一站综合fair，想不通啊，细节都听写了，求各位看官帮忙看看

f1371342385UID: 3418980

小弟综合一战fair，是所有的细节都写了啊，可是还是fair，求各位大神帮小弟看一篇综合，求问问题出在哪。。。
tpo 4 的综合
    The lecturer and reading passage hold different view toward whether dinosaurs were endotherms or not.
    First, the reading passage states that dinosaur fossils have been discovered in polar regions, so the dinosaurs were endotherms. In contrast, the lecturer states that dinosaurs were not endotherms, because the polar regions at that time were very warm. And even the polar regions were cold, dinosaurs may migrated to other places or hibernated during the winter.
    Second, the lecturer argues that dinosaurs used legs to hold huge bodies, which were an advantage for dinosaurs. The reading, however, argues that dinosaurs could run very fast because its legs are underneath body, which is the sign for endotherms.
    Finally, the reading passage believes the dinosaurs were endotherms due to the Haversian canals. On the other hand, the lecturer states dinosaurs also had growth ring, which recorded dinosaurs' growth rates. It indicates that dinosaurs had periods of rapid growth and periods of no growth in succession. If the dinosaurs were endotherms, they must have constant growth rates.

天薇凉UID: 3403940

平时写的和考场上情况也不一定一样。

考场上要不落细节至少要300+的字数吧。fair通常都是漏点了，据说只要漏一个点就fair了

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天薇凉 发表于 2013-8-29 16:59
平时写的和考场上情况也不一定一样。

考场上要不落细节至少要300+的字数吧。fair通常都是漏点了，据说只 ...

那么多？我一直以为最多225呢

廢墟裏的圖UID: 3384311

虽然我也是作文弱。但看过些范文..我觉得LZ的阅读部分比例过大了，阅读部分比例掌握在百分之10，基本上就是简单的一句话，与lecture扯上关系。而且LZ第一句话就将lecture与reading的地位摆在了一起。水平有限，只能说这些哈。

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廢墟裏的圖 发表于 2013-8-29 21:05
虽然我也是作文弱。但看过些范文..我觉得LZ的阅读部分比例过大了，阅读部分比例掌握在百分之10，基本上就是 ...

求范文名称，谢谢啦

廢墟裏的圖UID: 3384311

f1371342385 发表于 2013-8-29 21:07
求范文名称，谢谢啦

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1389824-1-1.html

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廢墟裏的圖 发表于 2013-8-29 21:49
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1542604-1-1.html

谢谢啦

Madao_SunUID: 3466498

LZ语法错误太多，主语、时态、单复数混乱，fair已经不错了

07mengxiUID: 2921034

表示托福作文的字数是the longer, the better，当然这是在逻辑清晰论点明确的基础上

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Madao_Sun 发表于 2013-8-30 09:25
LZ语法错误太多，主语、时态、单复数混乱，fair已经不错了

估计是这个原因，感谢指出