[美国&加拿大] 求爱不成反杯具 UW表白失败爱在心头怎开口？PS: UMN小伙伴夏天见！ [复制链接]

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听到@maorongjlu 大叔说UW开始offer的帖子后，经过一个星期焦躁的等待，实在耐不住性子，主动向女生UW写了表白信。结果....

女神发了好人卡！！！在此和同样申请UW的童鞋分享下信息，希望还在等待的小伙伴们能有好的结果！顺便再求教下求爱信该怎么写？我的求爱信里是不是有什么明显不合适的地方（忽略我那渣英语，都没好好检查语法...）？

我的求爱信：
Dear Jennifer,

Thank you for reading this email.
I am an international applicant who is applying for your LL.M. program (global business law track). My application ID is 512XXX.

It has been one month since my last email.  An excruciating wait for the good news from UW School of Law may feel like one year.  :-D

I know the saying  that " Good things do come to those who wait", and  I also  heard that the second half of this saying is "but only the things left behind by those who hustle" So I am writing to you to show my continuing interest in UW School of Law, as well as my determination on it.

UW is my dream school and on the top of all the school I applied to. Seattle is the most attractive city to me where I want to be.  The coffee from the oldest Starbucks, the new champion Seattle Seahawks, the beautiful Elliott Bay and the Pike Place Market ...... all of them land a spot in my heart. Although I was granted to be admitted  by U of Minnesota with a $17,500 scholarship, my love for Seattle inclines me to UW School of Law.

1. One of my friends told me that she received the admission letter of UW School of Law one week ago, however, good things have not yet happened to me. I wonder if I was still in the waiting list for yours admission, or I am no longer part of your plan for Fall 2014 ll.m program?  ( Oh...no...)

2.Although I only applied for ll.m in the Global Business Law Track, I hope you understand that I don't mind being adjusted to the General Law  Track  when if there are some  places of that track for me.  I am clear that entry is very competitive and it's based on each candidates' merits, but I don't want to give up any chance to be admitted.

Thanks again for your reading!  Have a nice day!
Sincerely,

XXX

女神的好人卡
Dear Mr. xxx,

Thank you for your application to the LL.M. program in Global Business Law.  Your file has been carefully reviewed by our admissions committee.  We had a large number of strongly qualified applicants this year, and the selection process was quite competitive.  I regret to say our program is full and we are unable to accept you into our program this year.

I realize that this outcome is disappointing, but I do thank you for the time and effort you invested into applying to our program, as we recognize that expenditures of money and time to do so can be considerable.  We wish you well in your future educational endeavors. Congratulations on your scholarship to the University of Minnesota.

Sincerely,
Mie Murazumi
Associate Director, Asian Law Center

PS：虽然，杯具了。但未来多了一份确定，后申请季的事情可以一件件安排起来。掌握对生活的主动权，让人心情明亮。最后同样决定去UMN的小伙伴们联系起来吧~~~

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