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[作文] 寄托写作互改小组(2013.07.15开始) [复制链接]

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发表于 2013-10-16 13:19:01 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who move out of their native village or town are  happier and more successful than those who stay in native village or town for all their life.

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发表于 2013-10-16 21:13:49 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who move out of their native village or town are  happier and more successful than those who stay in native village or town for all their life.

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发表于 2013-10-17 19:53:23 |显示全部楼层
改的有点晚了,有问题随时沟通哈。

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发表于 2013-10-17 22:58:14 |显示全部楼层
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TPO22 综合写作
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发表于 2013-10-17 23:04:21 |显示全部楼层
lsy0123 发表于 2013-10-17 19:53
改的有点晚了,有问题随时沟通哈。

感谢你的点评啊!我也觉得这篇文章写的时候太侧重一个方面了,确实是一个问题。
Due to the extreme weather recently, I caught a bad cough and went to see the doctor。
我再去看看你写的吧!

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发表于 2013-10-30 23:10:16 |显示全部楼层
感觉写的好好啊。。。瞬间觉得自己水平太挫了,赶紧加油练习。。。

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发表于 2014-2-21 18:14:13 |显示全部楼层
2.21题目
Task 1 Describe a family activity that you enjoy the most. Please explain why you enjoy this activity with specific examples and details.
Task 2 Do you prefer to carefully choose a gift which your friend like or buy whatever you like?
Task 3-6 TPO4

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