独立写作中最后仅仅一个小让步，然后配结论是否合适？

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一直习惯是2个观点，然后结尾段一个小让步，最后出结论。

例如，关于Whether grandparents’ advice is useful to their grandchildren的题目，我的观点是有用，再写完两个观点之后最后一段为：

Of course, I would never go as far as to imply grandparents' advices are all useful. Their ideas, especially on technology, sometimes stayed put since the age they were young, thus being improper sometimes. Nonetheless, at least some parts of their advices, notably on how to be good person and their warnings on dangers, are still significantly useful to their grandchildren.

我想问啊，这样仅仅一个小让步，但没有足够时间和空间阐述清楚的观点，是否应该留。因为有可能会被认为观点阐述不充分。（话说，我第一次T的时候评分报告里就说，我有的观点阐述不够，或者和其他链接不够紧密，但我不确定是不是指的这个部分。）

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