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[作文] 回报论坛,美国室友在线帮大家改作文 [复制链接]

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发表于 2013-6-19 06:15:23 |显示全部楼层
首先以前在论坛获得过很多咨询,如果没有寄托,也不会顺利出国
其次室友Eileen是土生土长美国人,硕士学历,希望以后去非英语国家做老师,先锻炼一下
所以给大家发福利,请把需要改的文章发上来,请不要太长, 不要参杂中文, Eileen会帮大家纠正Chinglish
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这福利太好了  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!恨不得现在就写  不过最近好像饭局和玩乐太多了  也不知道能静下心写吗??

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顶一个,有时间就把文弄过来,谢谢楼主啊~!

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The number of people who watch foreign films is much more than people who watch local films, describ the reasons and should the government provide financial support to the local film industries?


Watching films is a most common relaxing activity in my country. Whenever my roommates have spare time, the first choices to kill time is finding some movie that seems interested or was prized high by other people and enjoy the time. There lies a very eye-catching phenomenon. That is the times we watch local movies are much less than these we watch foreign movies.

In my opinion, the reason for this case is very obviously, The first point we should take into consider is the quantity, In China there are very few local movie compared with the foreign movie that you almost can find a new film in one or two months, while if you wait for a Chinese interest movie, you should spend 7 months. The country interchange is the most important reason. After internet providing the whole world's movie, people have the chances to choose movies with good quality. While a very upset information is most Chinese movie is boring and meaningless. Without any doubt, Chinese would like to watch foreign movie than to watch local move.  

For this embarrassing phenomenon, some people may give some suggestion like government should put more support money in this industry, while I do not think so. There are many urgent problems in China which worth more attention than this case, for example, the life quality of the poor area and the pollution problem. And considering that movie industry still make a lot of money, and the problem of this is not only the problem of financial, so I do not think  should give the precious money to support movie.

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