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[求助] 快考试了,求各位大侠给看下行不行了 [复制链接]

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发表于 2013-7-8 19:32:04 |显示全部楼层
题目是:it's more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than work slowly and make sure everything is correct in today's world。同不同意

Some people may think working quickly and risking making mistakes are very important in today's world. Others may agree that it's more important to work slowly and make sure everything is correct. I think working quickly and risking making mistakes are more important and I do have some powerful reasons.
  First, working quickly means you are efficient and being efficient is a great advantage in today's world. We all know that there are so many opportunities in this world. If you could find one and catch it, you will succeed. It sounds pretty easy but in fact it's not what you imagine. The problem is to catch the opportunities. If you could find the opportunity, so could others. It doesn’t matter that many people also realize the opportunities but it does matter other people is on the way. As a result, you must be faster. So working quickly is very important. It gives you the ability to catch the opportunity and catch it faster than others.
   Secondly, it's true that working quickly also means risking making mistakes. However, sometimes making mistakes is not such a bad thing. No matter how careful you are, it is possible that some faults or at least something unreasonable are still hidden. By making mistakes, we could realize the existence of them early and avoid possible bigger damage
  Thirdly, working slowly and making sure that everything is correct is almost equal to staying where you are forever and never improving yourself. Being careful is great but staying careful in that kind of ways is fool. Everyone makes mistake. Requiring yourself to make sure everything is correct is not only unnecessary but also will impede yourself from making progress. After all, people will learn more from their mistakes. The more mistakes they make the more experienced they are. Therefore, as time goes by, they could not only work quickly but also make few mistakes.
  In sum, it's more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than work slowly and make sure everything is correct in today's world. Working quickly is a good skill and making mistakes is not a big deal, we'd better choose the right way to work.

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发表于 2013-7-8 19:40:21 |显示全部楼层
好高级

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发表于 2013-7-8 21:57:30 |显示全部楼层
晴天的feel 发表于 2013-7-8 19:40
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大哥这是什么意思嘛…………讲下看法呗……

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发表于 2013-7-8 22:04:22 |显示全部楼层
123雨季不再来 发表于 2013-7-8 21:57
大哥这是什么意思嘛…………讲下看法呗……

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发表于 2013-7-9 10:52:18 |显示全部楼层
晴天的feel 发表于 2013-7-8 22:04
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好的,我修改下,当时时间不太够了……

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发表于 2013-7-9 10:52:51 |显示全部楼层
哪位大侠再来看下喽~~

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发表于 2013-7-9 15:58:04 |显示全部楼层
求评价,求指导……

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