【独立写作】kahne的作业贴

kahneUID: 3381913

10.8作文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people now are easier to become educated than in the past.


Education is an eternal topic for parents and other people. When young men and elder people sit together and chat, it always comes up a debate that whether being educated now is easier than in the past.  In my opinion, the answer would be yes.

First, as elder people always mention about, the environment in which new generations grow up has been vastly improved comparing to that of them. Peace becomes the main theme after the World War II. The atmosphere of hostility in the unpeaceful years has been replaces by the atmosphere of friendliness and harmony. The essential task of the nation returns -to economic growth which directly boosts the life quality and well-being of people. As a result, fewer social problems can bother young people when studying. With more concentration towards studies, young people are easily to be educated.

Further, since the cut-throat competition of human resource has not tendency to be alleviated, more and more young people are tend to obtain higher degrees in colleges or universities before they hunt for a job. In this case, the motivation of taking education is somewhat passive, however, the consciousness of better education is indeed strengthen. This subjective willing can stimulate people's potential in their studies and they are more prone to manage to acquire a higher education eventually.

Finally, the society has increasingly invested the education systems and implemented policies which benefit the students. We can see this from the fact that the governments' financial support to the universities is evidently increased year by year and new schools are established with the assistant of the government. What's more, the government invests money directly on the students as well. For instance, some government of developing countries encourage universities students to go abroad to pursue higher education and pay all the fee for this. Overall, there are more bonus and opportunities to take better education nowadays.

In conclusion, since the improvement of the society and the awareness of the government and the students themselves, people today are more likely to become educated than before.

我爱寄托爱我UID: 3381202

呵呵文章写得是在不错，一口气读了好几边

kahneUID: 3381913

我爱寄托爱我 发表于 2012-10-9 19:02
呵呵文章写得是在不错，一口气读了好几边

谢谢你～看来我犯了不少错误，不应该啊...
好作文都是改出来的，共勉～

森野夜UID: 2728302

LZ10.9的作文呢？

kahneUID: 3381913

森野夜 发表于 2012-10-10 18:19
LZ10.9的作文呢？

抱歉啊，之前贴的没掉了...我发长文帖总是被删，这才刷够了积分拿到发附件的权限...

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新帖又被删了，继续发这里吧：
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xiaobanIUID: 3338972

已改，写的好啊:)

kahneUID: 3381913

xiaobanI 发表于 2012-10-10 19:13
已改，写的好啊

谢谢你～
猛然发现好多缺陷啊...

森野夜UID: 2728302

10.9的请过目 加油:p

欣荷UID: 3372608

不好意思，昨天本来应该改好的，耽误了。

欣荷UID: 3372608

顺便帮我看下哦  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1452387-1-1.html

kahneUID: 3381913

欣荷 发表于 2012-10-12 22:04
不好意思，昨天本来应该改好的，耽误了。

谢谢你～我这几天比较忙，你的作文还没改好。。。不好意思啊，我一定抓紧