【口语小组】成成儿作业贴(10.12)

成成儿UID: 3243018

感谢小组版友点评，也热烈欢迎其他童鞋拍砖，一起加油～～
所有作业：
今天退出口语小组了，很舍不得。谢谢大家的点评，祝考试顺利～～

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9.25题目
Task 1 Describe a gift you would like give to someone. Include specific reasons or details in your explanation.
iPhone to my grandfather, some useful services for elders;  wonderful service, siri,no longer need to wear reading glasses and touch it to make a telephone call, send message, talk to it what you want to do
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Task 2 Some students prefer to go to universities or colleges in their own cities or towns. Others prefer to go to universities or colleges in new cities or towns. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.
in new cities or towns, especially some big cities; small city, only one college, heard from my sister educated from, recruitment conference , less job opportunity,
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9.24题目
自带的录音不能倒计时，一不小心就超时了，又舍不得立马停止，索性就超过了几秒～～
Task 1 As for students, how to get better grades and improve efficiency in the class? Include reasons and details to support your response.
asking the teacher questions, indicate interested in, and do lots of work before class,   hard-working student[tsound]4324[/tsound]

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should state honest opinions even though they are different from other people's opinions.
definitely agree, be open with each other, share a latest song, soft and nice, a few days later,
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9.23题目
Task 1 Describe a celebration or public event you attended recently. Explain why it was memorable to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Garbage Siege垃圾围城，最近听了一个讲座有点感触, environment warning, picture, expose under sun, huge harm, divide into
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Task 2 Some people like to purchase books from a book store while others like to borrow books from the library. Which do you prefer and why?
borrow books, cheap, international culture, read lots of foreign books, expensive, inaccessible in the book stores,
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9.22题目
Task 1 What are the advantages of further education abroad?
make friends coming from different countries, marketing teacher, international culture course, invite
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Task 2 Do you make plans for your free time or do things spontaneously in your free time? Explain why.
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9.21题目
开始一遍录完，求狠拍～～
Task 1 What type of music do you enjoy most? Explain why you enjoy this type of music. Include reasons and details in you explanation.
movie song, plots come to mind, my heart will go on, Titanic, the ship hit an iceberg
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Task 2 Do you prefer driving or taking public transport? Explain why.
driving, suburb, only one bus line available, 8 o'clock, class Time; at weekends, go shopping, waste time
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9.19题目
Task 1 Talk about a time when someone (your friends, family or teachers) gave you advice to solve a problem.
find a research topic, read latest articles in the relative journals,
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to remember the past and learn things from the past. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
agree, the past the failure show our shortcomings, improve, lose the first round  
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9.18题目
Task 1 People have a lot of ways to make friends.What do you think is a good way to make friends? include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
join in club, same interest; badminton club
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Task 2 Do you prefer to shop in large department stores or in small specialty stores? Why?
large department stores, convenient, display a wide variety of goods, daily goods, cloth, household appliances
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9.17题目
Task 1 A friend of yours wants to work for one year before he enters the university. What's your opinion? Include reasons and examples to support your response.
agree, discover interest, change major after job experience
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Task 2 Some people prefer to attend sports. Other people prefer to watch others play sports. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
attend sports, get well along with others,
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9.14题目
Task 1 What do you think we should do to decrease the usage of car or other vehicle and solve the traffic problems?
do agree, because as with the increasing, the traffic problems are worse, child, now, the commuting time
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To be successful, a school should have many good textbooks. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
disagree, easily accessible, high teaching quality, university town,  advanced academic degrees,
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9.13题目
Task 1 Your university is planning to ask each student to do 40 hours of community service per year. What is your opinion and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this program? Include reasons and details to support your response.
agree, even though learning time, learn some thing out of the text book and school life,  
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should encourage students to use computers from primary school age on. Give details and examples to support your response.
disagree, do harm to eye-sight, learn a lesson from own experience, after class  also instead of doing outdoor activities, near-sighted
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qwaszx3793UID: 2583133

task 1：我觉得一开始你直奔主题的速度太快了，或许加一点别的套话会显得不那么唐突。semester的发音重音在me那里。还有，你那个例子里面是啥原因让那个中国老师很不爽，我没太听清楚。还有一个就是，能给两个或以上的advice更好吧。

task 2：还是跟第一个题一个问题，就是reason能给出两个或者三个最好，只有一个显得不是那么persuasive。

task 3：mealtime那个l的发音一定得注意，很多中国人都忽视了这个音。正确的发音是舌尖顶住上颚稍前的地方发出l的音。还有个问题，如果你说的时候有迟疑或者停顿，最好用一些filler words代替，例如，you know, um, like, i mean这类的说法。整体上说的比较完整，点都说到了。

task 4：这题说的很好啊！

task 5：刚开始你说的是in the consation，但是你想表达的是conversation吧？就这个地方有点问题，别的都不错。

task 6:44秒的时候你是想说attract但是说成了extract。。。。。。

整体感觉的不错，虽然发音会有点问题，但是我觉得发音在托福考试里面应该不是大问题，正要整体流利逻辑合理就可！

成成儿UID: 3243018

qwaszx3793 发表于 2013-8-6 15:52
task 1：我觉得一开始你直奔主题的速度太快了，或许加一点别的套话会显得不那么唐突。semester的发音重音在 ...

谢谢你的点评呢～～～
Task1---call the teacher's name in his face. 我想表达的是在中国当面直呼其名不礼貌，不晓得对了没？
听了你的发音，我都不敢听自己的音频了。发音方面短期不知道要怎么改进呢，可以帮忙给点建议吗？
最后，8.17好运～～～

qwaszx3793UID: 2583133

成成儿 发表于 2013-8-6 17:22
谢谢你的点评呢～～～
Task1---call the teacher's name in his face. 我想表达的是在中国当面直呼其名不 ...

我当年本科时候练习的方法就是每天听CNN bloomberg然后跟读，我觉得跟美剧学口语对于托福来说意义不大，托福口语跟新闻英语更加相似。然后你上网随便找个美语发音教程来看看，aat我特别推荐，但是你8.24就考了，时间上应该来不及了。但是我觉得长远来说你一定要把aat学完！

成成儿UID: 3243018

qwaszx3793 发表于 2013-8-6 17:29
我当年本科时候练习的方法就是每天听CNN bloomberg然后跟读，我觉得跟美剧学口语对于托福来说意义不大，托 ...

我也是想先考试，然后再纠正发音。谢谢你推荐AAT呢，之前自学了一点点，但是一到用的时候就全忘了。学的时间太短，对那些发音还没有形成习惯。等考完了认真学一下美音发音～～～谢谢你的建议呢

单词君ronaUID: 3459403

8.6
t1：内容木有问题，我觉得拿自己的家乡说挺好的，比较有个性化。中间有一句说after a hike in the hot sun有点问题~应该是after a hiking under the big sun或是啥的~
t2：楼主语速挺好的~木有发现啥问题~~
t3：这个对话的原因我自己在说的时候说错了= =楼主说的是对的~在说第二点的时候加上professor who have secondary fields更全面~
t5：前面在讲第二个solution的时候说的不太清楚，go to the shop to get a ready computer这个有歧义，真正那个男生是建议她打电话询问她的电脑能否在the beginning of the next week的时候修好~
t6：木有什么问题，挺清楚的~
总体来说楼主口语还不错啊啊，加油~~

成成儿UID: 3243018

单词君rona 发表于 2013-8-7 18:35
8.6
t1：内容木有问题，我觉得拿自己的家乡说挺好的，比较有个性化。中间有一句说after a hike in the hot ...

谢谢"单词君rona"的点评呢，我的Q5中第二个建议其实都没听懂，然后就自己瞎编了...
你的发音和语速都很好呢，也都很流畅。
一起加油哦～～～

qunlinUID: 3415296

8.7

T1 LZ辅音发的比较重，可以再注意一下语音。内容上OK。

T2 内容也OK。不过中间“嗯”的比较多一点，可以更流畅哈！

T3 OK

T4 时间分配上有点问题。第二个例子是核心却只有不到20S的时间，所以到1分钟的时候第二个例子完全没讲出来。

T5 额T5这个题目是给有问题的学生一些建议。LZ后面说“我”喜欢哪个，然后“我们”会怎么样。还是说他们怎么样比较好哈。

T6 这一题挺好的没什么问题哈！

成成儿UID: 3243018

qunlin 发表于 2013-8-9 01:04
8.7

T1 LZ辅音发的比较重，可以再注意一下语音。内容上OK。

谢谢qunlin的建议呢，发音让我好头痛的，最近正在纠正一些发音问题～～～

luketc3580UID: 3369182

task 1 positive,didn't发音不太对，另外应该是be satisfied with 吧

task 2 ? spare time, 那个词没听懂，这个说得比较磕巴，如果是刚开始练建议多说几遍，说熟练一点，然后慢慢得减少录得遍数

task 3  semester，fee，man 的发音有问题， charge the addition fee for ? , he ? it was a， good , dishes in this ? 带问号的单词没听出... 前面说得太断断续续的，第二点没说详细

task 4 customer，potential，contains发音不对，  感觉两点说得都不够全面，然后给出例子的时候可以说the professor gives an example，来引出比较有条理

task 5 couldn‘t, conversation 发音有问题， 另外女生的问题不是arm，我记得是ankle

task 6 extrinsic，intrinsic（貌似是）这两个单词LZ应该是不认识，说的不是题目中的那两个单词

建议妹子刚开始多录几遍，每个题都多练习几遍，不然我感觉提高会比较慢的

成成儿UID: 3243018

luketc3580 发表于 2013-8-9 18:20
task 1 positive,didn't发音不太对，另外应该是be satisfied with 吧

task 2 ? spare time, 那个词没听懂 ...

谢谢luketc3580的建议呢，我的发音存在好多好多问题呀，最近准备学习下AAT恶补一下。
那个spare time想表达的是遛狗可以消磨时间。
以后一定要多录几遍～～～
谢谢罗～～～

成成儿UID: 3243018

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stupidjoeyUID: 3402881

sorry to reply late
8.10

task1

last sunday 和前面的衔接有点生硬， 你可以加个for example，或者 i'd like to talk about ...
with out ？ of university 前面这小部分没听清是什么
感觉停顿的时间略长，所以说的内容较少
fact 没发清楚

task2

我给点建议 就是把说自己的handwriting很好，你很自豪这2句去掉，我感觉和你论证的点没什么关系，这样可以多花时间说Handwriting自己很难练好，需要教或者typing很容易学


task3

学校的第2个理由应该是让每个学生都有机会使用电脑

男生的第1个理由描述的有点简单

task4

这题不好说，我在下面练了好多遍
我的理解和你不太一样
我觉得2个例子都讲了nonverbal 和verbal的关系
第1个是两者一致，所以enhance
第2个是inconsistent，所以pass a differnent meaning
只是我的见解哈

task5

男生的问题描述的有点简单，这样会遗漏一些细节
我记得第1个方案是用computer查信息，第2个是自己一个一个去查那3个phychology class,
前面的信息描述用了20s，稍微短了点，所以你的细节说的不够多

task6
这题也有点难，因为讲的信息太多了
express发音有点问题
还有你那个well，最好不要每题都用，这样考官可能会觉得不太好


总体来说你的发音没什么问题，也很流畅，有几个task关于文本的信息描述的略微少了点，不够详细，其他ok。加油！

成成儿UID: 3243018

stupidjoey 发表于 2013-8-10 23:56
sorry to reply late
8.10

谢谢stupidjoey的点评呢，我每次把Q3-Q6的听力部分听了一遍就没去管里面到底在说什么。我还是太懒惰了，每次只顾着录音了。
然后Q1和Q2的例子确实感觉好假呢，每次都是last semester;last sunday什么的，下次要改进～～

KangX1UID: 3434720

8.10
T1: lz 的停顿有点多，思路有点不连贯哈。
T2：其实我和lz的问题差不多，是不是知道要说什么但是嘴巴跟不上。我觉得lz可以把语音练的再连贯一点。
内容上没什么问题哈
T3：内容和结构都很好。
T4：这题我觉得结构上似乎有点不合理，可以后半段时间再多一点，内容再详细一点。
T5：这题没问题
T6：后面拿个例子有点急（虽然我也是的。。。）

总体来说lz很淡定哈，内容都说到了，很好的。
我觉得可以注意一下发音。特别是有“u”的发音。

建议lz可以在听听力的时候，注意一下他们的发音。