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meijianhuiUID: 146002

ISSUE 4 no field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.

With the rapid growth of the science and the technology ,  more and more discipline need to absorb  the  knowledge and experience from other field of study. The speaker assert that no field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders  bring their knowledge to that field of study.
I agree with the speaker , as far as I am concerned , there is no doubt that different disciplines are interrelated and that the knowledge of one field can shed light on the studies of other fields.there are many examples can support my opinion .
    First, many discipline that their development depend on anther science based on the knowledge of other field , the development of the environment engineer can serve as a fixing example . followed the growth of the modern industry , the environment pollution problem loomed largely, the pollution include the waste water and the waste air which major ingredient are the chemical material which can be harmful to human health . The best way to eliminate  this material is to transform its harmful composite to the common and intoxic one . for this purpose , we must know what chemical material are in the waste water or the waste air by the chemical method . and if we want to solve the pollution problem completely , we  are able to dispose the waste water or waste air relying upon the complicated chemical reaction . it can not image that without the power support of the chemical knowledge , all these measure can be realized.
   Secondly, the marriage of two different discipline is excepted to produce the new discipline. For Instance , when the chemistry and the biology met, biochemistry came into being . chemistry and the biology are completely different , but when people put them together , it lead to biochemistry were born . today , biochemistry became more and more important in the science research ,and more and more useful for the modern industry . In America , about 30 percent scientist are engaged in the research of this field . with  the growth of the biochemistry ,it produce a great deal of fruits that some of them made large influence for human’s life and industry production and contribute innumerous profit for America . all of these interest is due to  the combination of the chemistry and biology.
    there are still several other examples relevant to the issue under discussion, which unfortunately , I have no time to explore in detail , but the above-discussed reason should to a large extent justify my opinion. in conclusion , the combination of the different discipline can largely improve the progress of the science and the technology ,I believe  this tendency will be more and more popular in the future .

genie05UID: 30358

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ISSUE 4 no field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.

With the rapid growth of the science and the technology, more and more discipline need（s） to absorb the knowledge and experience from other field of study. The speaker assert(s) that no field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge to that field of study.三单现错误比较多。注意一下这种小错误。
I agree with the speaker , as far as I am（AM不要） concerned , there is no doubt that different disciplines are interrelated and that the knowledge of one field can shed light on the studies of other fields. there （There） are many examples can support my opinion .不理解为什么你要分成两段来写。前面单纯的重述没有什么意义。
First, many discipline that their development depend on anther science based on the knowledge of other field（语法）, the development of the environment engineer can serve as a fixing example . followed the growth of the modern industry , the environment pollution problem loomed largely, the pollution include the waste water and the waste air which major ingredient are the chemical material which can be harmful to human health （语法）. The best way to eliminate this material（只有一种有害物质吗？） is to transform its harmful composite to the common and intoxic one . for this purpose , we must know what chemical material are in the waste water or the waste air by the chemical method . and if we want to solve the pollution problem completely , we are able to dispose the waste water or waste air relying upon the complicated chemical reaction . it can not image that without the power support of the chemical knowledge , all these measure can be realized. 用WE过多，句式没有变换，缺少段尾总结。
Secondly, the marriage（请教这种用法是否确定正确，谢谢） of two different discipline is excepted to produce the new discipline. For Instance, when the chemistry and the biology met, biochemistry came into being. chemistry and the biology are completely different , but when people put them together , it lead to biochemistry were born . today , biochemistry became more and more important in the science research ,and more and more useful for the modern industry . In America , about 30 percent scientist are engaged in the research of this field . with the growth of the biochemistry ,it produce a great deal of fruits that some of them made large influence for human’s life and industry production and contribute innumerous profit for America . all of these interest is due to the combination of the chemistry and biology. （除了生化，还有什么数学物理，物理化学，生物统计，工程地质。。。。。不如多举几个而不要一个简单的例子再三赘述）
there are still several other examples relevant to the issue under discussion, which unfortunately , I have no time to explore in detail , but the above-discussed reason should to a large extent justify my opinion. in conclusion , the combination of the different discipline can largely improve the progress of the science and the technology ,I believe this tendency will be more and more popular in the future .
论点的扣题不紧，如果是一个中文的作文，你会怎么来考虑论证？应该不会这样吧。语法错误比较多，而且最好写完以后用WORD修改一下，大小写和基本格式就可以先改了再贴上来。建议多看一点范文，培养自己的思维方法。再看一下置顶的那些文章。
不要那么早就在乎分数的问题，而且你怎么能够保证那个分不是安慰或者是打击你呢？？好好准备，不要关心结果。
而且还有字数问题。多一点高分的把握也大一些，当让绝对不是让你凑字数。乱写一些。
希望能点击圾在右下脚编辑，把你的TITLE按照规定改好。谢谢。

为什么之前这个文章是0回帖，斑竹开小差哦。嘿嘿。罚款。

genie05UID: 30358

文章绝对要严谨。否则是不行的，写完以后用批ARGU的方法来看看自己的文章吧。

imongUID: 140258

marriage这个词的确可以那样用，不过后面是不是of就不清楚了
我能够确定的用法是marriage between ... and ...