Task1 : tasks that is very hard for human
there were many robots.
I didn't quit understand why.
Task2 : 我觉得lz第一题说的不太清楚。 你应该加一点 through reducing the score, students can be more motivated..
语法方面: but some student, just like me, when I was in.. 我觉得这句不怎么对 但是也不知道怎么改
3.2
Task 1:came→come,relax→relaxed,
最后可以再强调一下对它的喜爱,比如最后一句可以稍微改动下,It's a private and quiet world that belongs only to me.I really enjoy staying in it.这样子。。
Task 2:improve their lifestyle这个搭配感觉有点怪的。。
project→projects,,distance→distant,,
流畅性和连贯性要稍微加强一下~~
3.6
Task 1:pizza的发音[ˈpitsə]后面不是sa(萨)应该接近于ce(扯)的音。。
They are bored about不是boring,
最后最好加个结句:So I think adding pizza to the cafeteria can meet their needs and thus attract more students.例子不错~
Task 2:important中间por的发音有点像pa,,They would stay with me的would用could感觉好些,其他的都可以~发音也挺好的
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T1:
1.题目是attract more students. 希望稍微带一句。
2.最后expensive, 你没有展开说说。中间那些his name is ...这些可以去掉。用连词会更好。
T2.
1. LAST 发错音
2. i want 是 wanted
3.你的例子都很好,如果能够花费一些时间在你为么喜欢family members 上会更优秀。
t1
definitely 、brother不太听得清发音
impact on people's ???不太听得清发音
elder sister, brother, to learn about (to) the information of diseases全家都是医生?!
great doctor 伟大的医生?? expert or professor
t2语音,语调都挺好的,听得很清楚
单独用一个on one hand好像不是很好,书面语是这样,口语不太清楚
最后那个treat sb well 听上去觉得挺不地道的,建议换种说法,
或者说成high salary 带给他们怎样的生活