【SAT官方每日一题】12/8/12 Writing > Improving Sentences

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考试类型: Writing > Improving Sentences
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Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  
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With the 1977 publication of Song of Solomon, Toni Morrison both received popular and critical acclaim.


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9 {9 e: z. b- ?: d) M- SA. both received popular and
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B. both received popular and also
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C. received popular, along with

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E. received both popular and also
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正确答案:D
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! n- N) w+ O+ u* z2 mChoice (D) is correct. It avoids the error of the original by replacing the awkward and misused “both … and” construction with the much simpler “as well as.”

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