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发表于 2013-7-29 21:01:19 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 sunnysunanli 于 2013-8-12 23:03 编辑

8.24就要一战了,拖拖拉拉到现在才开始准备。。。第一次录音说口语,请大家猛烈的批评吧。。。。辛苦童鞋了。。。。
Task 1  Describe a person you want to learn from and explain why you want to learn from him.[tsound]2221[/tsound]
Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching TV is not good for people's daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.[tsound]2222[/tsound]

7.31
Task 1 Which type of movie you are not enjoyable to watch. Action, romance or science-fiction? Include specific reasons and details in your explanation. [tsound]2238[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to go to schools before they are 16. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [tsound]2240[/tsound]

8.1
Task 1 Which personal quality you admire the most? (1)intelligent (2) creative (3)courage[tsound]2306[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you like to travel alone or with your family members? Explain your answer with details and examples. [tsound]2311[/tsound]

8.2
Task 1 Which period is the most difficult period in a person’s life? Childhood, Teenage or adulthood? State your choice and explain why. Include reasons and examples to support your response.[tsound]2351[/tsound]
Task 2 Some people think that teachers should assign homework to students during the class, but others say that teachers should assign homework to students after class using email. Which do you think is better and why? [tsound]2352[/tsound]

8.5
Task 1 What suggestion would you like to give to a foreign friend who wants to study in your country? Explain how this suggestion could help your friend, include reasons and details to support your response. [tsound]2458[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Wealthy people should be required to help poor people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.[tsound]2459[/tsound]

8.6
Task 1 Do you prefer having outdoor activities in winters or in summers? State your choice and explain why. Include reasons and examples to support your response.[tsound]2537[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some people prefer to live in old and historical house, others prefer to live in modern house. Which one do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [tsound]2539[/tsound]

8.8
Task 1 Describe one positive experience and the result. Include specific reasons and details in your explanation. [tsound]2700[/tsound]
Task 2 College students should be allowed to keep pets in their dormitories. What do you think about this? Include specific reasons and details in your explanation. [tsound]2702[/tsound]

8.9
Task 1 Are universities the best place to promote knowledge on environmental protection? Why or why not? Include specific reasons and details in your explanation. [tsound]2665[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree? We should teach young children the skill of typing rather than handwriting. [tsound]2666[/tsound]

8.11
Task 1 The school's canteen wants to change recipes to make healthy and low calories food. Please talk about the advantages and disadvantages. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [tsound]2864[/tsound]
Task 2 When things at home such as furniture or electrical appliances are broken, some people prefer to have them repaired in a shop, while others prefer to fix them at home. Which do you prefer and why? [tsound]2865[/tsound]

8.12
Task 1 Describe the differences between two cities that you have visited before. Give details and examples to support your response. [tsound]2937[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching sports programs on television is not a good use of time. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.[tsound]2939[/tsound]
task 3 [tsound]2944[/tsound]
task4[tsound]2952[/tsound]
task5[tsound]2955[/tsound]
task6[tsound]2962[/tsound]

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发表于 2013-7-30 19:40:47 |显示全部楼层
hi!7.30
栆糕!task 1 2,真没发现什么错误,开头是不是应该用‘18th birthday’;lz的语音很清晰,例子内容也都很具体,速度可以稍微快一点点。

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发表于 2013-8-1 16:00:11 |显示全部楼层
7.31
task1
錄音好多破音...耳朵好痛
語速可以再快一點,其他沒什麼問題

task2
超時了,另外不夠具體,只說缺乏indepentdent和一些skill
可以說上學之前甚麼都不會,父母都幫你做好事情
上學後學會團體生活、交朋友甚麼的,不要只說大方向

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备考先锋 IBT Zeal IBT Smart Cancer巨蟹座 寄托兑换店纪念章 US-applicant 荣誉版主

发表于 2013-8-1 22:13:05 |显示全部楼层
【8.1】
Task 1
1. courage is the most..."that how you get over the difficulty in your life" 这个表达很奇怪。better be:courage is the most important thing "for you to get over the difficulty in your life..."。
2. feel a little scared (not "scary")
3. let his university a better one? 这里是想说他让他的学校变得更好?还是他的大学生活变得更好?
4. 一个发音:university的词尾发/i/的音,不是/ei/
内容OK

Task 2
这题内容很好!
1.“talk a lot of conversations”这是个chinglish的表达…… we talked a lot/ we had a lot of conversations
2. “we know each other's thoughts than ever before”最好加个better. know each other's thoughts better than ever before,否则没有比较的意味,“than ever before”就没作用了。
此外OK

两道题的内容都把握的很好,主题明确、有细节和例子支撑。
楼主发音也很准确,基本没有错误。语调也很好。
接下来练习的时候注意一些表达里的语法、用词等错误,就更好了。

加油~!

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发表于 2013-8-2 20:44:42 |显示全部楼层
Irene1084 发表于 2013-8-1 22:13
【8.1】
Task 1
1. courage is the most..."that how you get over the difficulty in your life" 这个表 ...

好荣幸,竟然是版主批改。。。。我还拼命再找Irene的口语贴的说:loveliness:

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发表于 2013-8-2 21:30:41 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-8-2 21:32:48 |显示全部楼层
lmt499024 发表于 2013-8-2 21:30
0 0HI,Sorry刚刚到家。
TASK1.
卤煮有点紧张吗?摸摸头,内容不错,但是要听好多遍才能弄清楚。

我是不会告诉你们其实我说的是took。。。。

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发表于 2013-8-3 19:56:11 |显示全部楼层
task1:口音不错啊,赞一个,只是超时了,我觉得你最后一句话就没有说的必要。。。。。前面as an example感觉说的有点生硬><
task2:一开始说的时候感觉有点生硬,后面还不错拉!

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发表于 2013-8-6 21:23:31 |显示全部楼层
【8.5】
发音语调都不错,建议使用别的工具录音,因为自带的录音工具不能很好地掌握时间
←、←【其实我没用过,只是不太确定每个部分卤煮讲了多少不好给具体建议】
Task1
①建议先说自己是chinese,后面语言用chinese才不会有纠结 因为ETS考官并不知道你是哪国考生
② 【suggestion】 [sug'ges·tion |常听发音是这种不确定你的发音是不是正确的还有| səg'dʒestʃn /sə'dʒ-]
   其实我不会音标←、←
③开头不需要读那么多题目内容,最好大改一下例如变成从句,节省时间

Task2
还是上面的问题,如果重复题目最好大改,否则没有意义
【granted?】抱歉没听出来是什么单词QUQ
其他没什么问题

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发表于 2013-8-7 15:36:18 |显示全部楼层
【8.6】两题都说了很多对比学习了
Task I 很好,没啥说的
Task II
1. ....,which an old historical house... 应该用while吧
2. and 用的有点多了

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备考先锋 Cancer巨蟹座 寄托兑换店纪念章 US-applicant

发表于 2013-8-10 01:44:49 |显示全部楼层
8.8
T1 语音语调都挺好的哈。内容上我觉得也OK哈。如果LZ可以下次不喷麦就更好了,当然这和英语没什么关系哈。不知道考试时候会不会也有喷麦的情况。

T2 pet的发音可以注意一下。[pɛt].其他我觉得都挺好的哈

总体而言觉得LZ说的很好,向LZ学习!

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【8.9】
task1
【university】 [,u·ni'ver·si·ty |
【play a part】扮演一个角色, 参与, 装腔骗人--->【take[不确定←←] a little part】
【involve a lot of people】-->【involve all of the individuals】个人感觉会更好
task2
感觉很好QUQ没找到错233

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发表于 2013-8-12 15:41:21 |显示全部楼层
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task1: normal food感觉用的不太合适,healthy and low calories food也没怎么不normal吧
task2: I don't good at应该为I'm not good at;内容、语音语调都没问题,时间稍稍有点超

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发表于 2013-8-13 21:48:06 |显示全部楼层
8.12
卤煮语音语调都不错,应该是一遍版?前面几题都不错
最后一题有点磕巴,已经不错了QUQ
有的题目没有讲完有点遗憾,但不至于扣分
尽量在后面时间不够的时候加快语速

T1
①【two biggest cities】-->【two big\international cities】
②【buildings stand[s去掉]】【some place[s]】
  【the old buildings in BJ [ARE]】还有后面的一些谓语动词
单复数注意[我也经常犯QUQ注意一下]
③【architecture】n.  建筑学, 设计建造结构的科学; 布置, 格局, 安排; 建筑风格, 建筑方法, 建筑式样; 建筑术; 建筑物; 电脑的设计及其成分 (计算机用语)应该不能用【architecture style】
T2       
①【disagree】[dis·a·gree |[a的音没有了]
②athlete[s]
③我认为例子不在点上- -我认为你所说的例子放在现场看球和电视看球没有区别
  而题目中指【Watching sports programs on television】所以我认为应该有区别于watch in the site 的advantages
T3
为什么只有三秒←←
T4
【the pro talk[s]】【change[d]】【show[ed]】
其他的还好
T5
为什么还是三秒←←
T6
【and then】【took away】都连续出现,建议用别的词语替换
【the pro talk[s]】
【screen [is] behind the doll?】有点矛盾

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