跪求大哥们给我诊断我的老托听写（第5天）

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虽说我的听写不堪入眼，但是还请各位大哥救小弟一命，给小弟指个提高的路

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感觉你听写的好怪啊。不过比起我的第一篇老托part C 的听写强太多了。

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释之坦然 发表于 2012-7-29 22:28
感觉你听写的好怪啊。不过比起我的第一篇老托part C 的听写强太多了。

小弟弱爆了~~~打击死我了，这个是我一句一句听的，但是只听一遍。小弟冒死发出了，请大哥们不要笑话啊！

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楼主加油，坚持

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-7-29 22:56
楼主加油，坚持

请求秋雨板板指导！

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mxie1435 发表于 2012-7-29 22:46
小弟弱爆了~~~打击死我了，这个是我一句一句听的，但是只听一遍。小弟冒死发出了，请大哥们不要笑话啊！

额，那就更显NB了。我是很多听好多遍都听不出，而且整句话还记不住。反正好烂。

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释之坦然 发表于 2012-7-29 23:26
额，那就更显NB了。我是很多听好多遍都听不出，而且整句话还记不住。反正好烂。

今天第二天的听写明显就弱爆了！！！！马上放上来！

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I hope you (you’ve) all finish science (finished reading the assigned chapter on) insurance prepare on today. But before you are going (we start), I will tell you something (I’d like to mention a few things your text doesn’t go into). Interestingly (It’s interesting to note) that insurance (has existed) in (some) form differently in early (for a very long time). The early (earliest)  insurance (policies) that (were what) we called batonling insurance (bottomry contracts). They provide the contract at (provided shipping protection for merchants as far back as) 3000 BC. (In general, the contracts were often no more than verbal agreements. They granted loans to merchants with the understanding that if a particular shipment of goods was lost at sea,)  In contract, they will be valuable for long to repay (the loan didn't have to be repaid). They prefer to because they risky. Policy is great (Interest on the loans varied according to how risky it was to transport the goods. During periods of heavy piracy at sea, for example, the amount of interest and the cost of the policy went up considerably.). So you can see the celedge how to help (how insurance helped encourage international trade.). This kind of service is (Even the most cautious merchants became willing to risk shipping their goods over long distances, not to mention in hazardous weather conditions when they had this kind of protection available). In generally (speaking), these insurance form is pretty similar at the early age (the basic form of an insurance policy has been pretty much the same since the Middle Ages.). There’s four points (that were salient then and remain paramount in all policies today. There were outlined in chapter six and will serve as the basis for the rest of the of today's discussion.), can anybody tell me (what one of those points might be)?


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虽说我的听写不堪入眼，但是还请各位大哥救小弟一命，给小弟指个提高的路

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继续加油，好好练，一段时间之后可以考虑慢慢过渡到边听边记笔记帮助回忆细节了

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-7-30 21:09
继续加油，好好练，一段时间之后可以考虑慢慢过渡到边听边记笔记帮助回忆细节了

秋雨斑斑~~你真是给我指明了一条光明大道。不过我觉得还要练这个听了很久吧？我现在听句子脑袋都是冒单词或者只是稍微理解它的语境。

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mxie1435 发表于 2012-7-30 21:16
秋雨斑斑~~你真是给我指明了一条光明大道。不过我觉得还要练这个听了很久吧？我现在听句子脑袋都是冒单词 ...

如果你能每天都来版上练习，版友们和我都会很乐于提供一些意见，另外自己可以随时看到进步的一点一滴，我觉得这是很棒的体验，加油~

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-7-30 21:34
如果你能每天都来版上练习，版友们和我都会很乐于提供一些意见，另外自己可以随时看到进步的一点一滴，我 ...

谢谢秋雨斑斑，冒昧请斑斑偶尔给予我些建议

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虽说我的听写不堪入眼，但是还请各位大哥救小弟一命，给小弟指个提高的路

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文章刚开始就听错了，还听成 植物园，挺难过的就是后面一大片都没有听明白一点。只听到蚊子怎么怎么了就听不明白了~。

看完听力原文觉得真想抽死自己！！！一看就明白了！！！惨！

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楼主一般听几遍呢？