fater gone,he felt so depressed and lost something.Something is from that chines quote-do not waste every moment you can accompany with your lovers.So he lost both love and money simutanneously.
In conclusion,socils life is the key to the happiness,success,healthy life and love world.We could not live without social life just like fish could live without water.