【寄托八月组】作文互改7.23-7.24 - I104A4（已更新分组信息）

小硕鼠UID：3411565

题目采用AW高频。（参加八月组：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1496041-1-1.html）

八月组每两天一次小组作业互评。参加互改鼓励不强制，请量力而行，保证写作和互评质量。

时间说明：7.23晚23点结束占座，并且用附件上传自己的习作，并附上方便大家讨论的大纲总结，回复互评伙伴楼层完成互评，7.24早上来看分组信息，请注意，如果只占座不上传习作，我会把上传习作的分组，未上传的分组。或者可与互评伙伴协调好互评时间。欢迎在楼内各种讨论分享，秉承小组共享互助宗旨，有拖延不改的欢迎发帖或私信举报。

分组信息：
VampireYI与kathykathy~~~互批习作
echohoho批改蜜与奶罐头的习作
蜜与奶罐头批改lazycatherine的习作
lazycatherine批改longlongblack的习作
longlongblack批改echohoho的习作

104) To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

4) The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.
Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

占座ddl：7.23晚23点 互评ddl：7.24晚24点

VampireYIUID：3317168

占座

longlongblackUID：3263103

Take seat. I will upload my writings at night after work

lazycatherineUID：3494443

占座！我要克服作文恐惧症~
Issue在保存的时候没注意消失鸟：（

蜜与奶罐头UID：3109467

修改：

kathykathy~~~UID：3487910

先占座，习作稍后上传

echohohoUID：3237345

占座！

小硕鼠UID：3411565

lazycatherine 发表于 2014-7-23 08:14
占座！我要克服作文恐惧症~
Issue在保存的时候没注意消失鸟：（

赶紧传上来！

longlongblackUID：3263103

echohoho 发表于 2014-7-24 01:33
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谢谢你上次帮我改作文，上次我的issue里有这样一句话：As mentioned that society is composed of individuals, individual, on the other hand, is controlled, to some extent, by the society. 其实是有主语的，那个individual就是主语，不过我写的不好，插入语太多了让你看不清楚。

再次谢谢你，提的建议都很好，我有差不多4,5年没写文章了，思路不够清晰，文章结构混乱，多亏你提出来，我才能好好纠正！

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VampireYI 发表于 2014-7-23 01:23
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你写的好棒啊~没有需要改的呢…好厉害好厉害，我要学习！

echohohoUID：3237345

蜜与奶罐头 发表于 2014-7-23 09:34
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都改好了～共勉！

VampireYIUID：3317168

kathykathy~~~ 发表于 2014-7-24 10:43
你写的好棒啊~没有需要改的呢…好厉害好厉害，我要学习！

issue这么晚不好意思，都帮忙改下，里面问题应该挺多的，而且我30分钟根本完不成。
你的晚上改好传上

VampireYIUID：3317168

kathykathy~~~ 发表于 2014-7-23 18:15
先占座，习作稍后上传

写得很好啊，几乎没改只有小错误，而且居然只用了25min, 怎么做到的呀？

蜜与奶罐头UID：3109467

lazycatherine 发表于 2014-7-23 08:14
占座！我要克服作文恐惧症~
Issue在保存的时候没注意消失鸟：（

改过了 挺不错的

longlongblackUID：3263103

echohoho 发表于 2014-7-24 01:33
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作文改好了，嘿嘿^_^