【我心飞翔】五月组Assignment - 4.16

zhouyu123031UID: 3181463

作文题目： Argu 13

In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.


要求：
1. 本次为5月组成员第十二次作文assignment，限时40分钟，字数要求：min 400 words；
2. 写作时不可以上网，写作过程中不可以使用google 或 wikipedia 等搜索写作素材；
3. 写完后请用word文档保存，将自己的名字写在文档题目中。在本贴中回复，发附件上传；
4. 请提交之前更改好拼写错误和语法错误，用红字在后面标出
5. 不检查就盲目提交的第一次警告处理，如果第二次再犯将踢出小组

参加本次作文成员：Compe, Queo1993, wstfw, pandazhao, foamfly, shimeng0316, jie_lanfeng, lyb342

互改分组为：
Compe和foamfly
Queo1993和shimeng0316
wstfw和pandazhao
jie_lanfeng和lby342


Deadline：April,17,2013. 22:00
Revise Deadline：April,18,2013. 22:00

queo1993UID: 3397710

40min +10min
每次写结尾都好痛苦
Argument13-queo1993.docx (16.6 KB, 下载次数: 8)

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foamflyUID: 3337580

如果可以rule out 我读题加构思的那八分钟的话。。。唉 40分钟完成

lyb342UID: 3410389

60min... 经常写着写着就词穷了
Argu 13-lyb342-4.17.docx (12.04 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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shimeng0316UID: 3127261

占个座...
超时....

compeUID: 3404227

argu is much easier than issue.

wstfwUID: 3170761

阿狗13-wstfw.docx (13.75 KB, 下载次数: 0)

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超时超时

foamflyUID: 3337580

compe 发表于 2013-4-17 22:14
argu is much easier than issue.

argu 13 by compe_revised by foamfly.doc (28.5 KB, 下载次数: 5)

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Jie_lanfengUID: 3409324

lyb342 发表于 2013-4-17 16:36
60min... 经常写着写着就词穷了

中午改完给你传上来 最近我的作文先欠着了

shimeng0316UID: 3127261

queo1993 发表于 2013-4-17 13:07
40min +10min
每次写结尾都好痛苦

我的才上传，弄晚了...你的明天给你哈

改好了已经上传，请查收。

queo1993UID: 3397710

shimeng0316 发表于 2013-4-18 22:48
我的才上传，弄晚了...你的明天给你哈

改好了已经上传，请查收。

请查收
4.16Argument13 by shimeng0316-revised by queo1993.docx (16.49 KB, 下载次数: 12)

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shimeng0316UID: 3127261

queo1993 发表于 2013-4-19 18:21
请查收

Q，你把我给你改的传上来了，还改好了名字~~弄错了啊~~

queo1993UID: 3397710

shimeng0316 发表于 2013-4-19 19:52
Q，你把我给你改的传上来了，还改好了名字~~弄错了啊~~

sorry ，不知道怎么把名字改错了，应该是这个吧
4.16Argument13 by shimeng0316-revised by queo1993.doc (33.5 KB, 下载次数: 6)

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compeUID: 3404227

foamfly 发表于 2013-4-18 00:17
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