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汐二萌sunshine 发表于 2012-9-25 21:23
楼主我改成你925的了 TUT

1.thank Q！你改的好好啊，你喜欢什么原著书，我就买过flipped。

2.就是第二段我是想说真理是一直不会变的，只要建议是真理，谁说的都有用的
  .然后genuine knowledge 是我再这个185范文丽看到的我也不知对母队~

Mr.Taoxingzhi, the most famous educator in China, once said: the biggest misfortune in one’s life is that one does not receive a uniniversiy education. Needless to say, a university degree often helps a person achieve his goal with more ease. However, do we attend university just in pursuit of a degree? Does a university only provide us nothing benefieial besides a paper-made diploma?
As far as I am concerned, we enjoy a university education in the following aspects which
attribulates us to a university education:
Firstly, with the knowledge learned in a university,we will have a deep understanding with our
society. It is ture that genuine knowledge comes from practice, but it can not be denied that
genuine knowledge, tells us how to practise. A thorough study in a college or university, of course,
enables us to realize how the society works and how to cope with certain problems arising from it
in a more efficiently, more skillful way.
Second, an university education usually make it possible that we acquire a decent job. Because of
an accomplishment of a four-year study, it is not difficult for us to find a good job in most cases.
How can we imagine that a graduate majoring in astronomy has to be a vendor in the street!
Undoubtfully, he/she should sit in his/her labortory, making a reseach on aircraft on a
computor.Obviously, a university education assures him/her a decent job.
Last, but not the least, we can help others much better if puttiing what we learn in a university
into use. A university education corrects our values, enhance our skills, and broad our horizons.
With those, we are moe capable of giving a hand to those who are in need of help than before.
“Knowledge is power”.When achieving a degree in a university, we can get a better
understanding of the society, find a decent job in an easy way, and help others better. All of those
are due to the knowledge learned in a university.

3.out of date 这个短语倒是有！但我我也不知道那句话对不对

4.look at every aspect of the problem 看这问题的各个方面. 这个是我再牛津上看到的，我想我应该改为the aspect of the problem our grandparents look at，
但是你该成的thinkabout更通顺！

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wstfw 发表于 2012-9-26 10:04
1.thank Q！你改的好好啊，你喜欢什么原著书，我就买过flipped。

2.就是第二段我是想说真理是一直不 ...

1.如果有这个genuine knowledge这个搭配自然很好啦~ 范文里用的肯定没错的 你可以弄清楚一下这个到底是什么意思 用起来会更顺畅^0^
2.如果有out of date这个短语也可以用 当然你也可以去牛津上查一下 找点例句 它具体放在哪个位置
3.look at every aspect of the problem 这个很好！！ 个人认为比我改的think about 好！ 把简单的词用高级了 ^ ^ Thx  ~ 我也学到了很多~
4.你的0924的那篇 这个是真理 这个论点比较笼统 你可以说祖父母的建议都是经过实践磨练出来的^0^ 解释句可以写为祖父母也是见证了世界的变化，他们给孙辈的建议也考虑到了在现在的适用性 【我中文说复杂了 你理解意思即可 变成英文就可以啦】
5.原版书我喜欢狄更斯大神和Austin女神的  你是多久考T呢? 如果是11-12月考的话 可以戳这个地址https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1453268-1-2.html  可以一起写备考日记哈 ^0^

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大概帮你看了一下，哈哈。我的在这https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1452387-2-1.html
在15楼

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汐二萌sunshine 发表于 2012-9-26 10:30
1.如果有这个genuine knowledge这个搭配自然很好啦~ 范文里用的肯定没错的 你可以弄清楚一下这个到底是 ...

哈哈，知道啦‘
我9月没准备好才考了，差 差 差啊，但现在没有考位，我就是有一个长远的计划复习完t再复习g，先考了g就考t。你觉得怎么样

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wstfw 发表于 2012-9-26 14:53
哈哈，知道啦‘
我9月没准备好才考了，差 差 差啊，但现在没有考位，我就是有一个长远的计划复习完t再复 ...

不错啊  我也是9月才考过的  我们情况差不多 可以共勉~   我现在正缺人一起督促呢 你考虑下吧^0^

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汐二萌sunshine 发表于 2012-9-26 15:12
不错啊  我也是9月才考过的  我们情况差不多 可以共勉~   我现在正缺人一起督促呢 你考虑下吧^0^

恩恩，可以可以，我是不是要去见一个备考的帖子？

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wstfw 发表于 2012-9-26 15:40
恩恩，可以可以，我是不是要去见一个备考的帖子？

可以戳这个 一起写 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1453268-1-2.html

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