有要改文章的同学快快来哦

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版面新开 大家趁人还没多起来快快来哦。
有贴必回 。。。
本版欢迎各类型文章 题材不限 考试类型不限

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作文版给你转几个过来如何?:)

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欢迎 但是我不要argument 乏味

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绝对支持chicagochen！

西西，那我不客气了，转几个ISSUE过来咯！

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[B]那你的 英语写作水平 肯定很高哦。
是那个外语学院的教授吗？不然，“没有金刚钻，不揽瓷器活”。改天希望能够得到你的指点。

赫赫。。。[/B]

我不喜欢你说话的口气

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i only mean to be of help.
Proffesionals are most needed, but a proffesional out of your reach means nothing to you.

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chen 偶支持你！！

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最初由 wyhbob 发布
[B]那你的 英语写作水平 肯定很高哦。
是那个外语学院的教授吗？不然，“没有金刚钻，不揽瓷器活”。改天希望能够得到你的指点。

赫赫。。。

Enjoy the life! [/B]

你没有必要这么说吧？我们所能做的只不过是给大家一些写作上的建议和素材罢了，至于改也不只局限于一个人的修改意见，任何人的修改意见都是欢迎的，照你那么说，外语学院的老教授都来改文章，我想论坛大概就要开始收费了吧？！我们只是做力所能及的。

另外，偶尔请个外语学院的教授来改个别文章是可以实现的，但是正如Chen所说的那样，如果被修改的同学的水平不足够高的话，就算请教授来改也没有任何效果！

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请多指点哦。

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50． Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and risk.

There’re more and more people in preference of tasting new things and taking risks in their limited life time. So many people want to change their fixed life style after daily boring work. I need more exciting challenge to keep my mind filled with new ideas and opinions.

Trying new things and take risk provide people with challenge, chance and experience. Though barriers, risk and wrong direction always block the way to our aims, the process of exploring the world out of our eyes commands us with. That’s the sense I just stick to.

As the Nick said, “Just do it”, the watchword contains a lot of meanings. I like TV show very much, but I didn’t have any formal performance training and was lack of experience. I decided to study further in Beijing Broadcast College, the best broadcast college in china, after I graduated. I went Beijing alone to have interview while my classmates was studying in school. I was so nervous that I couldn’t control my figures and made more than 3 times during I play flute in the interview. I was very depressed and ask the interviewer allowed me play again. Then I complete the song very fluently without nervous. I appreciated to the interviewer give me chance again, which rebuilt my confidence at that time ever further. I regretted I can’t enter the college with the lower special score, but I never regretted to have at try. It was a lose interview but a successful evidence to my dream in my life.

Sometimes, lacking experience is the excuse we throw to ourselves. We should open our eyes to the colorful world, learn to distinct the lure and chance. You will find you are wiser than before.

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