【独立写作】被婴儿殴打的作业贴

被婴儿殴打UID: 3308894

Do you agree of disagree with the following statement?People are now easier to become educated than in the past

It is hardto think that young man cannot read nowadays. Not only can they read books, butalso they can use the high- technique devices, such as Iphone, laptop. But itwas normal that many young people could not read in the past, because they hadless chance to be educated, compared with the people in the modern time.

With moreand more schools set, going to school is rather convenient. When we walk in acity, we can find many schools spreading every corner of the city. Students canget to school in short time. Even in the remote area, schools also exist. Childrenno longer walk days and nights to school which was dangerous and common phenomenon in the past. Also farmers do not have to worry about the safety of their children and let the children accept schooling. So more and more children in the village have chances to be educated.

Also,children accept education at a rather low age now. Since kindergarten comes up,more and more young children, even babies have been sent to it, and educated.For one thing their parents have no time to look after them. For another thing,their parents hope them accept education earlier and have advantage to otherchildren. It was impossible to the babies in the past, at that time, there wasno any kindergarten, and parents were always not so busy that they could takecare of their babies. For example, my farther was taught at the age 7, but I startedto go to kindergarten when I was 3.

As thedecreasing of tuition and the increasing of income, more and more parents canhave their children be educated. Even governments or schools will decree somepolicies, and  lower the tuition for thepoor students or let the excellent but poor students achieve education forfree. In the past, many children could not accept schooling, because thetuition was too high for their parents. Only wealth Parents could afford theirchildren to go to school. My classmate, Jack, is poor. His parents just can payhis tuition. And he almost has no money to maintain his daily life. Realizingthat my school offer 1200 Yuan every month to support his life.

To sum up, from the discussion above, we know that schooling becomes easier.         

ys757UID: 3351330

楼主 以改好

babym0nsterUID: 3346310

这id很霸气……

被婴儿殴打UID: 3308894

ys757 发表于 2012-8-15 19:06
楼主 以改好

感激！！！ 哈哈哈

被婴儿殴打UID: 3308894

RSlim 发表于 2012-8-15 19:50
这id很霸气……

头像这妞 是the newsroom 里那位女二么？还是歌手？

babym0nsterUID: 3346310

被婴儿殴打 发表于 2012-8-15 22:25
头像这妞 是the newsroom 里那位女二么？还是歌手？

Ellen Page

skyslywdUID: 2958618

It is hard to think that young man cannot read nowadays. Not only can they read books, butalso they can use the high- technique devices, such as Iphone, laptop. But itwas normal that many young people could not read in the past, because they had less chance to be educated, compared with the people in the modern time.

With moreand more schools set, going to school is rather convenient. When we walk in acity, we can find many schools spreading every corner of the city. Students canget to school in short time. Even in the remote area, schools also exist. Childrenno longer walk days and nights to school which was dangerous and common phenomenon in the past. Also farmers do not have to worry about the safety of their children (为什么farmers要担心孩子的安全？这里有点摸不着头脑的感觉）and let the children accept schooling. So more and more children in the village have chances to be educated.

Also,children accept education at a rather low age now. Since kindergarten comes up,more and more young children, even babies have been sent to it, and educated.For one thing their parents have no time to look after them. For another thing,their parents hope them accept education earlier and have advantage to otherchildren. It was impossible to the babies in the past, at that time, there was no any kindergarten（这有点夸张的感觉）, and parents were always not so busy that they could takecare of their babies. For example, my farther was taught at the age 7, but I startedto go to kindergarten when I was 3.

As the decreasing of tuition and the increasing of income, more and more parents can have their children be educated. Even governments or schools will decree somepolicies, and  lower the tuition for thepoor students or let the excellent but poor students achieve education for free. In the past, many children could not accept schooling, because the tuition was too high for their parents. Only wealth Parents could afford theirchildren to go to school. My classmate, Jack, is poor. His parents just can payhis tuition. And he almost has no money to maintain his daily life. Realizingthat my school offer 1200 Yuan every month to support his life.

To sum up, from the discussion above, we know that schooling becomes easier. （结尾还可以总述得多一些）

谢谢交流，共同进步哈~~   

ljmao2007UID: 3031354

非常不好意思 因为有事 改晚了 望过目

被婴儿殴打UID: 3308894

试着写8.12 的  明天补交 17 ，18！！

被婴儿殴打UID: 3308894

8.16 独立