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[i习作temp] 第一篇issue,3月29日考试 [复制链接]

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发表于 2014-1-20 16:47:55 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
今天第一次写作文,乱七八糟的书已经看了很多,想了一个下午了,还是不满意,不管怎么样,今天是一个开始。希望大家多多指正。
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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems,the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Answer:
Technology is one of the key words of our time.Undoubtedly,it makes our lives more conveniet and comfortable.While I concede that we lack some experience  and practice in some areas due to reliance on technology,I believe technology is just a tool created by man in order that he can make a better judgment ,as in  analysis of the stock market and dignosis of illness.Apart from this,the ability of aesthetic,which surely involve thinking,can't be fulfilled by any other creature,let alone technology,than humanbeings.

      Admitedly,we lack the relevant ability in certain areas due to use of technology.For example, by use of GPS,we don't need to remember the way to some places,hence our ability to remember the way is not as good as before.As we go about our businesses more and more via computer,we lack the practice of writing,our calligraphy is not as beautiful as before.
       However,compared with gains we get from technology,these losses are negligible.Considering investment in the stock market, we use computers and various analytical tools,such as K line to evaluate some stocks.But all these can provide are just some information upon which we have to analyse and make a decision.Also in the dignoses of illness,we rely on technological tools,such as X-ray,to have a more clear view,but it is doctors who have to analythe the result given by these tools and make a prescribtion.So we just rely on tools to make our judgment by ourselves.
  
      Furthermore,the aesthetical level of human can only achieved by human themselves.We do rely on technology to creat arts in certain area,such as architecture,still technology is just a tool.Our ability to creat,appreciate arts is not affected by technology,since we don't rely on them at all.
     
      In sum,technology does make some of humans' abilities unnecessery ,even obsolete.However,as a tool of human,technology can't think and make judgment for human.And at the aesthetical level,humans don't rely on technology to appreciate arts.

写的很烂,语言、论证都很差,作为一个开始,先传上来,请大家批评。
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