[口语小组]longbeach作业贴

糖甜甜UID: 3362181

7.19
1.语速偏慢，主要是停顿有点多，这样会影响你的表达，使得你不够时间说完你想要说的东西
2.吐字清晰
3.表意明确
4.内容方面
task 1，挺好的
task 2，你说你不同意，然后举了一个你们班上的例子，但是我还是不知道你为什么不同意，为什么playing games has positive effect，你说I used to play heavily，然后建议你说出playing games如何帮助你。然后你又说你们班上的人分成两类，但是这两类人都play games，那么如何说明playing games有positive effects呢？还是你想表达的是playing games have nothing to do with their grades？那么这样又会和你的中心论点相悖了
task 3，对于plan的总结，你说的是increase ceremony day，感觉这样不够准确，建议直接说split the ceremony into two days之类的既简捷又准确。其它的挺好
task 4，挺好的
task 5，那个关于he couldn't move back to a dormitory on campus是从哪里来的，貌似听力中没有呀
task 6，挺好
祝周末考试顺利

longbeachUID: 3427082

谢谢甜甜，have a good day. 考完了托福也一定 常回家看看！ 多多练口语

这几条我认真改一下！

raisssaUID: 3445713

t1: SOUNDS LIKE A reporter==
     a little bit slow. too many pauses....
t2: curelessly get into the game (instead of lots of heavily...)

t3: maybe it is not necessary to say so much about the arrange of the uni. just use one to two sentence enough. the
     no need for thanks=0= thanks.

t4: if u have nothing to talk about, just stop and pls do not make any sounds.
     did u add some details at the end of ur speech? I do not think it is a good idea to do sth like that =0= Just try to link the example with the define.

t5:not ride his rm car...get a ride fm rm.
    too much wasting time---> it would cost him a great amt of time

t6:
exposed (p sounds like b)

gd pronounce for words. but intonation needed to be improved. also, try to enrich ur voca.
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