小小德的作业贴(10.27)

DjocovicUID: 3414314

f26194572 发表于 2013-9-24 00:18
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很好很强大，学习了。
1. abroad的发音......who is major in ==>who major in

最后经常发现还有若干秒没东西了，所以总是很慌张，然后就开始顿了。。。

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楼主口语应该是我在寄托改过最NB的 考试说成这样至少28以上 简直和播音的一样== 佩服

T1 感觉内容上可以把study plan说的再详细一些 只说了一个顺序 似乎太简单了些

T2  good

T3 easily的发音似乎有点问题

T4 第一个例子第一句话  which is 换成which was

T5  第一句话 ...so that she ... 中间加个so that    最后一个分句没听清

T6  good

楼主的口语很难找出什么毛病~ 尤其是一二题 ~~

如果语调再多一些感情 会更好 加油！

lhm77499UID: 3420601

9.27
t1 赞发音，很棒！最后么诶有说完，有点可惜，不过不影响评分。不过这题要求说的是why this friend is special to you, I suggest you to focus on your poing of describing the characteristics of your frien Tom, such as considerate, warm, etc.  Details in your current response could be used
t2 Your main readon for holding your positon is vague in this response except the mention of people recalling The Great Wall in Beijng.  The previous discription seems irrevelant..
t3  the summary of the reading passage is great.  The summarizing of the listenig materials could be improved. Concerning your second reasons, the woman in the dialogue says that professor in other field could teach sculpture as well and it is not a bad idea.
t4 the concept is given clearly, good. The tiem management you have done well in this response.  it is overall good
t5 Your last point is not well supported, the woman said that she could not go to the lab hall in the day because of the noise so going to the lab in the morning could not be the solution
t6 The features you should particulaize further and this could make your response more perfect.

加油！

DjocovicUID: 3414314

lhm77499 发表于 2013-9-28 21:38
9.27
t1 赞发音，很棒！最后么诶有说完，有点可惜，不过不影响评分。不过这题要求说的是why this friend  ...

about task II here is a dicusssion
I personally think the morden buidings in big cities undermines the characters and uniqueness of a city. Such as the skyscrapers look the same that we connot figure out where we are. However, the old buidings, such as I illustrate about The Great Wall representing Beijing, they are the real symbols of a city.

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Djocovic 发表于 2013-9-28 21:46
about task II here is a dicusssion
I personally think the morden buidings in big cities undermine ...

ho, this is a good point!
besides, you could say that differences give fresh feeling and is a scenery of the city.  There is an arithematic issue concerning that.

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-9-28 21:53
ho, this is a good point!
besides, you could say that differences give fresh feeling and is a sce ...

then I'm not sure whether it is my presentation that is not clear or some other issues that makkes you confusing about it. Please state it directly that I could improve it in the future
THx

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Djocovic 发表于 2013-9-28 22:13
then I'm not sure whether it is my presentation that is not clear or some other issues that makk ...

加油！做个朋友吧！

南瓜cfUID: 3461424

1.however发音，LZ回听一下就知道了，多发了一个r的音
she provides me
my dream comes true.

2.觉得很好，真的要挑点毛病的话，我觉得可以说完观点再陈述理由，然后才是具体例子。
也就是Robin大神说的：
建议用以下的方式 Topic Sentence — Supporting Sentence — Example/details，也就是主题句+原因或者目的+细节的方式答题。

3.make the atmosphere more relaxing.
觉得LZ说阅读的时间略长了点，将近半分钟噢~

4.很好。就是有些谓语的单复数和过去时要注意一下，因为LZ有些句子挺长的，里面还有and并列，有时候and后面的谓语时态和单复数就可能忘记了，不知道这对判分影响大不大？

5.很好，最后有一点点可以不用说~

6.the price decreases
   other products in this company

LZ口语各个方面都超级棒，尤其是发音，太好听了！就是一些小问题比如he/she有时候会混，以及单三式和过去式问题，LZ注意一下就完美了~自己口语一直都没有长进，forever20...想向LZ学习去模读试试看！听到这么好听的口语就觉得自己还要好好加油呐，找到要努力的方向，谢谢LZ！

DjocovicUID: 3414314

南瓜cf 发表于 2013-9-29 21:50
1.however发音，LZ回听一下就知道了，多发了一个r的音
she provides me
my dream comes true.

感觉现在脑子一旦开始说，就是一种被动说的状态，缺乏那种积极思考的感觉，后面我会注意！
语法时态，我觉得跟我喜欢说长句的习惯有关系，有时候就忘了前面
也是一个硬伤吧

KickBessieUID: 3320808

啊啊小德……我马上去听你的……

mcl2012UID: 3401280

9.28
1、第二次说park的时候好像多加了个s
2、LZ说 how to cope with...的时候cope是不是多加了个东西
3、good
4、在说以"P"开头的动物名字那个地方内容上可以再完善一下
5、有一个地方应该是change their meet time 而不是joking time
6、内容上感觉跟原文有些出入，LZ可以再回听一下

LZ的发音感觉好纯正，加油

DjocovicUID: 3414314

mcl2012 发表于 2013-9-30 20:50
9.28
1、第二次说park的时候好像多加了个s
2、LZ说 how to cope with...的时候cope是不是多加了个东西

那个P我记笔记后面打死都没想起来是什么就想了一个panda

KickBessieUID: 3320808

9.29 来评
声音果然好好听，支持你拿满分
我觉得可以偶尔试试模拟考试……

1. 题目说要自己的good habit，所以建议在回答里面少说you 如何如何
2. 还是少说you...你回答的很全面，几乎挑不出问题，内容方面下次可以尝试用自己的例子，虽然有点lame，但看上去仿佛还是万能的
3. reading里面说的第二点，即收费，并不是做出更改的原因，而是学校做出更改的内容。这点要注意下。在阐述学生对于这个变化的理由时，第二个理由可以用让步的形式呈现。比如，even the students will be charge for a little, but considering the good meal, it's still cheaper than the restaurant.
4. 就很好
5. 反驳第一个理由时可以用原文的she does not practice recently. 不过这道题用自己的理由说也很好啦
6. 没问题

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annie1991713UID: 3382916

10.6
1 Describe a character in a book, film , or poem, explain why you like it.
额，语音语调绝对的极品啊，但是是不是把题目弄错了的说？？？character貌似是书中角色啊什么的说。。。
2 reasons最好是两个的说，比如lz 的这个例子除了可以说明自己对于teamwork的改变还可以适当说明自己变得成熟了，越来越融入社会的说，这样可能会更加饱满一些
3, 时间掌握得很好的说
4 额，lz总结得很好的说，最好最后能把这个例子体现出的culture lag 再强调一下会更好
5 额lz总结的很好，但是貌似dorm是on-campus的说，所以。。。
6 很全的说

DjocovicUID: 3414314

annie1991713 发表于 2013-10-8 09:17
10.6
1 Describe a character in a book, film , or poem, explain why you like it.
额，语音语调绝对的 ...

想了一下，谢谢你的指正
我第一反应是characteristic 唉，多谢你的提醒。我待会儿重新录一个，麻烦你再帮我看看行吗？