Chinese Translation for a Poem of Authur Rimbaud

teafortwoUID: 108585

Verlaine is well known as one of the most famous French Poet in the 19th Century. Today during our english-chinese translation class, the prof asked us to translate one of his poems from its english version to chinese. I love this poem very much and I'd like to share with all of my friends here the translation that i've accomplished for this poem.

English version :

It weeps in my heart

It rains gently on the town.
                       -----  Authur Rimbaud


It weeps in my heart
as it rains on the town.
What languorous hurt
thus pierces my heart?

Ohm sweet sound of rain
on the earth and the roofs!
For a heart dulled with pain,
oh, the song of the rain!

It weeps without reason
in my disheartened heart.
What!there's no treason?
This grief's without reason.

It's far the worst pain
not to know why,
without love or disdain,
my heart has such pain.



My Chinese Translation :


泪洒我心

（法国）魏尔伦

城中飘洒着细雨。
              -------- 亚瑟．兰波

城中飘洒细雨
我的心也在哭泣
是何样的悲伤阿！
在敲击我的心灵？

雨滴的动人旋律
落满大地和屋宇
我那满怀苦痛的心
在倾听雨中乐曲

在我失落的心里
满是莫名的泪滴
并非为了爱的叛离
这悲伤全无原因

最深的痛苦
莫过于这无由的伤心
我心无爱也无恨
却承受着这种悲情

franchescaUID: 122155

I'm feeling great pressure on my translation skills right now...

teafortwoUID: 108585

哇~ 搜索自己的帖子，想不到去年我还翻译过这种东西，看起来似乎很幼稚！

joe824UID: 187661

It's ok~