[口语小组]zyd8100作业贴（10.12）

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

some minor problems for task1:
1.the pronounciation of "place", which is behind "I like to study in a quiet place" should be rectified. But another "place" is pronounced well
2."study up later"? the sentence is not very clear
3. "who always talks with his friend" should replace "who always talked with"
4.there is a problem in pronounciation of "make"
5."who are interrupted" should replace "who was interrupted"

for task2:
1."and gives me a lot of help" should replace "give me a lot of help"
2."won"? I think the pronounciation is not clear
3."you are also the winner" should be replaced by "you were also the winner". there are some other sentences with the problem of past tense.
4.another unclear place is the sentence behind "your experience is a good ???"
after all, your answer is logical.
I have to a question to ask you for help.
How can I speak fluently? In order to finish my oral homework, I have to write down what I want to say in a paper and then I repeat the answers. Without the paper, I have to pause all the time, which is very terrible. Even though I have something in mind, I can not speak them out fluently and have to change the word. Could you help me?
（我现在每天的口语作业，都是先打下草稿我要怎么说，然后录音。一旦不打草稿，我就感觉表达不出来。感觉有很多话，不知道从何说起，如何表达）
谢谢

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

zyd, hello
2.14, happy!
I think you had better pay more attention to the problem of past intense. the answers are really very good, but some mistakes of tense worse your performance.
for task1
1."I have to go to" should be replaced by "had to go to"
2."I am very happy with" should be replaced by "was very happy with"

for task2
I think the task is completed very well. I really appreciate it.

after all, I think you are well done in the task 1, 2.
I want to know whether you have categorized the questions and prepared some material for these questions. Thanks

zyd8100UID: 3475286

bus- 发表于 2014-2-8 10:31
0206来啦~~楼主的发音好清晰，这个很赞！！
task1：robots finish so many ?楼主是说的tasks吗？发音感觉有 ...

谢谢，是tasks，我本来是准备发used的，因为是过去式，结果在嘴里没出来。。。就变得含糊了
实际上句法应该是I find (it) very terrible to可是我给漏了
经常音发的不准，音会在嘴里法不出来，说快的话。。。

zyd8100UID: 3475286

hj1313 发表于 2014-2-6 23:52
0204
1
famous 注意a发字母音/ei/以及尾音，不是 famos

版主没看见我的问题么~~再问一下吧~~，有一点疑惑，在练习中，我感觉自己和原来相比已经能够控制语速，使其变得更清晰，但还是觉得有时候几个单词会混在一起，或者发音不清楚。
这只是我发音的问题，还是我整个的accent有问题，还是我的语速和节奏控制的问题呢?
疑惑呀~

zyd8100UID: 3475286

bus- 发表于 2014-2-9 21:39
0208，楼主发音不太流畅啦~
task1：when I was?没听懂这个位置，get to/ə/gether,感觉听着像/u/，sta ...

task1. when I was 12 years old
task2. to from.. 是因为说的快了没反映过来，accelerate +speed的组合更好一点，per hour,最后竟然咬了嘴唇，本来是卷舌头的。没说完是留给大家无尽的遐想哈哈，，开玩笑
时态问题，有时候反应不过来，我会注意的~

hj1313UID: 3476105

zyd8100 发表于 2014-2-15 22:22
版主没看见我的问题么~~再问一下吧~~，有一点疑惑，在练习中，我感觉自己和原来相比已经能够控制语速，使 ...

不好意思，上次确实没看见。。
顺便又听了一下你215的第二题，game /ei/音，respect p要读成b， process重音在前，啥叫catch more important things? told发音 o‘pponent重音，partners er卷舌音，friendship注意发音清楚一点，全文注意统一过去式。
就语音这部分来说，你首先要做的是把发错的词纠正过来，元音不到位啊，重音发错啊，这些暂时是比较明显的问题。语速可以再适当提高，这个需要多练。至于你觉得“几个单词会混在一起”，暂时没有太明显的问题，但可以再多练练嘴皮子，多跟读练习连读，对语速也有帮助。
感觉出有进步就很好了，继续多练多说吧~

zyd8100UID: 3475286

caicaifish2013 发表于 2014-2-14 19:34
some minor problems for task1:
1.the pronounciation of "place", which is behind "I like to study in ...

task2:
yes,  the pronounciation of "won" is mistaken by me, which is similar to the word "one"
the unclear sentence is that "you experienced a good process of basketball games "
task1:
yes, the pronounciation of "place" is not correct
for the 2 problem, the sentence is that "stayed up late", there is a mistake that I give a wrong retroflection. So, you regard "late" as "later".

For this question,  I want to say, at first, I also needed to read paper, but it is not a good habit.
Then, I forced myself to repeat the words without seeing the paper. Each time, I would repeat several times, because the pauses are too many. After that, I selected  the best one to upload.
Further, I tried my best to decrease the number of repeating. At the same time, I wrote the good examples I use in the speaking and perfected them using the website http://www.pigai.org/,which I think is also benificial to your writing.
Also,  I think the website I recommand to you before is also helpful. It taught me to speak slowly and how to make proper pauses. I can use the pauses to think of the next sentences and the pauses are not strange.
Now, I could speak a little better.
So, just practice, use good examples and proper pauses.
I hope it is good for you.

初^渣渣儿UID: 3450004

楼主抱歉 我这两天事儿比较多 2.13日的口语我先给你听吧 自己的没来得及录

初^渣渣儿UID: 3450004

抱歉 2.13的评价来晚了
我觉得楼主的口语整体很好 内容连贯有逻辑 但有几处发音应该更注意下
T1 relationship的发音 roommate(应该是这个词吧) example  held发成了herd  issue的发音 because
T2 teacher him face 的发音注意一下
加油共勉！

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初^渣渣儿 发表于 2014-2-16 08:51
抱歉 2.13的评价来晚了
我觉得楼主的口语整体很好 内容连贯有逻辑 但有几处发音应该更注意下
T1 relation ...

多谢，我也给你评了，但你的录音很厉害，我找不到啥错误啊
额评错了。。。
你的评论很有用，多谢啦我确实这些词发音很有问题~~

zyd8100UID: 3475286

caicaifish2013 发表于 2014-2-15 14:43
zyd, hello
2.14, happy!
I think you had better pay more attention to the problem of past intense.  ...

I haven't  categorized the questions but I categorize my examples. Because for several questions, I might use the same example.

caicaifish2013UID: 3452799

zyd8100 发表于 2014-2-16 21:33
I haven't  categorized the questions but I categorize my examples. Because for several questions,  ...

could you share me the method in detail?或者共享下资料？thanks？

adrian小豆UID: 3395053

第一题：
内容上感觉还可以 但是稍微有点单薄 在丰富一下细节会更好
发音问题上，有些单词的发音不是很准确 use 重音放在前面；When I was little, 这个说法不太准确，你可以说： when i was young, 另外注意一下 when I 的连读 I was very shy有点中式英文，可以说 I was a shy boy.然后美语中can和can't 都不把not的T发出来 只是音调上有变化，这个可以多听一听，后面半段的链接不是很好，注意如果说错了，尽量别改，返回来再改会让整个语段断掉。

第二题：
parents 的en没有发出来 像是an，然后注意一下T P K结尾的单词辅音弱读，I don't know how to do这个用法感觉有一点不准，用I have no idea how to do比较好，米国人都这么用，partner的发音注意一下。
内容上面，可以在丰富一下，语速可以在提高一些，尽量说到100-110个字

havrlUID: 2814564

T1：always 没发好音，restaurant r音没发好。not only delicious but also cheap.其他不错。
T2：中间间隔太大，其实如果你开头说：if i finish the job earlier, i prefer to use the remaining time to do what i like, 这样就和后文比较挂钩了。最后没听清，sla???求解释。

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adrian小豆 发表于 2014-2-16 23:09
第一题：
内容上感觉还可以 但是稍微有点单薄 在丰富一下细节会更好
发音问题上，有些单词的发音不是很准 ...

谢谢，你的评价非常细致 2.15
task1：
细节不够多，可能需要重新组织一下这个例子
关于can't和can我专门听了一下，前者基本是升调，后者基本是平调
task2:
请问有没有推荐的教程来规范自己的发音呀，感觉自己就一直按照自己的套路在读，因为一直都是这样读，所以自己在回听的时候也不会意识到自己的错误。
感觉你一下就能听到我发音不对的地方。。。
谢谢你的建议。。