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It is obvious that academic disciplines have become highly specialized in recent years, which seems to mean (seem,mean有些重复)that scholars will pay more and more attention to their own field and lose many audience than before, and in consequence, their ideas will be less useful than expected. But in fact, specialization is not equal to isolation, it will not diminish the influence of scholars’ ideas and (their) research achievements, moreover, it can bring(改为infuse之类的词是否能形象些?) new vigor to the whole science circles.
First of all, there is no need for the public to understand the abstruse academic knowledge just for taking advantage of the academic outcomes. Take penicillin, one kind of most popular antibiotics, as an example,(把举例和具体描述拆成两句话吧。) it has saved millions of people’s life since(it was) found by Sir Alexander Fleming, notwithstanding its function mechanism and productive procedure is unfamiliar to the public. And also, we can enjoy TV programs without knowing how the little box is made up, chat with friends through internet disregarding why the information can be transmitted so quickly, drive cars wherever we want to go if only we know where the accelerator and brake lies. Accordingly, as an ordinary people, it is enough for him to know that there are many modern science and technology outcomes and then use them conveniently.
题目说得是scholar,第一段怎么变成很多ordinary people的举例了?不妨就照一个青霉素的点展开写写。
In addition, each specialized subject can amplify its influence to the whole academic circles and people’s lives through the interaction and communication with others. No idea can advance singly, hence many branches of learning interact with each other more and more thoroughly, which impels the development of many different realms of science and technology, and also the emerging of many new interdisciplinary subjects such as Bioinformatics, Biochemistry, Biophysics and so on.(前面加上,以生物学为例) These novelties bring new vim to the whole academic circles and lead to even more up-to-date ideas, and then push the development of both the whole science and technology and each single branch unceasingly. From this point, a single idea may reach only a narrow audience, but when it meets with other ideas and is integrated with others, its audience becomes wider and wider. (我想说:通过学科之间的交叉,单个学科,单个思想的影响被放大了。)
However, it is really need(词性) for some scholars to convey their ideas to the public in some certain fields. Take medical science as an example, if people have some simple knowledge of it, they may avoid many dispensable diseases, such as infection caused by bad health habits, myopia owing to excessively usage of eyes without proper rest, some pulmonary diseases as a result of smoking, and so on. Thus, in such fields, it is required for scholars to propagate their ideas to the public, by means of simplifying and universalizing their theories to the standard that can be accepted by ordinary people. Admittedly, the more abstruse the idea is, the narrower the audience it can reach, so the scholars have no choice but to simplify again and again.
All in a word, specialization is the (a或者one of) definite tendency of modern academic research, and the interaction of each branch of science and technology is surely another liability, thus every valuable idea can certainly be developed both in depth and width and accepted by more and more audience. It is unnecessary to worry about whether ideas can reach enough audience or not, not to mention their contribution to the society.
改过之后好多了。嗯,感觉你的定冠词用法有些问题,不过我也一样。
大致改了一下,语言很顺畅,观点很明确。继续加油! |
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