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发表于 2012-9-20 11:10:46 |显示全部楼层

9月19日独立已改（我积分太低，不能贴附件，所以就直接写在这里了，见谅哈）

0919作文：Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.When it comes to the question that whether we should take action now or later, some believes that we should act fast in order to obtain the ever-changing chances. In my opinion, however, we should pay attention to what's going on around and take actions patiently, for the following three reasons.

First of all, patience helps us in that they could reduce our chances of making mistakes. By being patient, we could take more factors into consideration, some of which may be closely linked to the key to success. For example, when we face the problem of choosing a place to live, we have to be acknowledged with the surroundings, whether it's too noisy at night, or too cold in winter, whether it faces the south to provide enough sunshine, as well as things of the house itself. In order to be familiar with all of the information necessary to make our decision, we should stay patient and check closely with each of these details. On the other hand, if we decide hastily, we would suffer more from our bad decisions. Thus, we should behave patiently to avoid making too much（many） mistakes.

Secondly, we could miss the truly important things when we act hastily. Take myself as an example; I had to choose a telephone for myself. After getting the information required to buy a phone, I quickly found my favorite, about 1000 RMB, Nokia, and bought it in one single day. 1 month later, however, the new generation of telephones went into the market, which looked fancier, functioned better, and more importantly, the cheap ones charged almost the same as mine. Nothing but regret were(was) filled within my heart. This example reflect the fact that by being patient, we could meet the true love(手机是真爱……这个好像一般不这么说啊) with less loss, which is especially true when one is trying to buy a（an） electronic product.

The last yet not least, it's our duty to work efficiently to satisfy the needs of the fast-developing and ever-changing world. This requires us to be more patient with our work, and act patiently instead of taking instant actions. With the aid of modern technologies, communication between one another becomes more convenient, and working efficiency improves significantly. As a result, we have obtained the ability to drive the darkness of the unkown(有一种看蝙蝠侠的感觉……) and get more acknowledged with what happens around. It's not wise any more to risk making mistakes to make the right decision. Instead, we should take specific factors into consideration and act accordingly. （科技进步、信息量变大似乎和要有耐心没有直接联系）

To sum up, patience is indeed a good strategy, and we should act after taking various factors into consideration instead of acting hastily.
总结：文章观点是patience is a good thing, 这样写真心好写多了……感觉第三点原因说服力不是很强，类似于前两个原因的总结了……总之，文章很中规中矩，没有大的毛病