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Issue 147
The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.        
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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如有异议，我们一起讨论~

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楼主作文太强了啊~只看出一个句号应为逗号，还有最后一个have得用has，像楼主学习啊~

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bobzhang1991 发表于 2014-2-17 19:01
楼主作文太强了啊~只看出一个句号应为逗号，还有最后一个have得用has，像楼主学习啊~

嘿嘿……还是有值得修改的地方的~欢迎不吝赐教~

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tbic2012 发表于 2014-2-17 14:20
如有异议，我们一起讨论~

感谢你的认真评论。我也仔细看过了。在此我补充解释一下我的观点。

关于批评：
确实，无论是开头段还是论证中，我好像都缺少了一锤定音的那样一句话。以及最终为什么这样的话就能论证。
关于争议：
我的解释是，人民的生活水平是执政水平的政治来源和客观目标。二者紧密相连，不可分割。甚至可以得出充要关系。所以可以拿来作为评判的标准。但是是不是最好的还有待商榷。综上我真正的态度是比较支持。但不完全支持。
一个小问题是，effectiveness是客观的一个标准，包括effective和ineffective。Effective对应happy的well-being, ineffective对应not。而无论怎样，effectiveness和well-being的状态都是对应的。

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2nd-Augument2

Argument 2
The following appeared as part of a letter to the editor of a scientific journal.        
A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys produce up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol, which primes the body for increased activity levels, as do their younger siblings. Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situations (such as the return of a parent after an absence). The study also found that during pregnancy, first-time mother monkeys had higher levels of cortisol than did those who had had several offspring.        
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.

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3th-argument 108
The following appeared in a memo from the owner of a chain of cheese stores located throughout the United States.
"For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses. Last year, however, all of the five best-selling cheeses at our newest store were domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin. Furthermore, a recent survey by Cheeses of the World magazine indicates an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its subscribers. Since our company can reduce expenses by limiting inventory, the best way to improve profits in all of our stores is to discontinue stocking many of our varieties of imported cheese and concentrate primarily on domestic cheeses."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

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GTNOOBIE 发表于 2014-3-1 00:07
3th-argument 108
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