独立写作是2.5~3.5,fair。评语如下:
You expressed ideas with reasons, examples, and details, but your response indicated weaknesses such as
you may not provide enough specific support and development for your main points;
your ideas may be difficult to follow because of how you organize your essay or because of the language you use to connect your ideas; and/or
grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.
求问该评语是针对我的作文的错误还是这个作文评语都一样?谢啦~~