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1。A rugged, ultra-sleek profile from Citizen... striking contemporary men's watch is masculine and appealing in brushed and polished steel. Contoured brushed steel case is fully integrated into the comfortable brushed and polished steel link bracelet. Stationary steel bezel with engraved markers frames the attractive blue dial with luminous hands and hour markers.

Citizen那种粗矿的，超柔滑的造型…迎合了现代人需求的那种阳刚气的手表，其打磨刨亮的钢制品有一定的吸引力。 勾划出来的打磨钢制表框，完全整合到了这种美观的，被打磨、刨亮的钢制连接手镯中。 坚固的钢制的嵌玻璃与雕着的刻度构成了与发亮指针和时针为一体的漂亮蓝色表盘。


2．Striking lines for today's man from Citizen... casual contemporary men's watch is sleek and urbane in stainless steel and polished gold plate. Comfortable brushed steel case is presented on the attractive satin finished steel bracelet with gold plated highlights. Stationary brushed steel bezel is accented with gold plated highlights and engraved markers. Attractive black dial with luminous hands and hour markers.

Citizen突出的线条设计方面...现代人的手表那种不锈钢，磨光的金制表盘，会显得柔滑而文雅。 美观的打磨钢制表框呈现在迷人的缎子上，它将代替在主要部分镀金的钢手镯。 坚固的打磨钢制的嵌玻璃强调在主要部分和刻度镀金。 漂亮的黑色表盘与发亮指针和时针为一体。


3. Up-to-the-minute style matched to the very latest technology...Citizen Eco-Drive men's watch is sleek and appealing in brushed and polished steel. Outstanding watch is powered by the sun or any other light source...and will never require a new battery. Handsome brushed and polished steel case is presented on the highly attractive link bracelet in brushed and polished steel. Raised and polished steel bezel frames the tone-on-tone white dial with luminous hands and baton hour markers. Fluted steel crown adds distinction.

最新体裁配合最新技术…Citizen的环保型表，非常柔滑发亮，其打磨刨亮的钢制品有一定的吸引力。 出色的表是用阳光或者任何其他光源为其提供动力，而绝不会需要一个新电池。 美观大方的，被打磨刨亮的钢制表框，呈现于被打磨刨亮的，非常漂亮的链环手镯上面。 有凸起花纹的打磨钢制嵌玻璃构成了这种色调与色调之间协调，与发光指针和时针为一体的白色表盘。长笛般的钢制王冠更加显得表的高贵堂皇。.

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