【寄托八月组】作文互改7.13 - I38A14

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Issue 38

It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.


Argument 14

The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine.

"A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep the executives need and the success of their firms. Of the advertising firms studied, those whose executives reported needing no more than 6 hours of sleep per night had higher profit margins and faster growth. These results suggest that if a business wants to prosper, it should hire only people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night."

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

占座ddl：713 24:00； 写作互评ddl：714 24:00

kathykathy~~~UID: 3487910

占座

xusen808UID: 3510116

占座，有事停了几天，现在要写了

先写一遍，明天+1

echohohoUID: 3237345

占座！

issue真的好难写啊
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mihuechoUID: 3382382

占座~

太心塞了 电脑崩溃了三次

两次都是写差不多结束了 写好的东西就没了 修到现在。。。

来传个 argument 感觉一版不如一版。。。 argument 14 by mihuecho.doc (13.38 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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明天补上issue

电脑好了 issue来了 写的很不好 不知道如何下手 写的干巴巴 还超时了。。。
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蜜与奶罐头UID: 3109467

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批改：
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vhaijiaovUID: 3002864

占座

hj1313UID: 3476105

vhaijiaov 发表于 2014-7-14 11:55
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今天先帮你分上了 下次记得出题当天占座哈~

vhaijiaovUID: 3002864

hj1313 发表于 2014-7-14 12:45
今天先帮你分上了 下次记得出题当天占座哈~

谢谢！记住啦~~

vhaijiaovUID: 3002864

传到这里来啦。处于起步阶段的文章~~

vhaijiaovUID: 3002864

蜜与奶罐头 发表于 2014-7-13 22:44
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我的作文来楼上，等待你的文章哦~

kathykathy~~~UID: 3487910

xusen808 发表于 2014-7-13 12:17
占座，有事停了几天，现在要写了

先写一遍，明天+1

已经发了一篇，在单独的楼里，求批改~

kathykathy~~~UID: 3487910

issue 好难啊

echohohoUID: 3237345

改好了argument!
mihuecho 电脑崩溃真是抓狂...明天再加油吧！

vhaijiaovUID: 3002864

mihuecho 发表于 2014-7-13 17:53
占座~

太心塞了 电脑崩溃了三次

亲，看了你的arg，感觉写的挺好的，找到了两个小错误。回传给你。