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I generally agree with the speaker on the assertion that the problems encountered by people nowadays are more complicated and challenging. Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think (前面已经有了in my point of view) it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through increasing knowledge and experience.
With the development of the society, problems people confront are more complex than ever, as a consequence of knowledge accumulating and technology advancing. Problems could be divided into two kinds. On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment(可删) pollution. As we know, many severe environment damages produced by our predecessors who were unconsciousness(unconscious) of the threats resulted from deteriorated(可以换成aggravated 避免重复) environments. Consequently, what we confront currently is to resolve these problems, for instance, protecting and amending the balance of ecosystem, repairing the ozonosphere and avoiding it further being destroyed, and so on. On the other hand, some problems that appear currently are more complex in that the social situation becomes complicated. Globalization, as an inevitable trend, brings many questions about it. It is a fact that some countries’ sovereignty are harmed and some economic benefits are lost, especially some developing countries, while others, developed countries, such as america and west europe countries, gain most benefits, inducing a drastic discussion about whether globalization should be further promoted. On the contrary, the relationship among countries, some poor countries were controlled by developed countries, was simple and manageable in the past. Therefore, problems we confront today are more complex than ever.
一个问题: 前人制造的问题,还是当代出现的问题,不都是我们目前要面对的吗(problems we confront today)??而且除了举例以外你并没有证明为什么more complicated
What is more, problems also become more challenging today. Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy, followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area. For example, people were just satisfied with dress warmly and ear one's fill in past time, while (now) what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments.(not only....but also 用的很勉强 我估计可能是先想到这个句式在去想意思怎么表达) Also, the dream of traveling the earth is another challenging tasks. As for the medicine, many diseases could not be cured now, such as AIDS, then seeking the way to solve them are so appealing to many scientists.
Although there are so many complex and challenging tasks, all these difficulties could be solved with the increasing knowledge and experience. Some environment problems, such as sewage and greenhouse effect, are partly solved by advanced equipment. The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members. The dreams of exploring universe, as written(once appeared) in fairy tales, are gaining some breakthrough [U]along with getting attention as a challenge in recent years[/U] (可不要). With the space airplane first landed in the moon, a new prelude for human challenge universe opening(为什么是opening?).
To sum up, although the problems we meet nowadays are truly more complex and challenging than ever, they could be solved through accumulating knowledge and experience.(开头的简单重复 不好) |
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