1005作文题目的一点思考

wly95134UID：3368676

其实我看到这个题目，就觉得自己有可能偏题什么得了。
10.5作文.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, it is much easier for a person to achieve success without family's help than in the past. Use specific reasons to support your answer. (Success)
看了好久，它到底重点是在现在过去还是没有父母的帮助呢？
如果我是在考试我会写
YES
理由1、更加公平
2、为毕业生提供了好的平台
3、知识创新决定是否成功。。。


其实这是退而求其次想到的，套路。。。刚开始是想写NO的，但想了好久好难写啊，而且我连题目都分不清重点。。。
大家怎么看呢？

秋雨荆州UID：2903781

个人觉得是现在和过去的比较，楼下以为如何？;P

caiqing90UID：3239716

嗯 我也觉得重点在比较

sodapengUID：3242849

我也觉得是现在过去比较
我觉得可以从比如 过去的知识是代代相传 现在教育体系完善 科技发达什么的。。

wly95134UID：3368676

秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-10-5 23:19
个人觉得是现在和过去的比较，楼下以为如何？

那without family's help怎么提呢？

wly95134UID：3368676

nnd，睡个觉都梦到作文了，我去~
继续努力~

wly95134UID：3368676

sodapeng 发表于 2012-10-5 23:22
我也觉得是现在过去比较
我觉得可以从比如 过去的知识是代代相传 现在教育体系完善 科技发达什么的。。

对，从这方面就好些多了
但是他为什么要提到without family’s help 呢，总有原因的吧？

morriscaiUID：3331615

10.5作文.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, it is much easier for a person to achieve success without family's help than in the past. Use specific reasons to support your answer

I agree with this statement. There are many factors that contribute to a man's success. For example, from personal perspective, a brave heart, an innovative mind and working with diligence. From a team's point of view, he or she needs to cooperate with other people and share. In this information age, the software and hardware condition is much ameliorated than the past, and people tend to be more and more independent. Thus with the advantages of the modern technologies brought by such improvements, individuals can be less dependent on the outer environment, or as this statement claimed, the help from the family.

Let me take one example in the information technology industry to illustrate, when Bill Gates and Paul Allen found the Microsoft company, it was a really small business then and had not much to offer but a single system called MSDOS, and through the help of Bill's mother, Mary Gates, who is a well-connected people, introduced his son to the CEO of the IBM company and had purchased the MSDOS system for the coming IBM-PC. This is where the technology giant started its glories. In comparison, the modern IT companies born within the decade, the Google, Facebook, Youtube etc. share similarities that they started by group of young peoples, the internet are their playground, no deep background, but they had innovative ideas and brilliant minds. I think the internet has made profound changes to the society, for it has provided the equity of knowledge which was specialized and often hard to get in old times now to everyone who can access the internet. In this age, it’s easier for people to become success if he has good ideas, determination and devote to that idea using the modern technologies.

What’s more, the benefit one can get from the parents and relatives seems to be very limited in today’s world. The reason is that the working or the job is so elaborately divided into different categories, one may be asked to be very professional at his or her areas, and thus it becomes important that you improve the expertise skill on your own and the families cannot help much on that. It’s more about oneself.

Finally, in today’s world the modern technology has changed the world we live in. Better service is being provided and inspiring thoughts is widely spread. In order to win the completion and be successful, one should be professional enough and wisely utilize the product provided by the modern ages.

samanthalycUID：2968067

10.5有考试？？看错了

wly95134UID：3368676

caiqing90 发表于 2012-10-5 23:20
嗯 我也觉得重点在比较

是比较现在和过去，是吧？不是有无父母帮助？刚在改别人的作文发现ta写的是有无父母帮助。。。那怎么办？

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samanthalyc 发表于 2012-10-6 12:26
10.5有考试？？这题是机经，是不是说10.13就不得考这题了？？我承认自己很投机取巧，哎

no

morriscaiUID：3331615

哎，我作文贴了一天了没人过问，高手们行行好，帮我看下遣词造句吧

caiqing90UID：3239716

wly95134 发表于 2012-10-6 13:09
是比较现在和过去，是吧？不是有无父母帮助？刚在改别人的作文发现ta写的是有无父母帮助。。。那怎么办？

重点不是有无父母帮助吧？ 是现在和过去比，父母的帮助对一个人成功的作用大小吧？我是这么理解的。