【口语小组】newswener作业贴（2014.1.18）求口语破25！！！

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请多指教！
我又来了~~~
尽管在申请季 但是还准备一月份再刷一次T，求口语破25！
请大家监督~ 狠拍砖！
请注意了！
直接点击链接，查看每天speaking~~~

1101
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1d2MfL

1102在后面的楼
1103
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kU1LS
1107
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1iSEQ6
谢谢大家的不吝赐教~感激不尽~

求尽量多拍砖

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Task 1 Describe your first day of school when you were young. Did you like it or not?
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Task 2 Some people think that modern technology has impacted our life negatively, while others think that it has improved our life. Which one do you agree and why?
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第一次做录音，超时了请见谅，求猛批！

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1.语音语速都很棒，但是有干扰，also后面一句没听清，但是感觉是说一些朋友让你逐渐适应了是吗？如果是的话，那就不应该用also吧，而且后面两句感觉就可以合成一句了，然后前面再说一下细节。
2.第一点理由有点儿怪啊……其他没什么问题，可以只说一点理由然后例子多说一点的

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yl499235070 发表于 2013-10-24 12:40
1.语音语速都很棒，但是有干扰，also后面一句没听清，但是感觉是说一些朋友让你逐渐适应了是吗？如果是的话 ...

谢谢yl点评，很到位！

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10.23题目
Task 1 Describe your first day of school when you were young. Did you like it or not?
Task 2 Some people think that modern technology has impacted our life negatively, while others think that it has improved our life. Which one do you agree and why?


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10.26题目  
Task 1 Which place is your favorite place when you were a child? Describe it and explain why you liked to go there.

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Task 2 Compared with science and math, the study of art and literature is not very important. Do you agree or disagree?
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10.26来啦！
语音很好！学习！
T1:有细节！很好！但是貌似少了很多时间呀。。
T2:literature发音不准。说了三点原因有点多啦，最后的总结也不必要啦。development之前的是啥？cover students‘ relax？楼主是录了很多遍的咩？很赶啊，语速这么快~

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Task 1 If you want to choose a place to live, what kind of location would you prefer and why? 1. A place close to school or workplace. 2. A place close to your home. 3. A place close to a transportation hub (airport or bus terminal, etc.).

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Task 2 Some people think the best way to study is attend a lecture. Others think that it's better to read by yourself. Which way do you prefer and why?

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Task 3-6 TPO4
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Task 6
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第一次练task3-6，觉得有点语无伦次的感觉。多拍砖。

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baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-28 11:03
10.26来啦！
语音很好！学习！
T1:有细节！很好！但是貌似少了很多时间呀。。

THANK YOU for your kindly revise!
也就录了两遍吧，主要是我平时语速一直很快，说话比较赶。
但是有不好的地方就是容易重复，因为脑子跟不上嘴的速度。

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10.29   既然楼主说了，我就拍了！
T1: 楼主还是很有条理——"I occur to have some problems", 貌似没有这种用法呀。还是强烈建议说一个列子吧，让语言丰满些，多一些细节，那样可以显示出你的语言驾驭能力。
T2: 时间超了。"I prefer the best way "和我问题一样啊。。展开细节比如说，老师以前什么样的经历啊，让我们对“currency， stock”很抽象的概念有了崭新的理解。
T3：总起很好，“load”用的不错。有些地方不清晰，“the woman student？句式还可以多一些变化，逻辑不总是“more importantly”，‘’on the other hand, besides ” will improve the coherence.
T4: 超时了.没有总起说概念啊.“unexpectedly” "nonverbal signals "。太细节了。。。列子要精简，“nonverbal signals” 总的作用一定要说清楚啊，“communicate as much or even more than words”!
T5: "he do not remember he leave the schedule", not clear enough.后面的建议nice。
T6:  “evoke” good."rough emotion“ not clear enough, 最后也"wild and chaotic" does not equal to strong feelings.
楼主似乎只录了一遍啊，可以多说几遍，看看TPO的sample，那里面用词很好的！
加油！

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摘星 发表于 2013-10-30 13:17
10.29   既然楼主说了，我就拍了！
T1: 楼主还是很有条理——"I occur to have some problems", 貌似没有这 ...

Thank you for your detailed revise!
I actually recorded twice for task 1-4, once for task 5 and 6.
I saw the sample of TPO afterwards. But the reason why I didn't use their words and their thoughts is that I want to test my real oral English, not to copy TPO Sample' answers directly.
I really appreciated for your criticizing on my speaking. I think they are quite precious for me and I will improve my speaking according to your advice.
Hope we can both succeed in the TOEFL exam!

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Task 3-Task 6
http://pan.baidu.com/disk/home#dir/path=%2F1030%20Speaking
我的TASK3-TASK 6是完全按照考试模式做的，所以有很多磕绊，我自己听了之后都想狠抽自己。但是想看下真实水平如何，还请版主给出宝贵意见！

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.30
楼主好，楼主的内容是很丰富的~就是发音听起来有点累，是北方的小朋友咩？
T1:cafeteria，food的发音。语法很到位，然后用词也很讲究，切入点也不错！内容点赞！
T2:spirit，development，success的发音。很多词听不懂TAT，给我自己的词汇跪了。。说到了chicago的museum和Obama，内容很棒！

3-6文件夹点开又空了？楼主看一下呗~到时候再来喊我呀~！

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baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-31 14:53
10.30
楼主好，楼主的内容是很丰富的~就是发音听起来有点累，是北方的小朋友咩？
T1:cafeteria，food的发 ...

http://pan.baidu.com/disk/home#dir/path=%2F1030%20Speaking
再试一次，空的？不是吧...我看的是好好的~
对啊，我是北方妹纸==发音很捉急是不，哎有什么好的练语音方法吗？我正在跟读TPO听力。
单词有humiliation，emergence
还有pesticides和fertilizers
这两道题我是找了之前写过的两篇paper套进去的，可能太学术了一点。

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Task1
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Task 5Task 6

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