【寄托八月组】作文互改7.15 - I39A34（已更新分组）

hj1313UID: 3476105

题目采用AW高频。（参加八月组：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1496041-1-1.html）

八月组每两天一次小组作业互评。参加互改鼓励不强制，请量力而行，保证写作和互评质量。

当日12:00之前会公布题目，如需要参加互改的请在出题当晚24:00之前占座，方便帮大家分好进行互评的组；出题次日来顶楼看互评分组信息，24:00之前完成写作和互评，将作文以附件形式传至你的占座楼层并附上方便大家讨论的大纲总结，回复互评伙伴楼层完成互评，或者可与互评伙伴协调好互评时间。欢迎在楼内各种讨论分享，秉承小组共享互助宗旨，有想拖延放鸽子的心思请小心~

分组信息：
realtotti互改VampireYI
vhaijiaov互改蓝白之际
存心荷福互改foxy1988

Issue 39

College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Argument 34

The vice president of human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company's president.

"In an effort to improve our employees' productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees' Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. By installing software to detect employees' Internet use on company computers, we can prevent employees from wasting time, foster a better work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overall profits."

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

占座ddl：715 24:00； 写作互评ddl：716 24:00

realtottiUID: 3515955

第一次写ISSUE，写了一个小时，效率真的很低，希望大家指正不足，我脸皮真的很厚，我也会坚持，多谢。

由于时间关系，我只会在GTER上练习issue，不过我会帮看argument的，希望大家多多包涵，多谢！

努力，加油！

VampireYIUID: 3317168

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互改分组还没出么？

vhaijiaovUID: 3002864

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先传一篇写好的argument
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argument34

kathykathy~~~UID: 3487910

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mihuechoUID: 3382382

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蓝白之际UID: 3450391

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写了好久。。这样太慢了。。可是快不起来，有什么提速的方法么？

果果大人UID: 3542675

写的太渣，不好意思传了。。。

存心荷福UID: 3083742

占座... 前两天出差了，整整一周末外加周四周五啥也没干，罪恶感啊~~~

先交个issue，下午再站argument issue 39 存心荷福.docx (142.1 KB, 下载次数: 6)

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蜜与奶罐头UID: 3109467

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蓝白之际UID: 3450391

vhaijiaov 发表于 2014-7-14 20:18
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先传一篇写好的argument

有在原文上修改的，有用括号框起来的。。另，纯属个人意见，有则采纳，不同就忽视吧

蓝白之际UID: 3450391

VampireYI 发表于 2014-7-14 19:15
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互改分组还没出么？

暂时就改个 ARGU   argument34_VampireYI.docx (15.04 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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mihuechoUID: 3382382

版主。。。分组名单木有我。。。

小硕鼠UID: 3411565

今天晚上本次活动就结束了，你没写文章我怎么给你分，等明天的新题吧。