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发表于 2013-9-10 13:28:25 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
本帖来自"十月IBT",欢迎关注!你还可以查看更多小组创建小组
几个小小的词汇和句型也学就让你的作文和口语蓬荜生辉,让外国考官大呼过瘾。就让我们每天把自己的看到的,或者自己写出来的不错的句子搜集到这里吧,既可以互相学习借鉴,又可以让别人指出你表达中的不足。

    为了使本楼看起来干净漂亮,一切为了增加效率,制定以下规则,希望大家都能遵守:
1. 禁止废话贴,加油表决心做广告瞎扯淡的一切和本主题无关的就不要写了。字体尽量统一易读如Times new roman,不要看起来很花哨。
2. 争取原创性,自己写的最好,别网上随便找来的复制黏贴几下,除非真的很精彩。
3. 每楼不需要写太多,几个精彩的句子就够了,重要的消化吸收细水长流。把今天自己练习的好句子写下来就很好了。
4. 发布的时候用【】注明内容的主题,是有关什么话题的写清楚。比如写人物的、写计算机网络优缺点、写政府的还是写教育的等。
5. 如果纠正别人的表达法或者补充使之更加完美,先用红体字把原来的句子写一遍,再注明【修改】,用黑体字写出修改后的表达法。【补充】的注明补充楼层的位置。

写这么多,有其他建议的再补充完善。为了大家都能考个好成绩,加油哦,吼吼。

我先来个示范:
【有关互联网影响的表达法】
负面:

1. Computer contains some improper information which produces negative effects on students’ behaviors.

2. Some of students are obsessed with the computer so that is creates distractions.

3. Excessive use of computers poses a serious threat health of students.

正面:

1. Use of computers can help teachers and students broaden their horizons.

2. Commanding use of computer lays a solid foundation for students’ career development in the future.

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发表于 2013-9-11 21:42:11 |只看该作者
【教师的评价讨论】----前两句来自无老师作文巨讲堂的一期,无老师的东西还是很好的。

1. A more realistic and rational criterion to value teachers’ work should include factors such as comprehensive developments of students, teachers’ own capacity to cultivate and educate, and parents’ feedback.
   
2. students’ performance should not be abandoned but rather included along with other indispensable factors in evaluating teachers’ work, since school report is still among most parents’ top concerns and students have to use it as anchor when applying for further studies.

3. If students criticize their teachers, it will promote students’ interests and improve quality of instruction.

4.Students’ opinions may contain prejudice and interrupt normal teaching. Teachers may cater for students so that school will lose authority.

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发表于 2013-9-12 21:11:59 |只看该作者
【几句不错的开头背景】

1. we are now living in an age of revolution with no previous human experience that could be referred to.

2. Nowadays, XXX are getting popular among people because they are more _______ than _______. This trend has given rise to the discussion as to whether ______will substitute ______.

3. In spite of this, the obvious benefits of   XXXX   skills for young children cannot be denied.

4. Lately, the problem of XXX has been brought to popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.

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发表于 2013-9-13 10:32:29 |只看该作者
版主啊,请问口语需要强调思维的逻辑性吗?我比较疑惑

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发表于 2013-9-13 22:28:35 |只看该作者
景莱 发表于 2013-9-13 10:32
版主啊,请问口语需要强调思维的逻辑性吗?我比较疑惑

自己也困惑啊。
一个大牛的经验
ETS想要听到的是一个活生生的答案而不是死记硬背,口语1,2题当然可以事前准备,但是并不是说的越多越花俏越好,重点在于说时候所带的感情和语气,这也是为什么大家发现ETS给了一些口语示范说的那么烂仍然拿高分的原因,把问题说清楚明白,言之有理有据就OK了!至于3-6题,考察的不是我们记了多少笔记然后复述出来,而是通过阅读和听力我们提炼了什么重要内容,然后用自己的话表达出来


逻辑肯定要有的,内容和语音更重要吧。个人感觉

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发表于 2013-9-13 22:32:37 |只看该作者

【运动的好处】

1.It helps us clear the backlog, refresh our mind and keep our body in perfect condition.

2.It is widely acknowledged that a strong and healthy body tops the priority list for any person as a healthy body is the premise on which all other achievements are based.

3.Good health is a necessary prediction.

4.Sports activities have been proven to be the road to better health.

5.Many studies have shown that regular participation on in sports activities helps to maintain a person’s immune system in good condition and ward off possible diseases.

6.Alternate periods of study and sports time enhance our learning efficiency and allow us to produce better academic results.

7.Proper exercise helps us release our mental tension and enable us to go back to our studies with a refreshed and more active mind.

8.It teaches students to take care of their bodies, how to work as a team and give them a method of releasing tension and aggression.

9.Those who love sports are able to stay in shape, instead of being out weight.

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发表于 2013-9-16 09:15:47 |只看该作者
我頂一下這麽好的帖子,辛苦樓主了!!!!!

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发表于 2013-9-18 00:11:46 |只看该作者
【电脑电视的话题】
负面:
The influence of the movies and television on people’s behavior varies according to the movie or program itself. This is why movies in the United States have long had ratings to help guide parents as to which movies should not be seen by children.

Numerous studies have shown conclusively that watching violence in movies and on TV has led to an increase in violence in society, especially committed by young people.

Most cartoons, soap operas, or violent crime television shows are detrimental to a child’s development.

The radiation of a television or a computer or a computer is harmful to one’s physical health.

This sedentary lifestyle can lead to many diseases, such as myopia, obesity.

Being addicted in the Internet or computer games actually deteriorate interpersonal relationship.

正面:
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TV can provide some additional topics for communication among friends and families.
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It is too narrow to regard TV as one main reason to damage relationship among friends and families just because some people has spent a lot of time on it.
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Nature programs, documentaries and educational programming can expose us to a wide variety of useful information.
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Computers can access more reference materials and information that any group of books, and can retrieve up-to-the-minute information on any subjects.
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Many new methods of teaching rely on the computer, such as E-learning, further education.
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Giving students computers will also afford them the opportunities to become proficient at using the instrument of future.


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发表于 2013-9-19 22:41:27 |只看该作者
【远程教育的】
1. Educating students at home by using computers and televisions allows for much flexibility.

2.Smart students will be able to advance more quickly, and the slower ones can take more time to gain a deeper understanding of the material before moving on to the next lesson.

3. Traditional schools can no longer offer a safe and healthy educational environment.

4....Saves on transportation time, which can be better spent studying. Home based education is safer and it saves precious time money.

5. government could save a lot of money on teacher’s salaries and the cost of school facilities.

6. All students no matter what distraction they live in, will receive the same quality of instruction.

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发表于 2013-9-22 19:14:51 |只看该作者
【历史的重要性】
1. Learning can only take place if we make an association between things that have happened in the past and something we predict will happen in the future.

2. The great majority of technology today depends directly on several thousands of years of work of past thinkers.

3. Learning from and analyzing the past has enormous value for us and life as we know it on earth today would not be possible without the benefit of thousands of years of history and accumulated knowledge.

4. Such free thinking should be encouraged and, although not at the expense of past knowledge.

5.We need to make a break from the past and make a bold step into an unknown future.

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发表于 2013-9-25 21:12:41 |只看该作者
【互联网促进交流】

1. The knowledge will allow them to contribute to the progression of their society.

2. Similarly, the ability to consult different viewpoints, especially those diverging from their own, will allow people engage in meaningful dialogue with other citizens.

3. As a vehicle of communication, the Internet will connect people of the same interests and the same concerns.

4. Citizens will be encouraged to work together and they will become active participants of society rather than passive subjects.

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